hello people well this is the story i was talking about on the other story i hope you guys like this one i really tried on this one the other one i didnt really try well enjoy

i dont own soul eater

Maka POV

"Hey papa I'm done packing "
"Ok my lovely maka ill help you take the stuff to the car."
'Well as you can see I am moving far away from my hometown I lived in a small town but I guess we are moving to a big city I've never known how it felt like to live in a big city luckily summer just started and school was over cant wait although ill admit I will miss this place I had a lot if good memories of my mom and more but seemed like I have to let go'
Well before I leave I have to say good bye to my friends jacky and Luna and a my boyfriend Donny I will miss him I hope a long distant relationship works out.
"Maka ima miss you so much" Luna said she is a very big sweet heart
"I'll miss you too." I gave her a big hug
"DONT LEAVE ME PLEASE MAKA I WILL DIE IF YOU LEAVE!" Jacky said she is a crazy person she goes very wild
"Calm down you can visit me or I can visit you so calm down honey." I hugged her I tried to get out of the hug but she wouldn't let go so I only had one thing to do
"MAKA..."
"Wait maka ill let go just do-"
"CHOP"
Jacky grabbed her head and fell to the floor in pain I laughed
"Maka ill miss you call me text me anything so we can keep in touch okay?"Donny said
"I will try ok , ima miss you so much."
"Maka I - I lo-" he was interrupted by the loud honking
"Oh I have to go my dad is honking like a maniac bye guys ill miss you."
She ran to Donny and gave him a kiss on the cheek and left. The car started and she started to wave good bye and the others did too.

Finally after 1 whole they made it to to death city it was bigger than maka imagined they made it to the house it wasn't to big but the right size her living room already had the furniture because her dad had some movers brought the stuff a day a head of us all she brought was her clothes she went in her room and it was bigger than her other one.

She finally finished unpacking the rest of the stuff she was exhausted but she still wanted to explore the city
"Hey papa can I go out and check out the city."
"Don't you think it's to dangerous."
"Aww come on papa"
"FINE OKAY ANY THING FOR MY BEAUTIFUL MAKA."
Maka still didn't really like her papa he cheated on his own wife ugh so then they got divorced and her mom left them and went traveling around the world she asked her mom if she can go but she said no because she wanted her to go to school and graduate from school and succeed
" be carefully ok make sure you call your wonderful papa If your in danger ok."
"Yea sure papa."she said annoyed
She walked outside and saw the beautiful sunrise she was kinda started to feel homesick but she thought not to worry about it you'll make some new good friend she was walking down the street admiring all the beautiful lights they were so bright and colorful the buildings were so tall but she kind of hated it because she couldn't really all of the star and was kinda funny to her was the laughing moon 'what a word moon' she thought she kept walking not even paying attention when she bumped into some random guy
"HEY WATCH WHERE YOUR WALKING "
"I-I'm sorry I didn't see"
"Yea sure,hey you look pretty why don't you come with me."
He grabbed her by the arm pressing his fingers into her her skin she yelped to the pain
"HEY LET GO OF ME YOU CREEPY OLD PERV"she yelled she was punching his arm and kicking but it didn't seem to hurt him
"I SAID LET GO YOU DAMN FREAK.!"
He ignored her he kept walking
She was pushing and pulling nothing seem to work
"LET GO!"
"You heard the lady let go of her." An unfamiliar voice said she looked toward where the voice came from the dull yellow light that came from the light post showed his snowy white spiky hair and his bloody red eyes he was tall and very handsome what am I thinking I have a boyfriend I'm such and idiot
The guy who was dragging me stopped "who said I'm gonna let go."
"I swear you don't let go your gonna regret it, idiot." The boy with white hair said
"You can't even hurt me you little boy."
"Your funny."
He disappeared In the darkness 'great he left me'
"What a wimp he left I knew he was to weak."
"Think again, idiot."
I was so glad he came back I'm saved
The boy with white hair smacked him against the head with a Bottle and fell to the grown the he punched in the face till he was unconscious
"Thank you thank you so much your a life saver I owe you so much."
"No problem, are you ok are you hurt"
"Ehh just my arm hurts from him grabbing me so hard."
I pulled up my sleeve and there was bruises forming and some blood from when his nails dug in
"Uhh well I have a bandaid right here it's your luck day."he put it on for me
"Thanks again and you are a life saver."
"Yea and I'm soul and what's your name " He smirked and showed his strange spiky teeth
"Ohh I'm ma-" she got interrupted by her phone that rang
"Hello"
"Maka it's me your papa and where are you?"
"Ohh sorry I must have not been paying attention to the time it's so beautiful here and ill be there as soon as possible." She hung up the phone
"I have to go soul bye."
She was jogging away
"Wait what your name?"
"It's maka!"she yelled
"Ok bye maka."she left
"Guess I might not see her again."

Soul POV

I hit the sucker right on the head what a fool thought I would run away what a sucker
Hahaha think again sucker was a good one
"Thank you thank you so much your a life saver I owe you so much."maka said
"No problem, are you ok are you hurt"
"Ehh just my arm hurts from him grabbing me so hard."
I pulled up my sleeve and there was bruises forming and some blood from when his nails dug in. 'Holy cow that must hurt
"Uhh well I have a bandaid right here it's your luck day."so not cool
"Thanks again and you are a life saver."
"Yea and I'm soul and what's your name " He smirked and showed his strange spiky teeth
"Ohh I'm ma-" she got interrupted by her phone that ran she was talking for a quite short time then hung up
"I have to go soul bye." Ok
She was jogging away
"Wait what your name?"
"It's maka!"she yelled
"Ok bye maka."she left
"Guess I might not see her again." Oh well she had some nice green eyes and nice ashy blonde hair she looks new here well looks like I'm going home

MAKA POV
I finally made it with no trouble in the way I see it was quiet my papa must fallen asleep or went to a bar ehh whatever

Morning finally came I went to take a shower and cooked some breakfast and decided to unpack some of the rest of the stuff that's weird papas not here oh well I'm used to anyway after like probably years of packing well it felt like it everything was better know I felt like eating Some ice cream I left a note that said I left somewhere and walked out the door
I didn't know where to go so I looked up in my phone where is a closest ice cream place and it wasn't to far I finally made it I walked in and asked for a vanilla ice cream with some chocolate I sat down and waited there was a lot of noise going on
"HAHAHAHA I AM YOUR MIGHTY GOD BLACK STAR." A blue haired boy said
A sweet voice said "black star calm down."
"NOBODY TELL GOD WHAT TO DO!"he said
"That's uncool so shut up and sit down and eat your damn ice-cream before it melts ."said a familiar voice
"FINE JUST BEAUSE I WANT TO EAT MY ICE CREAM BEFORE IT MELTS NOT CUS U TOLD ME TO."
"I want a giraffe!" Said a silly voice
"Really again with the giraffe."said a female
"This place is asymmetrical how can people handle this."said a weird boy
Finally my ice cream came it was Soo good I was trying to read but these people are too loud ugh one more time ima go over there and talk to them
Oh shoot I forgot to text Donny and jacky and Luna ill text them later at night
"AHAHAHHAHA."the blue haired boy was laughing
"That does it..."I said
I got up and got to their table "can you shut up you weird blue haired boy I am trying to read."
"HAHAH DON'T TALK TO YOUR GOD LIKE THAT AND WHO EVEN READS THESE DAYS"
"Idiots like you don't!"
"M-Maka is that you."soul said
"Yea soul right?"
"Yea hey how about you hang out with us."
"Um sure " I sat down next to soul
"That's kid , Liz , patty ,tsubaki , and the loud one black star, everyone this is maka."
"Hello "they all said
"How do you guys know each other "
Kid asked
" ohh yea umm so I was walking and I bumped into someone so he was being rude then he was dragging me somewhere then soul came and helped me out and he beat him up bad."
"That's cool soul it seems you are you cool BUT YOU CAN'T BEAT THE ALL MIGHTY BLACK STAR"
Uhhh makes mad
"MAKA..."
"What are you doing." Soul asked
"CHOP."
Black star was on the floor with blood coming out of his head
Everyone sweat dropped
"Finally someone got to shut up black star, good job maka." Said kid
"Ehh yea thanks ha."
Finally everyone finished
"We'll me Liz and patty are gonna leave know." Said kid
"Black star and I are gonna go now." Said tsubaki sweetly she really reminded me of Luna
"Okay then bye."
"Do you want me to give you a ride, maka."
"Yea sure thanks."
We went to the parking lot and we walked to the motorcycle 'are you kidding me'
"Hop on, angel"
"What's up with the nick name."
"Nutin just messing with yea."
I hoped on. I'm not gonna like this
I got on put my arms around his waist the motor came alive when he put the key in he went full speed I tighten my grip on his waist he smirked and I see everything around me go by fast amazed how fast we went
Finally we made it back
"Thanks for the ride, soul."
"Yea no problem."
"Well bye."
"Hey wait if maybe you wanna hangout again here's my number."
He wrote it down into a piece of paper and handed it to me
"Sure thanks "
I walked in the house boy what a good day I need to text Donny
'Hey Donny'
'Maka why didn't you text yesterday'
'Well something happened and I forgot to text you'
'What happen tell me'
She explained him the incident that happened
'Oh so this soul guy helped you'
'Yea he is a life saver I hung out with him and his friends they are crazy except for one who just like Luna there this girl just like jacky'
'I see you know I love you and miss you a lot '
'I miss you to well I have to go bye'
He said I love you omg that's like crazy he never said that and I didn't say love you back then he will think I don't love him back I have to say it
'Ohh and i love you to.'

Donny P.O.V.
I told her I love her and it took her like a while to day it back maybe she doesn't like me anymore or she likes that soul guy I want to kill him but she just meet him I'm just over reacting

Soul P.O.V.
Maka's eyes are so beautifully green and they just make me want to go crazy but that would be uncool well I can't just fall for like that I just met her she must already have a boyfriend why am I thinking this?

Maka P.O.V
I should text soul and tell him we should hang out with him tomorrow and I can get him something I really owe him a lot
'Hey soul'
'Yo what's up'
'I wanted to ask maybe you want to hang out tomorrow'
'Yea sure'
'Come by my house like at seven'
'Thats crazy early I don't even wake up at that time'
'Come on I have surprise for you'
'Fine see yea'
'Bye'

well thats it but i might put the second one up today for you if anyone reads it well read and review