This is my first Fan-fic yet. I hope you like it, cuz Jarcarga, some of you know her as Sara, or the author of Shimmering Angel, and now Fallen angle, likes it. Dont be afraid to r/r, cuz I wanna know if im any good, ya know?
My first story, YAY!
The Vision Lizs POV
I let out a sigh as I walked to my science class. Mr.Bordegio was my teacher again this year. He was an obnoxious prick to the ninth graders last year, but supposedly was alot nicer this year. If I had learned anything in science last year, it was that Cory Wright had the biggest crush on Delinda Mace.
Poor Delinda. Cory Wright was the biggest geek in the ninth grade, and now the biggest geek in the tenth grade. Delinda just happened to be the most popular girl in tenth grade, who was dating the most popular jock in the eleventh grade.
I was Delindas right-hand girl, who turned down every guy who asked me out. Dating is not for me, the guys arent...unique enough for me. Im probably the type of girl who would date a vampire if he randomly appeared infront of me.
As I walked into the classroom, I paused. There, beofre me, stood a tall pale guy. He turned around and smiled, flashing his white teeth. My vision went black, and then I saw me and him in the woods, talking.
When my vision cleared up, he was leaning over me, with the rest of the class.
Mr. Bordegio, of course, was right behind me, lifting up my head to place his jacket under it. I blinked, my vision blurry. My head hurt, and I assumed that I had fallen and hit my head.
Sound came back to me, everyone was murmuring to themselves. "Are you okay?" Mr. Bordegio asked me quietly. I tried to nod, but instead yelped at the sudden pain in my neck.
Cory Wright looked at the teacher, who nodded. Cory nodded back and went to the phone. I suspected that hed dialed ' 911', because less than five minutes of him hanging up, I was being loaded into an ambulance.
"Im okay!" I protested weakly. As the doors were about to close, the guy I had the vision about climbed in. I raised an eyebrow as one of the ladies talked to him. "Hello, I said Im O.K.," I mumbled. The two talking looked over at me, whereas the other person seemed not to hear me.
The lady spoke first, "Im Bella, and I can see youve met my younger brother Christian. Look, it seems you may have broken your neck," she said. She looked no older than seventeen, which had me worried.
"Alright then, Bella, how old are you? And Christian, same question," I said, my voice cracking. Bella glanced at Christian.
"I, believe it or not, am twenty-five," Bella mumbled. Christian rolled his eyes.
"Im sixteen, whats your name, and age?" he countered, mystified.
"His voice was musical, and not something I would expect. "My name is Elizabeth, but call me Liz. Oh yeah, Im sixteen as well," I said, wincing from he pain in my neck. I could barely see Bellas eyes widen, she was surprised. Then it dawned on me. "Bella, you dont have any siblings. In fact, you barely used to have more than one cousin,"I said, suspicious.
"Liz, did Mitchell die as wall?" she asked, her voice breaking. My cousin. Bella was my cousin.
I let out a sigh. "Yes, I am the only one left. Mitch was in a car accident last year, and it was hard. It still is,"I explained as the stretcher was unloaded from the ambulance. Bella turned around and nodded at her partner. She was going to stay with me.
Before the doctors could come get me, Bella and Christian asked a question at the same time. 'What did you see?' That confused the fuck out of me. Two young, handsome looking doctors walked out, one looked confused, the other seemed to know my injury already.
"She looks exactly like Alice," the younger one said. The confused one. "Bella, you should know," he said, but continued the rest of the conversation in a way that I couldn't hear. He turned back to me. "Liz, what did you see, after you blacked out?" he asked casually.
I looked at him shocked. "Um...Well," i began, glancing at Christian,"I was talking, maybe arguing, with Christian in the woods." I looked at everyone's calm, yet shocked faces.
"Edward, no wonder, she practically is Alice," Bella said, looking to the younger man. Then she turned to the older one, "Carlisle, I sincerely think she is fine,"she said.
He nodded, taking the neck-brace off me. I instantly sat up, and stretched. Christian bit his lip as a breeze blew by. I could have sworn that his eyes were a very light gold color earlier. I must have been wrong, considering his eyes were now nearly black.
Bella noticed his reaction, as did Edward and Carlisle. They seemed worried about something. "Bella, aren't you supposed to be twenty four? Your still seventeen! And explain to me what the hell is going on," my confusion about Christian forgotten.
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