Okay, this idea just randomly popped into my head late at night, so I started a document for it!

Max: We're going to Hawaii? WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!!!!

me: It's just a story idea, you don't have to go to Hawaii other then the story. Besides, it was Fang's idea.

Max: *crosses arms over chest* I still don't like it.

me: Fine. You can go, Fang will do this if I ask him.

Max: *shoots me a look* Who said I was going anywhere?

me: That's funny!! I just got another story idea!

Max: Please don't tell me we're going to Madrid.

me: No, but that's a good idea!

Max: Get to the story, will 'ya?!

me: Okay. Here it is. Enjoy!


"I can't believe you talked me into this," I growled at Fang.

"Actually, I talked your mom into it," he laughed.

I slapped him. We were on a plane to Honolulu. Yep, Hawaii. Where all the stars vacation. Fang thought we could use a vacation, and decided to go to a state that will make us wear flowers around our necks! What are those called? Leis? Yeah, that's it. Mom decided to by me a new digital camera for the trip. Ella had to explain to me how to use it. That's sad. I'm the only one who looks down on the trip, everyone else was throwing a Hawaii party the second Fang suggested it. Okay, for once, and this will surprise you, I wasn't going to be the Rain-On-Your-Parade-Girl.

So now we're headed for the oddest-shaped state in America. And it's all thanks to Fang.

"What's Hawaii's nickname?" Nudge asked.

"The Aloha State," Mom said. "Or the Paradise of the Pacific. Most commonly the Aloha State."

"Paradise of the Pacific! Are we close?"

"Land ho!" Gazzy yelled, looking out the window. Everyone crowded the windows. Mom had been to Hawaii one, for her honeymoon before she had Ella, but the rest of us have never been. Not even Ella. "Which one is Honolulu?"

"It's a city on Oahu, one of the largest islands, the third. I don't see it, there it is!"

I looked out the window at the third little island. It looked tiny from here, like a de-formed rhino head. As we slowly got closer, I saw that it did look like a de-formed rhino head! Just go to Google Maps if you don't believe me.

Fang rapped his arm around my waist, reminded me of what happened last night when I was packing:

~/flashback/~

I folded a T-shirt, best I could, and put it in the pink suitcase Ella let me barrow. There was a knock on the door and Fang came in. I didn't even look over my shoulder, I just knew. He walked over behind me.

"Max?" he said. He didn't say anything until I turned around. "I know you're mad about the whole Hawaii trip, but--"

"I'm not mad. I just wish someone had let me state my opinions."

"Well then. I'm waiting."

"I'm over it now. I'm just not the kind of girl who's going to put on a flower necklace and a grass skirt and go out there to dance the--whatever their weird dance is called. I'm just not going to do that. But I want to see the Flock have fun, and I'm not going to rain on their parade."

"For once," he smirked. He looked at what I had packed. "We're going to be gone for a while. You better pack a little more."

"I will, if you'll have patience!" I grabbed the camera Mom had given me and put it in a zipper of the suitcase.

"You don't have to go if you don't want to."

"I want to. Mom went to all this trouble, and I'm not going to waste it."

"Max."

I put a pair of jeans in the suitcase.

"Max."

Great, the Max repeat. I knew all to well what that meant. I packed a little more. "Max." I closed my eyes and sighed, turning around to him. "Don't let me make you do anything you don't want to, I'm not making you go to Hawaii."

"Fang, I--" He pressed his lips against mine, kissing me passionatly. I was in shock for a moment, but then it vanished. I fought the urge to run away and take off into the night sky.

He broke apart from me, his hand still on my back. "Max." I felt his breath on my cheek.

I kissed him again, wondering if he would get my message: 'You love me, and I love you.'

He seemed to have. After a while we broke apart and he whispered in my ear: "Keep packing, I'll be in my room if you need me."

~/flashback end/~

So there you have it. Fang and I are a couple, or whatever you want to call it, just don't call it dating. That word still sends chills.


We walked in to the Sand-dollarHotel, with a huge ocean theme. Marble floors, a huge lobby, chandlerseverywhere, coffee and moca makers, a breakfast bar, even a fountain in the middle of the lobby. It was about eighteen stories, and we stayed on the tenth.

"This reminds me of the Peabody Hotel," Angel said. "I keep expecting ducks to walk out of the elevator."

"Aloha," said a young Hawaiian about my age, with several leis around his neck. He took a pink one off and put it around my neck. He fingered a flower on it. "Aloha," he said again. "Do you want to go to the Clearwater Ball this evening?"

"Sure," I said. "With him." I grabbed Fang's hand. "Oh wait, I don't want to go AT ALL!" I pushed the boy gently away.

The Hawaiin boy blinked, not believing we were a couple. Fang raised his eyebrows and smirked. The boy walked on, and put leis around all of the girl's necks. "Enjoy you're stay at the Sand-dollar Hotel." He shot me another look and walked on to greet a honeymoon couple. We walked towards the front desk and I took of my lei, and put it around Nudge's neck. It went very good with her green one.


me: So there's the first chapter! Second one will be up soon if I get some reviews!

Max: Haha. Sucker. (she's talking about the Hawaiian dude.)

me: I'm surprised you're not gagging because I made you and Fang a couple.

Max: Oh I was, on the inside.

me: *laughes* Otherwise how would I get rid of the sucker? Actually, I wanted you to be Fang's girlfriend anyway.

Max: *rolls eyes* Whatever.

me: What do you tell them?

Max: REVIEW!!!!

You heard her. REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Or I'll make her dress YOU and lies and a grass skirt and make you dance in front of the whole city!!

Max: You bet I will!!