Hey everyone!
New story!
This ne is something I made up cause my cat got lost and I was sitting on my couch and it hit me! LOL hope you guys like it and review!!!
Summary:
Shane Grey was never the popular kid. He was a nerd. Sad to say. He wore glasses always slicked his hair back and never really liked talking to girls. Shane accidently bumps into one of the beautiful girls from school, when searching for his lost dog Buba. Mitchie, the pretty girl as people call her, helps Shane find his dog and they become friends. Mitchie's dad works at Hot tunes and offers to hear Shane's band connect three. When Shane and his band instantly become a hit sensation...will he forget about the one girl who got him there or will he write a song about her that wasn't even true?
Shane Grey ran as fast as he could through the blistering clod snow. The snow began to seap through his sneakers and, his light underoath hoddie, was beginning to become soaked from snow.
"BUBA!"
He called out again hopping the little dog would pop his head around the conner.
His heart was pounding and his glasses were so soaked with water that he couldn't see. He stopped for a seoncd to wipe off his glasses. Realizing just how heavy the snow was falling he decided to take them off. After he did he started running again.
"BUBA!"
He called out one last time before hitting into something or...someone then collapsing into the snow with a umf!
Shane slipped his glasses back on and looked infront of him. There sat a girl. Brunet, dark chocolate brown eyes, fair skin and a flawless face. Shane quickly scrambled to his feet and stared at this beautiful creature infront of him.
He reached out his hand to her..
She looked at it for a second then took it
"Im...ah..you..ah im sorry"
he finally was able to get out
The girl brushed the freezing snow off her skinny jeans
"It's no big deal, you seem to be in a rush and you were screaming ! Is everything ok?"
Shane went to open his mouth but nothing came out
"I ah..um...my...I lost my dog.."
"Oh my gosh! I know that feeling, to loose a pet. It's horrible, can I help you find him or her?"
"Is a him, and I gusse if you want to.."
The girl smiled at him
"I would love to! Im Mitchie by the way! Mitchie Torres!"
Shane's heart almost stopped..her knew her. She went to his school She was always hanging with all the guys. They called her pretty girl cause she was one of the most beautiful girls in school. Could he talk to her? Or was he going to get beat up by her boy friend?
"Oh, hey..im Shane...Shane Grey.."
Mitchie raised her eye brow
"Hey I know you!! You go to my school...aren't you in my bio class?"
Shane stared at her for a minute, wow she notices in December that I have been in her bio class for two whole semesters now..actually I have been in her school since the first grade. Shane thought to himself.
"Yea, we have bio together."
Mitchie smiled
"that's so cool! Well let me just go home real quick and get out of these wet cloths. You can come if you want! My mom loves when I bring home new friends! And im sure my best friend Mary would love to meet you!"
Shane couldn't help but smile. He was happy she considered him a friend.
"Ok!" he simply said as he followed her to her house
On the way over he almost completely forgot about BuBa cause he was so caught up in conversation with Mitchie.
"I know! I want to travel to London after high school and become a musician!"
Shane said smiling
"No way! Me too! Well I want to go to New York! But still that is awesome. So do you play any instruments or anything?"
Shane looked up at the falling snow
"yea, I play guitar..my best friend Nate plays drums when he feels like it and our other friend Jason plays backup guitar"
"so you guys have a band?"
Shane simply nodded his head
"That's awesome! Hey this is my house"
Shane's mouth dropped open
"oh my gosh..its huge.."
Mitchie smiled
"Sadly, I hate huge houses, if it was my choice I would want a small cottage in North Jersey. I hate it here"
Shane made a yea I understand face
"come on lets go inside!"
Mitchie said smiling
MItchie and Shane walked inside
Connie Torres Mitchie's mom, was cooking in the kitchen. When Mitchie walked through the door.
"MOM, im home.."
Mitchie screamed
Mitchie smiled at Shane as Connie Torres emerged from the kitchen
"OH hey Mitch, I see you have a friend!"
Connie took off her baking glove and stretched her hand out toward Shane
"Hi im Mrs. Torres but you can just call me Connie!"
"hey im Shane Grey!"
"Its very nice to meet you!"
"You too !"
"Like I said, just call me Connie!"
"Ok..Connie!"
Mitchie looked at the time on the clock
"Hey mom is dad home yet its 4:00"
Connie shook her head
"dad had to work latter cause of the storm, it knocked out electric at the office so they didn't get to work with some of the last artist"
Shane rose his eyebrows
"artist? Is your dad like a producer or something?"
Mitchie's smile fell
"um, no he works with painters, people who create art, want to come see my room?"
Connie rolled her eyes she couldn't believe her daughter was still hiding that secret
Shane smiled
"Sure!"
They both went upstairs into Mitchie room
"its nothing great.."
Mitchie open the door
there were electric guitars, Bass guitars, acoustic guitars, drums, a huge piano and keyboard, her own recording section, brand new apple computer and a huge plasma screen tv!
"Oh my gosh..I have two guitars a acoustic and electric but you...you have like a billion!"
Mitchie laughed then picked up one of her very first guitars
"they are all nice to have, they each have their own sound, but this on is my favorite cause if it wasn't for finding this guitar in the trash can around the corner I would have never gotten into music"
Mitchie sat down on her beany bag chair and started playing a song
we were both young
when i first saw you
i close my eyes
and the flashback starts
im standing there
on a balcony
of summer air
see the lights,
see the party
the ball gowns
i see you make your way through the crowd
you say hello
little did I know that you were Romeo
you were throwing pebbles
and my daddy said stay away from Juliet
and i was crying on the staircase
begging you please don't go,
and I said Romeo
take me somewhere we can be alone
ill be waiting
all there's left to do is run
you'll be the prince
and ill be the princess
it's a love story
baby just say yes
so I sneak out
to the garden
to see you
we keep quiet
because were dead
if they know
so close your eyes
lets keep this down
for a little while
cause you were Romeo
I was a scarlet letter
and my daddy said
stay away from Juliet
but you were everything to me
and I was begging you
please don't go
and I said
Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone
ill be waiting
all there's left to do is run
you be the prince
and ill be the princess
it's a love story
baby just say yes
Romeo save me
don't try to tell me
how it feels this love is difficult
but its so real
don't be afraid
well make it out of this mess
it's a love story
baby just say yes
Oh
oh
I got tired
of waiting wondering
if you were ever coming around
my faith in you was fading
when I met you on the outskirts of town
and I said
Romeo save me
I've been feeling so alone
I keep waiting for you
but you never come is this in my head
I don't know what to think
he knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring
marry me Juliet
you'll never have to be alone
I love you
and that's all I really know
I talked to your dad
you'll pick out the white dress
it's a love story
baby just say yes
oh,
oh,
yes we were still young when I first saw you
Mitchie breathed after her last cord
Shane smiled
"Did you write that?"
Mitchie nodded her head
"yea..."
Shane smiled
"it was beautiful!"
Mitchie smiled
"thanks!"
Mitchie got up and put her guitar away
"your they first guy who has ever, listen to me, liked my music and not my looks, thank you for that!"
Shane blushed alittle
"Um...anytime!"
Mitchie blushed and then laughed alittle
"let me go get dressed then we will go look for BuBa!"
Shane smiled
"Make your self at home"
Mitchie said going off into the bathroom
So that was the end of my first chapter! I hope you guys liked it! I don't own anything! The song is called love story it is by Taylor Swift!
Ok so I have learned that people like questions so here we go!
Please answer all questions in a review!
1. How much monger should Shane stay a dork
Shane and Mitchie date before he becomes a big star or after?
3. Should Jason be weird in this story?
4. Should I put Catlyin as Mitchie's best friend or Mary from Another Cinderella story?
5. Should Mitchie have a sister or brother?
Please answer all questions in a review!
Thanks guys!