OK this is my 1st fanfic. So plz tell me if I do ne thing wrong. Thanx!! Also when u review plz tell me if I should keep going. Plus im only 13 so im rating this T. The story starts off when the Cullens and Jacob move to a new town and start high school. I do not own anything except the new characters, give all other credit to Stephenie Meyer.
Chapter 1
"Da—Edward?" I asked Dad, almost slipping up.
"Yes, Renesme?"
"Are you sure, I mean absolutely positive as if your life depended on it sure, that I can't have one class with Jacob?" Please Dad. Please, please. I will get down on my knees and beg if I have to. I pleaded silently knowing he could hear me. I formed a mental picture of me on my knees begging for added emphasize
"Nessie please stop begging. Be happy that you're in the same grade as him," Mom told me gently. I know when to admit defeat (even if just in my head). So, I stopped my begging to look at my schedule:
1st Chemistry Mr. Lundquist
2nd World History/Current Events Mrs. Crowe
3rd AP English Mr. Rol
4th Algebra Ms. Dorr
Lunch C
5th Art Mrs. Cujas
6th Foreign Language Mr. Cares
7th Ash Mr. Pladies
I made a quick scan of everyone's schedules to see if I had any classes with them. I was alone for 1st period, Art, and Foreign Language. I had 2nd period with Jasper. English with Mom; both Jasper and Dad (double whammy) in Algebra. Lunch with everyone (yay!). And I ended my day with Emmett and Alice. So all in all a pretty good schedule (except the no Jacob thing). I had at least thirty minutes with everyone. As we all left the office I grabbed Jacob's hand and used my palm to ask him to walk me to class. But before Jacob could answer Dad crushed my dream flat by saying, "No, Jacob needs to get to class. If you really need someone to walk you to class I will." I didn't even answer aloud, I just turned and walked to the Chemistry lab while think, I can do it myself!
Chemistry passed uneventful. But boy was I pestered with questions. Such as:
"What an odd name. Where did it come from?" Or.
"Where did you live before you came here?" Or.
"Do you have any siblings?" And other nonsense questions.
If I thought class was rough then the eight minutes between classes were torture. Mos t people just stopped talking to stare at Jasper and me as we walked to class. I couldn't help thinking if this was their reaction seeing us (well mostly Jasper) through their weak human eyes, how would they react if they saw Jasper's scars. When we were about halfway to the classroom Jasper said, "It's okay Nessie. No need to be nervous." At those words I felt an overwhelming sensation of calm wash over me. I grabbed Jasper's hand and used my palm to silently thank him. I was actually starting to feel good about this class (whether it was me or Jasper's doing, I don't know which), when I looked up and saw that the class was full save for three seats, and neither of them were any where close to each other. I chose a seat in the far back corner, while Jasper took the seat that was almost dead center of the classroom. I absorbed nothing during History except that the teacher may have been named Crowe but she looked like a bat.
Mom and I got to English on time. English was boring until halfway though when a girl walked in. She was about 5''2', had huge blue gray eyes and pin-straight red brown hair that hung past her waist. "Sorry. Sorry," she apologized, "My mum dropped me off late and then I got lost. I'm sorry."
"Yes, yes. Please take a seat," Mr. Rol gestured towards the seat next to mine. I decided to make friends, starting with her.
"Hi, my name's Renesme,but you can call me Nessie. I'm new here too. What's your name?"
Oh was it that obvious?" she asked with a nervous giggle. "My name's Amanda. So what do you have next?"
"Algebra, you?"
"No, I have gym."
"Oh, you have class with some of my family."
"Who?"
"Well I guess you could say my brother."
"Wait, what do you mean?"
"Well, my dad and mom died when I was little. So one of my mom's friends, Carlisle, took us in. Then Carlisle adopted Jacob."
"Wow, so who else do you live with?"
"Well, there's me and my brother, Edward, then Jacob, some of Carlisle's brother's kids, Bella, Emmett, and Jasper, and Esme's, my adopted mom, nieces, Alice and Rosalie. So, a total of eight of us."
"Wow, how do you remember all of them?"
"It was hard, but I got it down. So do you have lunch after gym?"
"Yes."
"Okay, sit with me at lunch?"
"Sure!"
"Okay, thanks. See you at lunch." With that the bell rang and it was time for Algebra. I guess Jasper didn't want a repeat of History so we got to class with five minutes to spare. When other people started walking in Dad was growling under his when ever a guy walked in. I guess he didn't like what he heard. It was starting to get annoying. Dad! Calm down! Someone may hear you and think think there's something mentally wrong with you. Also if you don't stop I'll move to a different seat. I thought.
"I'm sorry Nessie, but if you heard what they were thinking then you would be doing the same thing," Dad apologized. Other than that Algebra passed uneventful. When the bell rang I practically ran out of the classroom to the cafeteria. I met Jacob outside the cafeteria doors and we walked in together. We grabbed our food, me with my tray only filled halfway and Jacob with practically everything they offered. I spotted Amanda sitting alone at a table in the corner. I steered Jacob toward her.
"Hey, Amanda! How was Gym?"
"Okay, but the teacher must hate Jacob already. He must have ran laps for half the class," Amanda replied.
"Oh, Jake. What could you have done already to get you in so much trouble on your first day?"
"Stupid teacher didn't think I was giving it my all. He kinda pissed me off, so I may have yelled at him a little. And well he didn't seem to like that so I had to run laps," Jacob said.
"Jacob, did I just hear that you got in trouble already?" Dad asked appearing out of nowhere with Mom in tow.
"Come off it Edward, I just had to run a few laps."
Dad just growled under his breath and took the seat next to me while Mom sat next to Jacob. Then Rosalie and Emmett joined us. "Hey! Where's Alice and Jasper? And who's the new girl?" Emmett asked gesturing towards Amanda.
"I'm Amanda, I'm new here too."
"Oh, so where's Jasper and Alice?"
"I don't know. Jasper was in Algebra, but I didn't see him after I left for lunch," I answered.
"Oh, well," Emmett said.
"Hey, Amanda you gonna finish that?" Jacob asked.
"No, you can have it," Amanda answered.
"Kay, thanks!" Jacob took a bite and made a horrible face as if was going to puke. "Uk, what is this stuff!?"
"Um, tofu," Amanda answered.
"Why, would you want to eat that stuff?"
"Well, maybe cuz` I'm not killing something for it." Amanda answered forcefully.
"Whatever you can have it back." Just then Alice walked up looking kind of sad.
"Jasper had to leave he met his own..." Alice started to say then she just cut off and looked towards Dad.
"Are you sure that's the one?" Dad asked Alice. "Okay, does anyone need to go home? Yes, yes that's fine. Bye Alice, we'll meet you at home." Dad was obviously answering Alice's thoughts. Then the bell rang for class. I was headed to Art when Amanda showed up.
"Hey, do you have Art?"Amanda asked.
"Yes, you?"
"Yup, same here."
"Okay."
"Hey, do you know what was happening at lunch today?"
"Nope, but I'll probably find out tonight at home."
"Call me and tell me when you know?"
"Yeah, sure." Other than that Art was boring, As was Foreign Language. In Ash Emmett and I talked about lunch.
"Do, you think Jasper's okay." I asked Emmett.
"Yeah he's okay, if he wasn't we all would have went home not just Alice."
"Yeah, I guess." Then the bell rang and it was time to go home. The car ride home was a little quiet. I think everyone was wondering if Jasper was okay. Even Jacob was quiet. I didn't know what to expect when we got home, all I know was that it wasn't what I found.
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