Wow it's finally started lol, anyway this is my first ever fan fiction and I am willing to listen to all COUNSTRUCTIVE Criticism "No flames unless there is a meaning behind them" I know that some may not like the way this wavers from the original plot but this has been on my mind for a long time it's a test in a way… if you truly hate it you don't have to read it and for those who do thank you and please review with your thoughts.
Thanks KurosakiShinji
Pain and Power
It was dark; night had just fallen on Konohagaure and alone in a dark alleyway a young boy nestled into the corner for warmth. This boys name was Naruto Uzumaki he had just escaped the wrath of some of the more reckless villagers, those who actively disobeyed the 3rd Hokage, yet his escape did not mean he got away unhindered he had run into a anbu squad who had decided play with the Demon of Konoha they had come at him with no mercy and had almost succumbed to his oncoming death, and he cried, he saw death coming to take him and suddenly found himself in a sewer like area in front of him were giant bars of steel forming a gate blocking entrance to what lied beyond. Suddenly an ungodly roar burst through the gates an echoed through his mind tearing at his senses like the smell of blood he had grown so used to in the past, sadly it was his own blood that had this effect and he knew it all to well.
Suddenly he noticed a figure stand on the other side of the steel gate; "Hello Uzumaki"states the unknown figure.
"Who are you and where the hell am I?" screamed Naruto in a fearful yet determined tone.
"Me I am your savior kid and in a way you are mine" States the man
"What do u mean mister and you have yet to explain where we are"
Kyuubi looked at the boy and saw a fire in the young boys eyes that if it was allowed to grow into its potential could help this kit hold power above even Himself and with him this boys power could match the gods.
"Kit have you ever wondered why you were hated by those foolish villagers who couldn't even see the difference between you and a demon" States the Fox darkly
"Yea why do you ask can you help me" asked Naruto sincerely
"It is because you contain me and you should know who am I am Kyuubi and yes kit I can but it will come with a price tell me kit do you want to grow stronger and protect yourself from these wretched humans and not have to worry about when they will try to kill you next better yet DO YOU WANT REVENGE for what they did"Snarled the Fox
Naruto felt his eyes fall to the floor and was thrown into a maelstrom of emotion that threatened to crush him underneath its weight, Yes he thought to himself he did want to give into his rage to give them what they deserved, He wanted revenge, Suddenly he was back were this had all started with the anbu squad who had been trying so fervently kill him, hehe he would show them he would get his revenge, he looked up slowly and laughed at what he saw FEAR, "holy shit" mouthed the anbu known as Dog "his eyes and this chakra its visible and it is the same chakra he had felt when the Kyuubi had attacked could they have possibly brought about the destruction of there village" , Naruto fully came to and stared at the 4 anbu in front of him and smiled darkly at his soon to be prey they would be a test , "to gauge the extent of my new abilities as of this moment so he could build on them after they were dead" he thought darkly" he laughed and turned to face his first opponent a tall well built anbu with a wolf mask wielding a kodachi.
"So you think you beat me demon brat you aren't even a ninja" chuckled Wolf, "I don't half to be to KILL YOU" Snarled Naruto, who slowly began to change
Wolf noticed something strange something that should have been impossible he was changing.
" his features became more feral like that of an Inuzuka clan member and his eyes slanted in like a fox he was melding with the fox's chakra that surrounded him making the changes to his body permanent one final change the brat known longer had the Blond hair that made him appear like a clone of the fourth he had long feral hair similar to the Inuzuka once again and it was pure white with Blood Red hair intermingled even at age 7 this brat was the first person to ever make Wolf feel TRUE FEAR" this was the last thought Wolf had as the young boy clawed out his throat.
The remaining three anbu watched on in horror as there friend was mauled by the once terrified boy "I don't think the fox is controlling the kid I think Naruto is controlling it" Thought Ant, Dog, and Raven,.
Slowly Naruto lifted himself of the corpse of the Anbu known to him only as Wolf and sighed "Are you guys going to stand in my way" stated Naruto darkly.
2 of the anbu rushed at him intent to kill the boy obviously shown in there eyes "How dare you demon brat you can never be aloud to walk amongst us ever again DIE".
Naruto looked at his opponents with sadness couldn't they see he did not wish to kill them, "Yes you do kit and you know it. It's going to be part of your life whether you like it or not so you might want to get used to it deal with them and be on your way" Stated the Fox darkly.
Naruto was shocked he hadn't thought what would happen after all this once he was free, "What do you mean I cant leave I have no were to go no camping supplies, food, weapons anything we will die Fox'' thought Naruto
" We will be fine I do not plan on us being helpless and it is only this wretched village that hates you outside of these walls it is likely you can gain allies even friends kit you will be free and if you want Revenge and to become strong I will help you in this , I don't want a weak container as well if you must know." Stated the Fox,
"Really you would actually help me become strong" Thought Naruto
"Yes kit I will teach you what I know and when that runs out we will find you others who can teach you, NOW GET BACK TO DEFENDING YOUR SELF BEFORE YOU DIE FOOL"
"Gulp….. Yes Fox and thank you" Thought Naruto"
"Fine now kill them before they kill you brat" Roared Kyuubi.
Back out of his heated discussion with the Fox, Naruto felt pain hit his side which caused him to focus and smiling he whispered to them as he closed the gap between them "Koumajutsu Kyoukan no jutsu (Release: Demon Scream)" and a wailing scream rang out that night so that no one in all of konohagure could have missed The howl of blood.
"What did I ever truly do to you" whispered Naruto quietly, as the bodies of the anbu who had attacked the young boy fell to the ground dead.