i Do not own Torchwood or doctor who or anything knowable XD Except for Sophie and Mathew!

i know im the worst person at keeping track of my story's but i have this story in my head and it NEEDS to be written down XD hopefully i will get further with this one.

chapter 1

Hi my name is Sophie, Sophie Nelson and im a huge fan of doctor who, but most of all im a huge fan of Torchwood. So what dose one do when they are a fan of a show? One goes to the place were it was filmed duh… so that's what me and my friend/flatmate Mathew did.

We were sitting in the living room, dressed and waiting for the taxi to come.

"so.. You exited?" Matt asked me eyeing me carefully.

"yep!" I said almost bouncing on my seat.

I had our small suitcases at the front door ready to be put in the boot when a horn was heard from outside.

"taxi's here!" I jumped up shouting mat rolled his eyes and got up to pick up the cases. Matt put the cases into the taxi's open boot as I locked our home and got into the taxi and we set off.

We arrived at Paddington station at 7:40am and got the tickets to Cardiff.

20 minuets later we were on the train, on our way to Cardiff central.

We arrived at the hotel at 11:30 it was a quaint little place called Cardiff bay hotel. Once we got settled we decided to look for the little café on the bay.

When found it, I had some tea and Matt had some coffee. we both had some sandwiches as it was already lunch time.

After lunch we decided to just walk around.

We went to the shopping center and then we walk towards the bay. We were halfway there when suddenly I started to feel dizzy, and fell forwards I would have fell if mat didn't have quick reflexes.

"Who! Sophie! Are you ok?" he stood me up right but kept a hold of me as I wobbled a little. He pulled me over to a near by bench at the edge of the bay.

"yer…" I nodded and took a deep breath "yer im fine just became suddenly dizzy. But the rift isn't real right?" he looked at me dumbfound.

"well… I don't think so… but lets not think about it, lets just go see the tower? Eh?" He asked me worried.

"yer lets go" I nodded and we set off across the bay toward the tower.

As we walked I started to get queasy again, but I ignored it and plodded on wanting to see the tower. When we got to the tower, amazingly I felt fine, I looked at the tower and then I looked towards the invisible lift. But just as I looked at the lift, the queasiness returned full force only more stronger and I fell backwards onto the ground.

Matt was looking at the tower at that moment and only heard me fall, when he saw me he started to panic as we didn't have our phones. What We didn't notice was that a camera was pointed in our direction.

"Sophie! Not again! Help! Someone! Help! Someone call a doctor! Help!" He started to attract peoples attention.

As my eyes were getting blurry and I was starting to see spots, I suddenly heard a London accent.

"Out of the way! Im a doctor!" the man knelt down next to me and started to ask me questions. But I was almost loosing consciousness so I grabbed his arm and pulled him down to tell him something and was amazed to see who it was.

"sh-shut up and listen carefully" I took a deep breath as he looked at me in shock.

"th-the r-rift" his eyes widened "its the rifts fault, I-im from different dimension I-I" I took another breath as Matt knelt near me and put my head on his lap as I continued "I need to see the Captain, I need to see Jack." I grabbed his other arm "Owen, I need you to take us to Torchwood" I finally told him before my world turned to black.

its a little short but im gonna start the next one now while its still fresh...

Sashaxh

xXXXx

Edit - 28/06/2013