Based on post chapter 477 of the Manga, plus a few weeks in the future.
NaruXSaku lemons in future.
Disclaimer: No, no I do not own Naruto. And if I did? Well let s just say Jiraiya would still be doing his research. Rest in piece you sly dog.
Well hai there everyone. This is my first fanfic, so be nice :)
I've had this idea in my head for months and I just haven t been bothered to write it down. Okay guys I actually have very good grammar and English. But I type incredibly fast and often miss words accidentally. So please don t go ZOMG YOU BOGAN RETARD YOU MADE LIKE 40 MISTAKES I often don t edit, so be a good reviewer now and point out the mistakes for me :D in a nice way... haha
I'll also be looking for an editor sooner or later, so if you re up for that job give me a message or a review saying so. Now this is only the preface, I ve wrote about 50 or so pages, but I m only giving you guys a snippet to see if you like it.
By the way people, I write japanese names with family name first. Get over it, it's how it's meant to be done.
I will need 5-10 reviews to continue with the story so I know I'm actually writing it for someone. So I hope you guys like it. R&R )
Preface:
"speech"
Thoughts
Kyuubi/inner Sakura
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, but I shall one day, you just wait and see maybe.
"Naruto, what are you going to do now?" Asked the 16-year-old Haruno Sakura, whilst picking up her speed to catch up to Naruto.
Uzumaki Naruto was jumping tree to tree with the rest of the gang, which currently consisted of; Yamato, Kakashi, Sai, and Kiba with his fully grown companion, Akamaru. They were returning from the Kage meeting. So much had happened in the past few weeks. It was only 2 and a half weeks ago that Naruto was fighting against pein in order to save the village.
After reaching his limit, Naruto gave into the temptating flow of chakra that the Kyuubi consistently offered attempting to gain freedom over the boy. The sensation was amazing. Although the pain was incredible, the release of the building chakra felt to relieving.
The seal on his stomach had opened up and all that was left was to simply peel off the seal, encaging the ever-luring 9 tailed demon fox.
The words he whispered to Naruto were so tempting, he promised the end of war, of pain, all suffering. He promised the safety of him and his friends.
He staggered to his feet, and took the remaining steps to the cage gate. Using the worn out and tired muscles in his arms he lifted his arm to take the thin paper that had the kanji for seal on it and began to peel the corner off.
It all happened quickly then.
He felt someone grab his arm, but it wasn't just anyone it was the most amazing touch he had ever felt. It was like someone had taken a burn on the arm and covered it with a cold cloth. It was a secure, warm, reassuring touch. It was like he knew that the moment that person had come, everything was going to be okay. Naruto slowly turned his face, lifting it slightly, nervous of who could give off such an amazing current.
His eyes adjusted to the smiling, radiant face that recognised instantly, the man who sacrificed his life to save the village hidden in the leaves and sealed the 9 tailed beast in Naruto. The 4th hokage, Namikaze Minato. Everything from there was hazy to Naruto, he remembered those 4 words though.
-Flashback-
"wait by heir, you don t mean.." stumbled Naruto.
"yes, Naruto. You are my son." He praised with a smile.
-End flashback-
Namikaze Minato, I can't seem to wrap my head around that. Me, Naruto, the 4th hokage s son, the yellow flash of Konoha, no way. Me! Uzum wait.. If he s my father, then wouldn t that mean that my name would be Nam-
"Naruto??" He snapped himself out of his trail of thoughts to look back at Sakura.
"Sorry Sakura-chan, what s up?"
"I asked what you re going to do now, that we ve brought him back?" She stuck her thumb in the general direction of Kakashi who was carrying a half dead Sasuke tied with chakra ropes.
"Ahh" He mused "well I guess we should go take him to the old la--"
"SHOW HER RESPECT BAKA, you mean Lady Tsunade, don't you Naruto?" She said with an innocent smile before she let him continue his sentence. Tsunade had since woken up from her coma with slight amnesia but otherwise to full health and was aware of the kage meeting, Danzo and Naruto bringing Sasuke back for the second time.
"Uhh, yeah, I was going to say that. Anyway I don't know what she's going to do with him now. I mean he's not the idol ninja. Missing S-rank nin, temporary Akatsuki member, killed hundreds.. ugh. What have you done sasuke? Who have you become?" Naruto had lowered his voice to a barely audible whisper.
Everyone was now jumping in silence, thinking about Naruto's past bonds, how troubled his life is, and how much he puts himself through in order to save his friends and village.
Naruto was in deep thought when he got this sudden compression in his chest. Wow... what was that. Ow, it.. kinda hurt. It didn't phase him and he continued jumping trying to ignore the massive lack of chakra he had. Then he got a bigger one, this time slowing him down considerably.
"We're here." Spoke up Yamato as the main gate came into view.
"Good-" Naruto Huffed before he landed on the ground and fell on one knee.
"Naruto, are you alright?" asked Kiba as he landed next to him.
"Yeah I'm fine, just tired." He said as he stood up and took another step before he found him self on the ground again, this time on both knees. "Ugh"
Sakura landed on the other side of him with a soft thud. She walked behind him and ran her glowing green hand over his mid back before sucking in a rugged gasp. "no.." She murmured.
"What is it, Sakura?" Asked Kakashi landing last with the unconscious Sasuke over his shoulder.
"His entire chakra flow has stopped, it's.. he's.. ah! Kaka-sensei do something! His body is going to shut down!!" No, Naruto hang in there please!" she cried softly.
"Yamato how much chakra do you have left?" Kakashi asked.
"Enough, Kakashi-Senpai." He walked up to Naruto who was now on all fours and panting heavily.
"Okay, get him to the hospital immediately! He ordered.
"Sir," He responded as he grabbed Naruto's arm and torso before flinging him onto his back. He nodded to Kakashi before disappearing from sight in full sprint.
"Sooner or later he's not going to be able to repair this shit. Kakashi said to no one in general.
SOOOOOO, what did you think? remember this is just a preface, deliberately small, my chapters would actually be relatively long. And this is just based to get your attention. What happens next will shock your small hairy balls off. joking jokingm calm down. but seriously. There's an evil twist. I didn't leave you with a cliff hanger in the first post because that would just be mean. Hahaha.
Well remember kiddies, Review or you won't get more of the story. By the time i get back from skiing i expect at least 1 review.
:D :D :D that's all for todayyyy, from minato haaaaaaaiiiiiiii ^_^
