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Me: Hey guys! So I decided to remake one of my first stories I ever posted on this site. I doubt anyone remembers that terrible story unlike me. I deleted it once I realized how atrocious it was. Two years later I am back in action…too bad it has to happen when I am terribly sick but what can you do besides keep your head up high ^_^! This is of course in my fashion, an OC story so if anyone doesn't like it then you might as well leave now because I don't want to hear it and I am very short tempered. I take critizum well but if you insult me or say that I change things or leave any kind of flame I will not hesitate to flame you in my next chapter. There is nothing I hate more than people being complete idiots saying I am changing something when this is a fanfiction website. I am a nice person most of the time so I just wanted to give you this important message.
I know some of you may have read my other Detective Conan/Case Closed story I still have up on here but I assure you this is not the same story as that nor will it have the same premise. With my head up high I start this story off saying I sadly do not own Detective Conan/Case Closed because if I did I will make sure that they had everything English dubbed so I can watch it all (no offense to the other casts besides English. I just don't want to miss anything because of reading subtitles). Anyway! Here's the story and remember ONE TRUTH PREVAILS!
Kudo (Conan's) P.O.V
"Wow! I can't believe this Noriko chick!" Rachel said watching the television. I asked her if we could watch the news real quick to see if anything weird popped up but this Noriko girl has something big enough to end up on the news. It's not busy at the office and of course the drunken Richard, is resting his head on his desk napping like usual. It's the weekend so we aren't doing much besides this. All my friends had plans this weekend so I can't hang out with the kids. Of course I don't mind cause I get to hang out with Rachel.
The picture of Noriko shows she has long copper red hair and piercing blue eyes. She has her hair straight having it go down to the middle of her stomach but she had her hair pulled back with a bandana. Around her neck is a sun emerald gold chain necklace. She is wearing a blue tang top under a leather jacket, black jeans, and boots. If I was seventeen again and not in love with Rach I would think she was totally hot.
"Who is she?" I asked in my stupid kid voice. It's been over a year since I've shrunk down into Conan. I am nowhere near close to solving this case as I did when I began. Not only that I'm stuck being the snot nose brat but I can't stand watching Rachel cry anymore.
"Oh, no one knows her last name so everyone calls her Noriko. She is basically a master at everything. She is only seventeen yet she has a black belt in karate and judo, a professional actress, the captain of her soccer and baseball team, top in her high school class, a magician, and also a world famous private detective on the side. She doesn't get along with people in general so she doesn't have many friends. She mostly just sleeps through class. The teachers of course don't mind since she is their top student." My eyes widened.
"I never heard of someone doing that many things!"
"That's because people aren't as organized as her. Jimmy told me one time that the reason he played soccer was because it helped him become a great detective to catch the bad guys. He wanted to be like Sherlock because Sherlock learned to fence for his detective abilities. I bet that's what she's doing." Or she's just trying to show off. I mean how can she be that good at everything? She seems too perfect.
"Doesn't it take a long time to master all those things?"
"The last I've heard she seems to have a photo graphic memory so she learns them instantly. She also is good at analyzing people. I've heard there's been some cases where she arrives knowing nothing than instantly know who the killer is even though the police tried for hours." That's impossible! It takes me at least a half an hour to an hour to crack the case. How could it take someone just a second to know who it was when they know nothing and just stumble in?
"I've never heard someone do that before!" Rachel laughed like that's what she was thinking.
"Yeah, I bet that she can give Jimmy a run for his money." She laughed. Thanks for the confidence Rach. "Well we might as well turn this off since we've seen everything." She turned off the television then looks at her dad annoyed.
"How long do you think he will be asleep for?" I asked.
"Till the end of the century I suppose." We laughed.
"I can hear you two, thank you very much." The scratchy voice of Richard said. He was drinking a lot last night. "I wouldn't be sleeping if that girl didn't steal all of my cases."
"What are you talking about dad? Weren't you on a case last night?" Rachel asked. I remember that. He got a call when we were eating dinner last night. I couldn't go because he was just updating a man about an affair. That night the cheating wife was murdered. From what I have heard he was actually doing a pretty good job by himself but Richard came back drunk muttering something I couldn't make out.
"I was and I was on a roll too. All of a sudden this girl, who was sleeping on the couch since the moment we walked in, woke up in the middle of my brilliant accusation and told them where to find the evidence along with saying the husband who I was a second from locking up myself was the murderer. Then she told me not to be so loud, cursed at me, and then WENT BACK TO SLEEP!" He punched the desk before screaming over the pain in his hand. "It is almost eleven and I haven't had a single call! I used to have people knocking on my door by now! I thought Kudo was bad but this girl is worse." Should I take that as a compliment?
"Dad, I told you Jimmy isn't that bad of a guy!"
"Besides, how did you know that she was asleep the whole time? She's an actress so she could have fooled you into thinking she was asleep." I said.
"I looked into that," Richard sighed. "She was out cold. I grabbed her hand and dropped it right on her face. Usually it causes a reaction of some sort but she just laid there snoring away. Meguire told me that this chick was up for seventy four hours case after case. Once she had a time to go to her house to go to sleep she was interrupted. She had a total of twelve cases and a lot of paper work to do. The longest she's done to solve a case is five minutes. Yet she was driving throughout the whole country."
"How could she know who the killer is without hearing everything?"
"I'm not sure." Something about this chick strikes me as odd. There is no way she could do this so easily. She kind of reminds me of—
"This kind of reminds me of Sherlock Holmes." Rachel blurted saying my thoughts. "Sherlock always knew everything automatically just by a quick glance. At least that's what Jimmy told me."
"Meguire called her the female Sherlock last night actually." Everything was silent. "I'm heading out. I need to get some air." Richard grabbed his jacket before walking out.
"I feel bad. He's really bummed out." I would be too if that happened to me. "Hey do you want to go to Tropical Land? I haven't been there since Jimmy disappeared." I nodded. We left a note for Richard, if he even wakes up before we get back, and headed off for Tropical Land. Today is a nice sunny day without a cloud in the sky. Rachel is wearing a nice red sleeveless top and dark blue shorts while I am wearing a blue shirt and black shorts. I am hoping that I can sneak away from Rachel to check out once again the same alley way I was poisoned.
"Man, wasn't that fun Conan?" Rachel cheered as we got off of our second roller coaster. I nodded looking around. Something odd caught my eye but before I could go investigate Rachel started to drag me.
"What are you doing?" I yelled.
"The mystery coaster doesn't have a line. We have to go there before there is one." That's weird. There is usually always a line especially around midday on a weekend. We walked up to the front of the line. Memories start stirring back into my mind. Man, has it really been over a year? I looked up seeing Rachel's face with little hints of about to cry. Before I could say anything we climbed into the ride.
"Hey Rach," I started after we put the safety bars on. She looked at me smiling. I smiled back "I'm really glad we came here today." Automatically the tears from her eyes disappeared and a real smile came to her face. I love bringing that smile to her face it makes me think for a moment that I am not the person who makes her cry. We are sitting in the very front row. I decided if I didn't see the two men in black by now they probably aren't here. I got a good view from the park from the last ride so I know they couldn't be here. As soon as we started to climb up in the roller coaster I looked to my side. I saw a girl staring at me. I can't tell much besides that she has an athletic build. Rachel grabbed my hand bringing me out of my thoughts.
"Here we go."
A week later…
"Hey Conan," Amy cheered leaning towards my face. "I have something to tell you!"
"Alright, what is it?" I asked curious.
"You aren't the new student anymore! And this time it's a girl. We should have her join the Junior Detective League. I get lonely something being the only girl in the club."
"I hope she's cute," Mitch cried. "She might be my girlfriend."
"No, if she's cute she'll be my girlfriend!" George said.
"Actually I am not looking for a relationship right now I'm sorry." A sweet unfamiliar voice said. The group stepped out so I can see who spoke. A seven year old girl with black hair and blue eyes stood in front of us with our teacher. She is wearing a black and white stripped dress with flats. On her back is a pink back pack.
"Oh, okay." The boys said at the same time. Keep dreaming boys. She is pretty cute for a seven year old.
"Hi," Amy cheered rushing to the stranger. "I'm Amy. The two boys you just met are Mitch and George. And the boy sitting in his desk is Conan. And together we are the Junior Detective League."
"Cool!" The stranger cheered. "My name is Chika. I just transferred here to find my long lost brother."
"Oh, whose your brother?" I asked. She didn't say anything but gave me a thumbs up.
"Oh nobody, don't worry I don't expect you to know him." She laughed. That's weird, but at least she's nice.
Me: Hey guys! Hope you like the chapter! Now I know what you are all thinking "The brother must be Kudo. Who else would it be?" Well I have tricks up my sleeve. And I want to say this right now if you have anything to say about Chika I recommend you don't say anything till later. We just met her after all. So anyway please review and NO FLAMES OR I FLAME YOU! I love you guys and hope you liked the first chapter of the story.
