hey, i'm Alexis. i want to write a story but i can't write very well so i wanted to ask if someone could help me. i will put all the information i have into 3 or 4 chapters. if it seams interesting and you want to help then please review or mail me and say so. thank you. Alexis Raider AKA the lovely blaze. oh and there will be Yaoi and i wanted to make it m-rated.
Summary: what if Harry had an older twin sister who was hailed girl who lived while he was neglegted. wel he won't stand for it anymore after 16 years and neigther will his sister in all but parents(not the twin sister) together they will go to Illuaverachie school of magic. high school for magical creatures and humans alike. Yaoi! ( whith means boyXboy as in gay love)
school name: Illuaverachi school of Magic
school location: Egypt
current headmaster: naito fukyuu(blood veela)
school apperance: from the outside it looks like a giant piramide. the entrance is a magical door between the paws of the sphinx. the sphinx was made by the first headmaster it's head is the headmasters head. it also has al kinds of enchantments on it to look like it's broken to the muggels but to wizards it's still in perfect condition. the inside is a 11 story high piramide. the decorations are egyptian.
1st story: teleportation room(a bit like a elefator room only you'll be transported to the story you want immidiatlie. great hall(where they eat) kitchen. medical wing. potion lab. ball room(for partie's) underground tunnel that leads to a big oasis where the ourside classes are held.
2d story: teleportation room class-rooms detention room and the teacher offices
3d story: 1st year dorm rooms ( you get a room for yourself (whith has a bedroom a den a bathroom and a magical room for pets you bring in it) and if you live till the next year then your room will be moved up to the second year dormentories.) teleportation room
4th stroy: second year dorms teleportation room
5th story: third year dorms teleportation room
6th story: fourth year dorms teleportation room
7th story: fifth year dorms teleportation room
8th story: sixth year dorms teleportation room
9th story: seventh year dorms teleportation room
10th story: teacher dorms teleportation room. a statue of Anubis. if you know the passpord it will move aside and show the staircase to the headmasters office.
11th story: headmaster office and dorm.
the oasis: the oasis is in the middle of the dessert surrounded by high rock formations so it's impossible for muggles to come in. the classes you get here are: herbologie, care of magical creatures, muggle hand to hand and weapons. it's surrounded by magical forest were all kind of creatures live. the oasis is also protectid by 2 nundu mates. they won't hurt the students but wil kill everyone else.
this is just the school harry, artemis and rosseta up next.