Rewritten
Chapter 1- The Submission
Song to Thank for this chapter (tell me how you like it): James Young-Come Back For Me
Disclaimer: Despite my constant asking Naruto is not mine
Naruto walked the streets of Konoha, not really paying attention to those around him, but instead focusing on the argument he was having with Kyuubi in his head.
'What do you mean Sasuke's my mate?'
'You honestly can't be that stupid! You two can never keep your hands off each other. You've managed to maintain this secret relationship for MONTHS. And it's so obvious that you love each other.'
'But he doesn't even know that I can and should mate! How do you expect him to handle the fact that he is my mate?'
'And who's fault is that? I told you a long time ago that he was your mate, it's all your fault that you chose not to tell him.'
'I can't just bind him to me like this. Can't I have more time to get him warmed up to this?'
'I gave you 5 months, I can't delay this any longer or you'll get hurt.'
'What do you mean get hurt?'
'Every time you see Sasuke, it will take everything to control yourself. Then you'll try to ignore him to stop the pain and in the end your relationship will fall apart. If that happens then you'll die.'
Naruto didn't respond knowing that he had lost the argument. He pulled himself away and tried to find Sasuke. They were going on a mission to escort Gaara to Konoha. This was going to be the first time they had seen each other in a month because Naruto had already started avoiding Sasuke because of this whole 'mating' thing.
Sasuke saw Naruto, before Naruto could see him. He felt himself smiling at the sight of bright blond hair, and stunning blue eyes. Before he realized that he Sasuke Uchiha was smiling in public to someone he supposedly hated he quickly stopped. It was true that keeping their relationship a secret was a pain at times, especially now since girls were constantly paying attention to both of them. "Hi dobe." Sasuke said using Naruto's nickname to attract his attention.
"Hi teme!" Naruto said giving his pale lover a bright smile "Are you ready?" he asked referring to the mission.
"Of course." Sasuke answered before turning away. It had been almost 3 weeks since he's last saw Naruto and an even longer time had passed from when they last had sex. At first he had thought that Naruto was avoiding him, but it was obvious from his tone that he still loved and cared for Sasuke.
When they were far enough from Konoha, Naruto reached out to hold Sasuke's hand and he placed a kiss on his cheek. He couldn't help but laugh when he saw the pale cheeks turn red.
"It's been so long since we could just relax around each other, I wish we could do this all the time." Naruto said before a voice in his head turned his happiness to frustration 'If you were mates, then you could flaunt him to everyone.' Unconsciously he started to frown.
"Naruto, are you ok?" Sasuke asked when he saw that Naruto didn't stop frowning.
"I'm fine it's just... never mind it's nothing."
"No, no, no your not fine. There's definitely something." Sasuke said yanking his hand from Naruto's so that they could stop walking.
"Sasuke it's really nothing!"
"It's obviously something so why are you lying to me about this? Is this why I didn't get to see you for over a month?" Sasuke asked anger and hurt starting to build up.
Realizing that he wasn't getting anywhere by lying to Sasuke, he gave in. Slowly moving towards Sasuke he pulled his lithe body closer to his strong one. "What if I were to tell you that I want to have a deeper relationship than what we have now? Not just telling everyone because this involves that but I want us to be connected by something bigger."
'Get on with it!'
'I'm trying to!'
"Um Naruto, I'm still waiting." Sasuke said more out of curiosity than impatience.
"I've known for a long time that we were meant to be, I just didn't know how to tell you-"
"What do you mean, meant to be?"
Taking a deep breath Naruto calmed down 'It's ok, he'll understand. You can do this.' "Mate is a word used to describe the lifelong companion of anyone with traces of a demon in them. A mate is as important as the air we breathe. And you are my mate, I never wanted to make you feel chained to me because that's what will happen. If we mate and I place my mark on you then you and I will be in an eternal bond that not even death can break. I wanted to take things slowly but I can't keep this to myself anymore. I'm sorry-"
"Wait a second," Sasuke said interrupting Naruto "Are you telling me that you kept this from me for I don't know how long, because you thought I wouldn't want it?"
"... yes."
"You know I love you?"
"Yes, and I love you too."
"Then why would you think, that I would feel pressured by a deeper relationship? Don't you have more faith in my feelings?"
"Sasuke, I didn't... I mean I thought that..."
"Well you thought wrong." Sasuke said before he pulled away from Naruto and continued walking. He was hurt, angry but mostly hurt because of Naruto's actions. 'He should have told me'
'I should have just told him' Naruto thought angrily while he tried to catch up with Sasuke. Pulling Sasuke closer into a kiss he allowed his actions to express his emotions.
They both pulled away from the kiss to breathe, Sasuke gave Naruto a gentle smile showing him that he was forgiven 'I love him too much'.
"I love you so much" Naruto said before kissing him again, easily gaining dominance in Sasuke's mouth. The kiss only got deeper from there when Sasuke allowed his fingers to tangle in silky blond hair. They had to pull away when they realized that they were still on a mission that was far from completion.
"We still have a mission to finish." Naruto said frustrated.
"I know but we did start early... and Gaara is strong enough to make it to Konoha by himself."
Naruto looked at Sasuke surprised that he was suggesting to leave the mission so that they could have sex.
'In his defense you did leave him sexless for a whole month.'
Sasuke knew what he was doing was embarrassing, and reckless but he couldn't bring himself to care about it. He had went from being fucked at least twice a week, to not even being kissed for a month. His whole body was screaming for more, he could feel his dick stir and his hole was twitching from just the thought of being filled. Sasuke raised his head slowly and licked Naruto's lips.
Before Sasuke's tongue could re-enter his mouth, Naruto had pressed him into a nearby tree and attached their lips back together.
Sasuke felt himself submit to the pleasure that Naruto's skilled tongue brought him. "More!" Sasuke groaned. "It's not enough!" he said before wrapping his legs around Naruto's waist bringing their erections closer. A whimper came out of his mouth when Naruto grabbed his ass through his shorts.
Taking control Naruto started grinding their erections together, loving the sweet moans coming out of Sasuke's mouth. All of a sudden he heard footsteps coming their way. He looked down at Sasuke's flushed face and tight pants, realizing that if they continued someone could see Sasuke. "We need to move." Naruto said before trying to pull Sasuke deeper into the forest.
"I can't!" Sasuke whined.
"Why?" Naruto asked even though he never stopped pulling Sasuke along.
"It difficult to move so fast, with an erection in your pants!." Sasuke snarled while looking down towards his pants.
'You've got to be kidding!'
'It's all your fault.'
The footsteps were getting closer now, Naruto quickly decided it would be a lot easier to just carry Sasuke. After making sure they were both comfortable Naruto ran fast into till they reached a clearing that was far enough from the road. Sinking down to the ground , he placed Sasuke in a pile of lush grass that would protect his back from getting hurt during their activities; he immediately started an intense make-out session only taking a moment to stop and pull of their clothes. He could see the pure lust in Sasuke's eyes and knew that there was no way he was going to stop just to finish a mission.
Moving quickly he took Sasuke's dick inside his mouth loving the scream Sasuke made when he started sucking him. Using his tongue to play with the head he lightly scraped his teeth down the sensitive underside all the while listening to the sounds coming from Sasuke's mouth.
"Stop it! You're gonna make me come!" Sasuke warned even though he was earnestly fucking Naruto's face.
Pulling his mouth off of Sasuke's twitching erection he moved lower to slide one finger inside. Never giving him a second to adjust he took the finger out slowly then slammed it back inside.
"More!" Sasuke moaned out before Naruto added two more fingers. Throwing his head back he screamed in pleasure when all three fingers slammed into his prostate. "I'm gonna come" he whimpered when Naruto's mouth went back to envelope his dick. Tightening his hold on Naruto's head with his thighs Sasuke screamed out as Naruto consistently started abusing his prostate. Tears ran down his face when he realized he couldn't come. "I can't come!" he screamed out in frustration as he felt unimaginable waves of pleasure flood his body.
Looking down at his boyfriend's pained face, Naruto didn't waste hesitate when he forced all nine inches of his dick inside. The result was perfect when Sasuke's body twisted and turned while he rode out his orgasm.
"Sasuke I can't." Naruto groaned warning Sasuke that Kyuubi was fighting to take control.
"You don't have to." Sasuke said gently, knowing that fighting against Kyuubi was hurting Naruto.
"But he want's to mate!" Naruto said desperately, realizing that he was losing the fight for control.
"Let him." Sasuke whispered.
Immediately demonic ruby red eyes, replaced oceanic blue. Sasuke felt his body tremble, this was the first time Kyuubi had taken control of Naruto during sex. He whimpered when red eyes stared at his body, he felt himself start twitching and his breaths came out in pants.
"Beautiful." a deep voice murmured.
Sasuke felt strong hands hold his waist before the thrusting began. It started out at a slow pace which made Sasuke moan, it quickly became a hard, fast, and brutal pace that made him scream. He was crying. He was losing himself. It was constantly getting harder to breathe. Everything depended on Naruto and his actions.
"I'm gonna come." they both groaned out at the same time, though Sasuke's voice significantly louder. They're senses were heightened as they both raced to completion at the same time.
Naruto lifted Sasuke's neck tilting up the soft, white skin. Lowering his head down he sank sharp teeth into his neck.
The bite triggered their orgasms full of pain and pleasure binding them both together. Sasuke's eyes closed, as he passed out from exhaustion and too much pleasure. Naruto slipped out of Sasuke when he gained control of his body. That was the only thing thing he could do before falling next to Sasuke's body, closing his eyes as he fell into a deep sleep.
Gaara moved through the forest anger swirling in his eyes.
"They made ME fucking wait for them the whole day. I could have walked to Konoha by myself but NO I had to wait for them. When I find them I'll-" Gaara froze in his tracks when he saw Naruto and Sasuke. He tried to move closer but there was a shield of protection surrounding them.
"Holy shit!" Gaara whispered when he saw the mark of the fox on Sasuke.
"They actually... and he let him."
The realization of what happened between his friends left him speechless.
'Shukaku?'
'Yes Gaara'
'Did they actually do this?'
'Yes'
'Wow... I never thought that Naruto would pick Sasuke.'
'You do realize that when they wake up tomorrow you're going to have to explain everything to them?'
'I know, and I expect them to explain why I had to wait so long.'
Gaara sat down far away enough from the shield but close enough to still see the couple. Waiting for morning to come so he could ask them why they made him wait while they fucked.
Hello Everyone!
I actually rewrote this and updated this in a week!
My next update will be to rewrite chapter 2 which will not be for some time *sorry*
I hope everyone likes this a lot better than the original! Please leave a review, follow and favorite!
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