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profit from. While some of the characters created herein are mine, I am in
no way claiming rights to profit from George Lucas's creation and with this
I am not. I've written this for others to read and enjoy for free.
INSPIRATION: This is an alternative universe of Episode Two showing events as I would have liked to have seen them had Qui-Gon Jinn survived his Duel with Darth Maul in Episode One. I got the idea for this in Episode Two when Count Dooku had Obi-Wan Kenobi captive and Dooku is saying how badly he wished that Qui-Gon was still alive and Obi-Wan said, "He'd never join you."
THE TRUE JEDI ORDER
BY: BULLFROG
CHAPTER ONE
The world of Naboo is one of the Republic's longest sitting members. This world has seen more then it's fair share of bloodshed. At first it was the human settlers against the planet's indigenous species known as the Gungans. This war lasted only a few decades with an uneasy truce ending the fighting. That truce was that the humans would settle the land, the Gungans would settle the oceans and that neither species would violate the other's granted areas. Although the species had a grave dislike for each other, Peace reigned on the planet of Naboo; however that wasn't the case on a galactic scale. The millions of inhabited worlds in the galaxy struggled to form an over all governing body. In this process, disagreements over ideologies, where the galactic capital should be, and every other detail that goes into the creation of a new government from nothing. These disagreements often turned into arguments and these arguments often led to bloodshed among the species. This unrest lasted a few centuries and then peace reigned in the galaxy and on Naboo for thousands of years.
However, this is not the case today. The humans and the Gungans have allied to fend off the invading droid forces of the Trade Federation and for the first time in a thousand years Jedi and Sith meet at Theed Palace. Chaos and death rule the day.
The fighting lulled. All three combatants separated by the red force field. The demonic looking Sith apprentice Darth Maul paces like a caged Rancor. His most immediate opponent Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn takes advantage of this moment's respite to mediate and center himself in the force, forcing out the anger and aggression this fight was building in him. Darth Maul's second opponent, Qui-Gon's Padawan learner Obi-Wan Kenobi was caught several sections of force field behind his master and due to the rashness of youth, his eagerness to eliminate this Sith and prove to the Jedi Council that he is ready to take the trials into knighthood causes him to more closely mirror the Sith than his master.
The force field drops, taking away the barrier that separated the three warriors.
Seizing the apparent inattentiveness of his opponent the Sith activates and swings his double bladed lightsaber in a stroke meant to cleave Qui-Gon into two from right shoulder to left hip. Sensing the attack through the force Qui-Gon summons the force, leaps and rolls over his evil opponent's head while bringing the blade of his weapon to life landing behind him.
The force field once again activates, this time only separating Obi-Wan from the action. The Jedi Master and Sith apprentice hold nothing back from each other. Stroke after stroke, block after block and parry after parry both contestants match their skills with the lightsaber and knowledge of the force in a contest where the opponent that comes up wanting will next be found on a funeral pyre.
The clashing of lightsaber blades reaches a fever pitch when the Sith misplaces a step and hits the ground on his side. Qui-Gon pursues this advantage by arching his blade in a downward stroke. Darth Maul in an attempt to save his own life rolls away from the Jedi Master. The fatal blow was avoided, however the Sith apprentice was not fast enough and the Jedi's blade separated the Sith's arm holding his weapon from his shoulder.
The weaponless Darth Maul holds onto the cauterized stump that was his arm and glares at the Jedi expecting the lack of mercy that he himself would have granted to the Jedi if their fortunes had been reverses.
"Who are you?" Challenged Qui-Gon.
Darth Maul snarled and answered, "I'm the Sith. The true power in the universe. Kill me now Jedi and be done with it, but know that your time and the time of all like you will soon be at hand."
"There has been enough death for the day. Your fate is not for me to decide. I'm taking you before the Jedi Council and there you will be judged." Qui-Gon replied.
Darth Maul snarled again, disgusted at the weakness of the Jedi. He extended his remaining arm and before the Jedi Master could react, blue force lightening raced out of it enveloping Qui-Gon.
Qui-Gon fell to the ground, pain racking every fiber of his being. Despite his long years of training, meditation and practice of the Jedi code fear filled him. The force lightening destroyed his ability to remain calm in the face of certain death, the pain refused to allow him to center himself in the force. All he is able to do is writhe on the ground in agony and scream.
At that moment the red force field again lifted, Obi-Wan charged the evil Sith thumbing the activation switch on his own lightsaber bringing its blue blade to life.
Darth Maul sensed the change of events through the force, but before he could react, his smoldering head went rolling; the headless and armless body remained in its former position before slumping forward.
Obi-Wan raced to his master's side and assisted the older man in standing. Both men walked, the younger assisting the still pain-wrecked senior out of the room. As they exited Qui-Gon said more to himself than anyone else, "The council must be informed right away."
INSPIRATION: This is an alternative universe of Episode Two showing events as I would have liked to have seen them had Qui-Gon Jinn survived his Duel with Darth Maul in Episode One. I got the idea for this in Episode Two when Count Dooku had Obi-Wan Kenobi captive and Dooku is saying how badly he wished that Qui-Gon was still alive and Obi-Wan said, "He'd never join you."
THE TRUE JEDI ORDER
BY: BULLFROG
CHAPTER ONE
The world of Naboo is one of the Republic's longest sitting members. This world has seen more then it's fair share of bloodshed. At first it was the human settlers against the planet's indigenous species known as the Gungans. This war lasted only a few decades with an uneasy truce ending the fighting. That truce was that the humans would settle the land, the Gungans would settle the oceans and that neither species would violate the other's granted areas. Although the species had a grave dislike for each other, Peace reigned on the planet of Naboo; however that wasn't the case on a galactic scale. The millions of inhabited worlds in the galaxy struggled to form an over all governing body. In this process, disagreements over ideologies, where the galactic capital should be, and every other detail that goes into the creation of a new government from nothing. These disagreements often turned into arguments and these arguments often led to bloodshed among the species. This unrest lasted a few centuries and then peace reigned in the galaxy and on Naboo for thousands of years.
However, this is not the case today. The humans and the Gungans have allied to fend off the invading droid forces of the Trade Federation and for the first time in a thousand years Jedi and Sith meet at Theed Palace. Chaos and death rule the day.
The fighting lulled. All three combatants separated by the red force field. The demonic looking Sith apprentice Darth Maul paces like a caged Rancor. His most immediate opponent Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn takes advantage of this moment's respite to mediate and center himself in the force, forcing out the anger and aggression this fight was building in him. Darth Maul's second opponent, Qui-Gon's Padawan learner Obi-Wan Kenobi was caught several sections of force field behind his master and due to the rashness of youth, his eagerness to eliminate this Sith and prove to the Jedi Council that he is ready to take the trials into knighthood causes him to more closely mirror the Sith than his master.
The force field drops, taking away the barrier that separated the three warriors.
Seizing the apparent inattentiveness of his opponent the Sith activates and swings his double bladed lightsaber in a stroke meant to cleave Qui-Gon into two from right shoulder to left hip. Sensing the attack through the force Qui-Gon summons the force, leaps and rolls over his evil opponent's head while bringing the blade of his weapon to life landing behind him.
The force field once again activates, this time only separating Obi-Wan from the action. The Jedi Master and Sith apprentice hold nothing back from each other. Stroke after stroke, block after block and parry after parry both contestants match their skills with the lightsaber and knowledge of the force in a contest where the opponent that comes up wanting will next be found on a funeral pyre.
The clashing of lightsaber blades reaches a fever pitch when the Sith misplaces a step and hits the ground on his side. Qui-Gon pursues this advantage by arching his blade in a downward stroke. Darth Maul in an attempt to save his own life rolls away from the Jedi Master. The fatal blow was avoided, however the Sith apprentice was not fast enough and the Jedi's blade separated the Sith's arm holding his weapon from his shoulder.
The weaponless Darth Maul holds onto the cauterized stump that was his arm and glares at the Jedi expecting the lack of mercy that he himself would have granted to the Jedi if their fortunes had been reverses.
"Who are you?" Challenged Qui-Gon.
Darth Maul snarled and answered, "I'm the Sith. The true power in the universe. Kill me now Jedi and be done with it, but know that your time and the time of all like you will soon be at hand."
"There has been enough death for the day. Your fate is not for me to decide. I'm taking you before the Jedi Council and there you will be judged." Qui-Gon replied.
Darth Maul snarled again, disgusted at the weakness of the Jedi. He extended his remaining arm and before the Jedi Master could react, blue force lightening raced out of it enveloping Qui-Gon.
Qui-Gon fell to the ground, pain racking every fiber of his being. Despite his long years of training, meditation and practice of the Jedi code fear filled him. The force lightening destroyed his ability to remain calm in the face of certain death, the pain refused to allow him to center himself in the force. All he is able to do is writhe on the ground in agony and scream.
At that moment the red force field again lifted, Obi-Wan charged the evil Sith thumbing the activation switch on his own lightsaber bringing its blue blade to life.
Darth Maul sensed the change of events through the force, but before he could react, his smoldering head went rolling; the headless and armless body remained in its former position before slumping forward.
Obi-Wan raced to his master's side and assisted the older man in standing. Both men walked, the younger assisting the still pain-wrecked senior out of the room. As they exited Qui-Gon said more to himself than anyone else, "The council must be informed right away."