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Luke's POV
The boat rocked side to side. The Professor and I were going to America. I really didn't know why. I didn't bother to ask.
"Professor, why are we going to America?"
"You see Luke; I received a letter from Miss Marilyn. She is an old friend of mine. Here, you should read the letter." He handed me the letter. I opened the envelope carefully. I pulled out the piece of paper. Unfolding the letter, I saw that it was going to take a while to read.
Dear Hershel Layton,
How are you doing? I have heard you solved many mysteries in London. Well I have one more for you. You see, people have been disappearing in my town. My husband is among of does that disappeared. Please, I need your help. I live in New York, New York. I will be waiting for you at the docks. That is, if you decided to come. Thank you.
Sincerely,
Marilyn Daniels
I still didn't understand. Mysterious disappearances? How could they disappear so fast?
"I still don't understand, Professor." I said.
"Don't worry Luke, we'll find out soon" He responded.
The ship arrived at our destination. Everyone started rushing out to the docks. The Professor and I stayed back until everyone poured out. After a while we walked down the ramp and started looking around for Marilyn.
A woman with dark hair and a black dress approached us. A girl around my age followed behind. She also had dark hair, but her hair was curly, not straight. She wore a red and black t-shirt with skinny jeans.
"Hello Hershel." Called out the woman."It's me, Marilyn. This young lady right here is Heather." She pointed the girl. Heather smiled at me and just waved at the Professor.
"It is wonderful to see you again, Marilyn." Added the Professor."Now, about the mysteries ."
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