This is a poem from Shasta's perspective of the crossing of the Winding Arrrow into Archenland. I wrote it during NaPoWriMo (National Poetry Writing Month) Like most people I appreciate reviews :)

I am not C.

Crossing the Winding Arrow

The Winding Arrow winds it's way

East from the mountains to the sea

Crashing against rocks, shooting spray

This is my homeland's boundary


The green North is calling me

From the opposite shore

Calling me home to be

Free there forever more


We find a place where we can ford

And wade into the swirling freshness

Making our way ever toward

The great green banks of wondrous gladness


The river clatter fills my ears

Dragonflies dart swiftly

A gentle wind takes all my cares

A strange excitement fills me


Charging through water churning

Our journey is nearly done

Droplets of water turning

into diamonds in the sun


Bree calls out, voice loud and grand

As we step onto the northern bank

"Friends we are in Archenland!"

The river dripping from his flank