Here's the Prologue of my new fan fict. it started with only Sam and Danny being allies, then came up with this. Hope you like it, I know you will. Review please!!
There was an invasion and all the kids of Eluiz guarded all the adults and kids into the roll call place. Scor smiled walking down to the roll call as you see the general. He had finished whipping Maddie as you can hear her scream in pain.
"Excellent number 665," smiled Scor as the general nodded.
"Number 670, take this one to the prison hold," commanded the general as he walked with Scor.
The general was walking down the halls with Scor as he looked into the prison cells seeing all the poisoners were in there, some were wounded and some were in bandages.
"I'm impressed with your skills and efforts number 665," said Scor.
"Indeed," said the general.
"Where's the goth girl?" asked Scor.
"She's dead," answered the general, "let's say I've straightened her up."
"Excellent, and the Fentons?" asked Scor.
"They're in the care of number 670," answered the general.
"Seems very trustworthy," smiled Scor.
"I know," focused the general.
"And we are succeeding, thanks to you and the kids of Eluiz," stroke Scor as the general smiled wickedly.
"I still wanna know about the Gray girl," questioned Scor as the general showed his fist.
"I've taken her to my prison, she's better taken care of there," smiled the general as Scor grinned big.
"How many did you give her?" asked Scor.
"Fifty whips," answered the general.
"The boy that talks too much?" questioned Scor.
"With me, he'll be better off with his little girlfriend," said the general.
"And the smart girl?" asked Scor.
"In my care and was given a hundred beatings this week," answered the general.
"And you?" asked Scor as the general took off his mask to reveal springy black hair with baby blue eyes and an evil smile.
"No longer Phantom," smiled Danny as he laughed evilly.
It was true, there was no one that controlled him, nor any enemy that overshadowed him. He was truly the general of the kids of Eluiz.