Disclaimer- Wow! I don't own warriors! Erin Hunter does, yes!


Format- So, part 1 is disclaimer, Part 2 (you are reading it right now) is Format, part 3 will be the rest of this chapter. This chapter is about Brightheart and Swiftpaw being attacked by dogs. The next will be about Swiftpaw's feelings. The next will be about Brightheart's feelings. Next will be Swiftpaw's feelings after he died. Next, Brightheart's feelings about being maimed. Then, Brightheart's feelings about Cloudtail. Finally, Cloudtail's feelings for Brightheart! This will be the LONGEST haikus story I will have ever written. Enjoy!


Cloudtail was a warriors

Why couldn't I be one too?

I didn't get it


Cloudtail had less training

It was all because his mentor

Fireheart, deputy

We should have been warriors

But, no, because our mentors

Bluestar did not trust


Something was eating,

Our prey near Snakerocks

It was time tit kill it

Bluestar would know then

We deserved to be warriors

So quickly we left

Thornpaw, Brightpaw, I

Thornpaw decided to leave

We carried on

Brightpaw was unsure

She thought we would get trouble

And we did get it


There was a huge dog

It's beady eyes glistened

No, not one! A pack!


That wasn't a good choice.

I was dead. Brightpaw was maimed.

But life carries on.