Hello Everyone! This is actually my first fan fiction but I have been on the site much longer than that. I am asking for constructive criticism. Thank you for reading this and I hop you enjoy. All Pokemon do not belong to me, they belong to Nintendo and Gamefreak. My chances of owning Pokemon=beating a spiritomb with wonder guard using a level 1 magikarp
The Curse of the Zoroark
Chapter 1
"" = Normal Speech
Italics = Thoughts
Jack was walking through the forest on Route 1 near Nuvema town. Tomorrow he was finally going to receive a stater pokemon and something about a surprise from Professor Juniper. She was well known around the region for her and her father's studies. Why was he out here though? Well Jack had received a dare from Bianca and Cheren to walk out around here without a pokemon. His favorite pokemon of all time was Zorua though. He loved all pokemon but his favorite was the Zorua evolution line. However he had gotten quite lost. Now that our background is out of the way lets move to Jack's point of view now.
"I'm almost starting to regret coming out here.", Jack said rather worried as he looked around. All he could see were trees, trees, and more trees. "Hello! Anyone out there!", Jack yelled out trying to find anyone who could help. This was such a stupid idea. I knew I shouldn't have listened to Bianca and Cheren. Jack thought as he kept looking for the exit. Jack noticed how it was starting to get dark and kept on walking forward. He had walked into a Zoroark's nesting den however. Inside were its eggs too. The mother Zoroark saw the intruder, a human boy, and only reacted on instinct, not even bothering to think that boy named Jack might just be lost. Jack could only watch in horror as the Zoroark slash into him. His favorite pokemon was attacking him and he was too afraid to do anything but hit the Zoroark as her blood dripped into his own blood stream. No one would know what the dominant pokemon gene could do to a human. Jack was slipping into unconsciousness as the Zoroark realized its mistake. This was the human boy who helped take care of the pokemon in the ranch. She grabbed onto the boy and put up an illusion of an adult female as she ran to the gate of Nuvema town with one of her eggs. She felt it was one of the few ways possible that she could apologize to him. Only a little bit later in the small town of Nuvema Town would someone notice the fourteen year old laying there with a lot of scratches over his chest and his shirt mostly destroyed. As he was picked up and rushed back to his mom's house, he would have a nightmare. Inside the nightmare he felt as if a massive pain was over his entire body as dark black fur grew on his skin in the nightmare. "M..o.m." Jack would mutter as his mother covered his chest in bandage. The people with his mom were saying that she was lucky that Jack wasn't killed or bled out. They were even happy with the fact that the injuries were healing pretty fast.
Once everyone had calmed down and left only Jack's mother remained with the egg her son had with him. "Honey, I just wish I knew what happened to you." Jack's mother would say with tears coming down from her eyes as she place the egg in the incubator machine and placed it next to her son. She would than get up and start walking out of the door as she took one last look at Jack. "Just be safe my baby." Jack's mother said as she turned off the light and closed the door.
There we go with my first chapter ever on I hope you all enjoyed and I will be sure to upload a longer and better chapter soon! Please leave a review and I will try to fix those mistakes in the next chapter or two.