Untold Love stories
These are the stories that have been sitting on my computer for like forever and I feel like they deserve to be read. Even though they aren't completed or even close to a full story, I want to hear everyone's opinions. I want to know if they are worth finishing or be rewritten or just forgotten. They are going to be separated in chapters/parts because of how long each story is. Once each chapter/part are all done, I'm going to mark this title as completed and then delete it. Once I see what everyone has decided for each story then they will become separate stories and be continued whenever I can. Also each chapter/part will be dated of when they were lasted worked on and each story does have their own title. They will have everything that I have written and nothing will be changed until later on. I would like either reviews or private message. This title will be up until a certain amount of reviews and private messages are received.
Part 1
2/8/16
A Royal Ball
This story has been on my computer for an almost a year. This isn't my normal style but after seeing Cinderella I decided to do a different kind of story of Toshiro and Karin. Sorry if it's sorta messed up. I haven't done something like this before and I don't know much about royal balls and royalty. So please don't criticize or anything, I tried. And it is definitely out of my comfort zone. Once again for my followers I'm back and I promise to update as much as I can. I know that I promised to update all of my other stories. I'm trying to do that. I'm just having writers block right now. I am also trying to rewrite Love at First Sight. Now I'm going to shut up let you enjoy this story.
Summary – the royal family have decided to throw a masquerade ball for the prince. His father wants him to find a wife. He doesn't care if his son is in love with a poor country girl, all he cares is his son to be happy.
Note: this almost like the story of Cinderella but I will try not to copy it. Also it will defiantly follow the same storyline the Kurosaki family and their lost. I'm just going to change a few characters around.
Note: Momo is the step daughter, Rangiku is the other step daughter of Yoruichi,
Italics –to themselves
The first look
Somewhere in the country
Masaki please don't leave our children motherless. Isshin a who was a huge goof and loved his wife who was dying. Their kids Ichigo, Yuzu and Karin were waiting for their father to let them see their mother before she has go.
Years later
Father do we really need to throw this royal ball? Ukitake Jushiro just shakes his head at his son. Shiro please be at least grateful to have some accompany around. What's this ball for any way? Sighs, Shiro how many times do I need to tell you? As many times I need to understand the meaning of finding someone who catches my eye. To me it's pointless. Son, that's how I met your mother. Even I didn't like the idea but I learned how to love your mom to day she died.
I know that dad. Ukitake just looked at his son. "My has Toshiro grew. I wish you were here Yuki, to see what this day would become. To see our son find someone to love and marry. Toshiro has gotten stubborn by each passing day and I think he got it from you.