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Tris

A million thoughts are racing through my head, is my family ok? Mom, dad and Caleb I scream as the gun shots get louder and louder. I can't think straight, I need to save my family and myself but how do I do that. I slowly open the door to my room peek my head out of the room to make sure that is clear. I can hear the voices downstairs, their footsteps creeping closer and closer. "Is now or never Beatrice" my father says as he and mom come out with loaded guns. I'm in a state of shock to do anything. Where did get those things, my dad must have seen my clueless expression because next thing I know he is yelling at me.

"You guys run to the guess room and hide in the closet we will distract them" dad tells me looking at me with fears in his eyes. Caleb grabs my hand and we sprint to the guess room locking ourselves in the closet. I hold Caleb's hand tightly, I close my eyes shut I feel like I'm in the middle of a war zone. Gun shots after gun shots and all I can do is pray that my parents are ok. After a few rounds we can hear the thumping the bodies make as they hit the floor. After what seems a lifetime I let go Caleb's hand, we both just stand there to petrify to move or utter a single word.

"Check the house is empty we don't want to leave any witness" says a cold voice.

"Yes sir!" someone else retorts.

I want to cry, scream because neither of those voices belongs to our parents so that can only mean one thing. They are probably dead. Caleb just stands there hidden in the closet hoping they won't find us. We hear the guess room door creak open I see a silhouette checking every corner of the room. I can't make out how they look like. They open the closet door thankfully they don't see us we are hiding behind a bunch of clothes and bins that mom uses for storage. I let out a breath that I didn't notice I was holding once the man closes the closet door and walks away from our hiding spot.

"Sir no one else is in the house" a male voice calls out.

"We need to find those stupid kids" no one from this family can stay alive." The cold male voice says.

"Let's go we need to let the Chief know the plan went accordingly, the Prior's are gone" The same cold voice speaks. After what seemed like hours Caleb and I step out of the room slowly making our way to the door, we stare at each other not knowing who is going to open the door first.

"For God sake Caleb we need to go NOW" I scold him I know he is scare but we need to know if mom and dad are ok. As I open the door I can't believe what my eyes are seeing. There is blood everywhere; there is blood splatter on the walls. There is a body right in front of my room his brains are oozing out of his head. I see another body in the far end of the hallway bullets holes everywhere. Then I see them my parents I run towards them, my parents lay dead in front me.

I bring my hand to my mouth to try to muffle the screams that want to escape me. But there is no use in trying not to cry, my parents are dead my whole world just collapsed all I have left is Caleb.

"Caleb here" I scream to my brother, I kneel next to their lifeless bodies. I pick my mother lifeless body rocking it back and forth. I bring her face close to mine I take a mental picture of her face detailing every line because after today I will no longer see my mom. I cry until I can't cry no more. I look up for a second to see if Caleb is with dad. My brother holds dad close to him as well I don't know if Caleb is to shock to cry, but he doesn't shed a single tear for our parents. I can't help wonder why.

"We need to call the police Caleb." I tell him

"I already did Beatrice" when the hell did he do that I think to myself.

We wait there for the cops to get here; they seem to be taking forever but right before I can protest to tell Caleb to call again a police officer shouts from downstairs.

"Hello, is anyone here I'm officer Amar"

"Up here" my brother shouts, I'm too distraught to say anything.

"I'm officer Amar, I've sent for help" he talks to us as if we were children.

The ambulance arrives taking our parents dead bodies to officially pronounce them dead at the hospital. Officer Amar says we need to go to the police station for questioning. I can't think clearly so I decided to ask if it would be ok for me to go the following day. Caleb however wanted to get it over. We needed to plan the funerals but we didn't know how to handle all if this at once. I called aunt Tory so she can help us with the arrangements.

"HI! Aunt Tori" my voice breaks as I try to convey the words out of my mouth; I go on and tell her what happen to our family and how we need her to help us with the funerals arrangements for our parents. She agrees to come and will be taking the next flight to Chicago.

I head to the hospital since I will be going to the police station tomorrow I want to spend some time with my parents before they get put in the morgue. On the way there I replay the whole thing back in my head. I wonder who send those men to kill our family. I need to know who this Chief person is and why he wants our entire family dead. I know there are some bad people looking for my brother and me so they can kill us. I need answer and I will stop at nothing to get them.

The next day I wake up to get ready to head down to the police station; I decided to spend the night at a hotel. Caleb went to his girlfriend Susan house, she is a sweetheart but I thought it would be best for them to spend some alone time and I sure didn't want to be the third wheel.

I head out to the police station. As I get closer I take a deep breath because I know I will get badger with tons of questions.

"I'm here to see officer Amar" I tell the officer sitting in the front desk.

"And you are?" she asks me.

"Beatrice Prior he told me to stop by today" I say trying not to sound annoy.

'Of course you are" she directs me to his office,

"Thank you" the words barely leaving my mouth.

I step into his office, there nothing special about just a small desk against the wall and two chairs. I notice he has to have at least twenty honor plaques. I guess he must be good at his job and gets recognized for it. I hope he is good enough to find the people who slaughter my parents and want to kill Caleb and me.

"Hi!" I shyly speak

"Good morning Miss Prior please take a seat and we can get started" he points to one of the chairs. I clear my throat.

"Please let's get started I don't want to be here more than I should be" I state, he takes this as his cue to pull out his tape-recorder and begin the interrogation.

After leaving the police station I feel drained. I go back to the hotel. I can't help but feel that someone is watching me. I get in my jeep and drive off to the hotel but I can't shake the feeling that someone was watching me. "I hope Caleb is ok" I talk to myself. Maybe I should drive to Susan's and make sure everything is good.

I park in the parking lot that is next to Susan's complex. Right when I'm about to exit the vehicle a car halts right in front of the complex, two men with guns step out. One of them open the door and a man steps out. He is tall you can tell he is well-built his suit clings to his body showing his muscle through it. I can't make out his face other than that his nose hooks at the end. After a moment that feels like an eternity my brother comes outside he doesn't look scare his face shows no emotion. The tall man hands Caleb a thick envelope, and then he says the unthinkable I see him mouth "thank you Chief" to the tall man, I gasp. My heart starts to beat faster and faster. My feel like something drop in the pit of my stomach when I realize that my brother was the one who helped those people kill mom and dad.

I quickly realize that I need to get the hell out of here before Caleb notices my car. I get to leave unnoticed, I don't where to go or what to do. I drive for hours stopping at a gas station to get gas and something to eat. My eyes are getting tire I can't keep them open for much longer I pull over to a motel that is at the side of the road.

"Hello, I need a room for the next couple of days" I tell the guy working over the customer service counter.

"How much a night?" I realize I don't have much money.

"Well pretty woman we don't get too many of you around here" he bluntly states while licking his lips.

He sends shivers down my spine because something in my gut tells me I should run the opposite way that everything about him screams danger. I gulp I have cotton mouth I have lost the ability to speak. I breathe in and out and tell him in my most threating voice

"Don't ever look at me that way or I swear I will make you regret it" never breaking the gaze

"So ummm Robert is it?" –"I need you to get me a room key, and stop asking me questions, is that clear?"

'Crystal" he barely utters.

Once I get to my room I see there is only a bed, a nightstand next to it holding a lamp on top of it. The air condition doesn't seem to work, there is a small window that faces the other side. I make my way to the bathroom wanting to wash all the pain I have endure in the last twenty-four hours. The bathroom is small but I don't care because I'm not looking for luxury but rather comfort. The hot water hits me like a tidal wave tingling my body I stand under the shower for a few minutes I can no longer contain my tears and the memory of my parents and how their son, my brother betrayed us. But one thing is for sure no matter what I have to or who I have to against I will find those responsible and I will make them pay.

"Caleb Prior, you better be ready" the tears stop I have no time to mourn them, when this is all done I will mourn until then I will seek revenge.

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