Hi People of the World..........

This is my first story and it might(could) be a really bad story.

I admit I have grammar problems and English is my second language.

Enjoii-I always spell my Ys with and ii at the end....XD

also I mixed a little( a lot) with the real storyline......

P.S. A lot of people are O.C.

"Dumplings for one dollar!One dollar dumplings!Anybody want any dumplings?" Tenten continuously hollered."Mom, maybe we need to add something else rather than something like rice balls or dried mango."She suggested to her mother."We could, if we had enough money,"Shizune replied after a few thoughts."Mom, can you tell me why Dad left us again?" I was one of those girls who were born by "accidental sex", mom still loved me though,but she would never tell me who my dad was or why he replied by saying,"He died a few months after you were born.A man named Zen shot him because of an earlier argument between them.,"Shizune seemed pretty calm about talking about her deceased."Come it's getting late, let's go home." Tenten nodded."Wonder why we have to go home, it's only 6:30."Tenten pushing the cart was very emotional about hearing her mom's tragic mishap.

"AGHHHHHHHHHHH!" a scream came from a car and her mother looked at each other, then hurried to the scene. Fortunately(yes it's a good thing, almost) Tenten didn't know where she was going and ran the cart into the robber. Tenten then grabbed a metal pole and slammed it against the man's back."ughhhha!!"the man cried."Ha!not so tough now,huh?"Tenten gloated to of what happens next, Tenten grabbed the man by the arm and dragged something happened.

'PWAHNG!PWAHNG!PWAHNG!'three gunshots were aimed into Tenten's lower back."HAGHHHHHHHHHHH!"Tenten screamed in hitman ran away hiding behind a bush to stay hidden."Tenten,Tenten, are you okay?Oh God, Oh God!We need to get you to a hospital,"Shizune was looking around for anyone to woman who was getting robbed came with a boy with spikey brown hair."Oh my,"The woman said."Naruto, get the car and drive her to the nodded."Are you okay dear,oh gosh, I'm so sorry."She kept going on claiming the came in with the car."Help me pick her up Naruto."The lady told the young boy. Tenten was laying in the back seat with her mom and Naruto driving to a hospital called Miracle. "Thank you so much!! How can I ever repay you?" Shizune asked."Oh!You don't need to do anything at all!And thank you for stopping that man from stealing my purse...but say, do you have a job?"She questioned."Actually no, why?" Shizune questioned."Um....never mind it seems to needy." The woman said."By the way, my name is Kanayo."Mine is Shizune."

In a matter of time they reached Miracle.Naruto was carrying Tenten."Wow....she's....so beautiful."He thought."Can you please help my has a bullet in her stomach and is losing too much blood,"Again Shizune was surprisingly calm."K. Follow me please,"the nurse directed.------------After about two and a half hours Tenten finally recovered."Tenten,we have bad news and good bad news, our rent can't be paid so we're moving the good news is that we're staying with the Yamanakas for a while."Shizune noted."Huh?Who are the Yamanakas?"Tenten questioned."Oh,they're the people who gave us a ride here."Shizune answered."We have all our clothes packed and in a few moments we will be heading to their house." Tenten was kinda knocked out, but she had enough energy to get up and walk.

SORRY I SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story chapter is short and sucky

but the next one will be better and longer!!!!!!!!!

DON'T FLAME THIS IS MY FIRST STORY

I SUCK!!