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"Are you sure they do not pose a threat?" asked the Third Hokage. The Third is wearing his usual Hokage outfit with his pipe in his mouth (sorry not good at description).

"Hai, the mission was just bought up because the council believes that they need more information about this place in case they ever pose a threat. This should be an easy enough mission that genin could do it," Answered a random chunin. The chunin is wearing gray cargo pants with a matching long sleeve shirt and his chunin vest. He has his hiai-ate on his forehead and a weapon pouch strapped onto his right leg. He has brown messy hair and brown eyes and stands about 5ft. 6in. tall.

"In that case I think I know just the team for this mission," replied the Third as he looked at the folder containing the teams that passed for genin a month a go.

OK this is just the prologue. Please give me advice. I need help with grammar, spelling, and well basically anything that has to do with English, besides reading. Also feel free to give me tips. I need tips. This is my first non-one shot. I will not update until I get 5 reviews. I will take flames and anonymous reviews.