( Hi, I know the grammar is off, but please judge on the quality of the story. I, like many fanfic users, am trying to become a better writer. Although, flames are welcome.)
I know of a secret, a secret that may not be uttered to a soul. For this secret could alter the balance of the universe, this secret could ruin lives, and this secret could ruin love.
I will not speak of my identity. This secret my friends affect even you. I should have warned you, by reading this you know too much, yet so little. The story is a teenage love affair turned deadly. Jealousy, Hatred, Apathy, and greed have led to the death of one. Trust me, the murder is who you least expect, I know because it is me. I will go to bed now, slightly satisfied with my dark deed, when they find her body they will point at each other, but never at me. I am not their friend, so I couldn't have. No, not sweet lovable me.
Eli-
The mattress felt like a cloud. Cloud nine to be more specific, Julia and I had just had the most perfect night together. She embraced me and I embraced her, our bodies moved in harmony, her long auburn hair dancing between my fingers. I sighed this was love this was happiness; too bad it was all just a dream. Julia and I had been dating for a year now, don't get me wrong it was a fantastic year but somehow I wanted more, am I selfish for wanting what I already have? Julia is wonderful although, she would never go around giving herself to just anyone. I sighed and walked towards my computer. I didn't turn it on; I just starred at the screen. After 2 minutes of starring I checked my phone for overnight messages. Three texts from Clare and… NINE calls from Julia, she must have been in trouble. I dialed my voice mail. I put it on speaker as I looked for something to throw on.
"Eli…. I- please, help me. They've left the room, I don't know where I am, please Eli"
at that point my heart stopped, I grabbed a pair of jeans from the floor and left my muscle tee on.
"Next message"
the computerized voice ushered.
"Eli"
Julia's voice was a whisper "they have me Eli please wake up. I know where I am now its 937-"
she was cut off by a loud clunk,
"shut up; take the phone from her"
the voice said, it was distinctly familiar. The rest of the messages were just filter noises. I ran down the stairs and past the kitchen, Morty was in my drive way, I unlocked him, dropping the keys many times in my haste. I drove over to Julia's house hoping I was still in my dream, that Julia wasn't in real danger Clare's messages were all too easily forgotten, I loved Clare and she loved me but it was a sibling type of love . I walked up to her apartment door and knocked. Her mother answered the door
"Eli, hi"
she looked depressed, I knew something was up.
"Ms. Lula is Julia home?"
then the tears flowed. Faster and stronger then Niagara falls, where I had taken Julia for our one year anniversary.
"She's dead…"
Clare-
I texted him three times, yet no reply. I wanted to see if he knew. The whole town was buzzing about it. News travels fast, even news that happened merely eight hours ago. My best friend Julia Lula was dead and gone. A business woman found her body on the side of the street as she was walking home from her night shift. Eli must be devastated, they were in love, I hate that this kind of thing had to happen to Julia, she was perfect in every sense of the word. Long auburn hair, light green eyes, and plump lips. She was a very confident person. So unlike me, my auburn hair was nothing like hers, she had curly hair while I had damaged, unruly hair. I was weak minded and spineless, my only friend was Eli, and my dull blue eyes didn't stand out. That's why Eli went after her instead of me, I had convinced myself of the fact. I thought we fit perfectly together, maybe fate was giving us a chance. Is it bad that I was a tad bit excited that Julia was gone? No, it was fate. They identified her body quickly, after all she was well known. I chastised myself for thinking the way I had. My best friend was dead and nothing was going to make me feel better. Not even the thought of Eli. The dark night, as Julia and I liked to call him. For some reason I felt like she wasn't dead, I sighed and got out of bed. I went over to my vanity and starred and started to brush my hair. Suddenly a figure came up behind me, it was Julia… Yep, it's a fact I'm delusional.
A girl in love, a boy who has lost love. All because of little, old me. I bet your wondering why I was so carless. Why didn't I bury her body? Why did I just leave her on the side of the rode? All in due time, the love of my life will soon be mine now that Julia is out of the way. I sound Psychotic don't I? well, maybe I am, they shouldn't have let me into society anyway. Eli will soon come crawling to me. And anyone who stands in my way will end up like sad, little Julia Lula. Ah I have a great life.
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