Author note: Hi, this Is my first story and I'm really nerves so bare with me. Follow and review if you like it!

Summery: very modern Cinderella story kickin it stile! I guess you can say my life is like a faerie tale... I have the evil step mom and sisters. From there it gets a little weird. I'm not the girly kind of girl, in-fact I'm a black belt in karate, and I also have a bets friend named Gracie, but that's all people know about me... and soon... that's going to change! Sorry for the bad summery, story better than it sounds! Read and revue!

Caricature description:

Kim- you all know what she looks like! And acts like... you know... very sarcastic and strong.

Jerry- you know him to

Jack- do I even have to say it!

Gracie- brunet. Same height as Kim, loves fashion, and is a brown belt in karate!

Lola (step mom)- very tall and bony. Mean, and controlling. Red curly hair.

Tris (step sister)- The nicer one of the two, red strait hare. Not as slutty as Donna. Wares way to much makeup.

Donna (step sister)- The most slutty and popular girl in school. Red curly hair. Wares way to much makeup.

Kim's POVE

"Beeep Beeeeeeeeeep Beeeep" I jolted awake to the sound of my alarm clock. "ggggggrrrrrrrrr" I hit the off button. (italics thoughts) YaY, its a Monday, note the sarcasm. I get out of bed and go to my closet to get changed. I put on some skinny jeans and a tank top with the British flag on it and pull on my combat boots, next I put my hair in a messy bun and add a little eye liner to my face after washing my face and brushing my teeth. I look in the mirror, "not bad".

I go down stairs to make breakfast for the devils I'm sapost to call family, leaving my hell of a room for the day, if I haven't mentioned it before, my room is in the attic. I take out a pitcher and fill it with water and poor a cup of pewter diet drink mix and stir, Than I make my breakfast, eggs, bacon, and toast. Your probably thinking, "don't they eat more" and the answer to your question is no.

I eat my breakfast quickly and go upstairs to wake them up. After that war I grab my skateboard and head out the door, not wanting them to bother me this morning because I had a funny feeling it was only going to get better from here.

As I speed down the road I notes a moving truck at the house a few houses down. Hmmm there must be someone moving in...

I get to school and walk to my locker, hoping to find my BFF Gracie waiting for me. As I round the corner sheer enough there she was waiting.

"hay Gracie", "hay!"she answers back almost making me scream from the sheer loudness and excitement in her voice. " OK OK, calm down, what has gotten in to you this time", " well..."she started, " They just announced when the school dance is going to be, it's in a week!eeeeeeekkkkkk!", "OK OK, jeeees, whats the theme?" "not shore, but I do know that your sister Donna is planing it." ow grate, another dance shes planing, I cant wait... note the sarcasm. I grown and Gracie frowns. "your not excited how come?" "you know very well how come, shes probably going to give me jobs to do around the house, so I cant go!" Gracie's face turned determined, " NO this time your going no matter what, and I'm going to make you the most fabulous dress you will ever see, and so help me, you will enjoy it!" "wow well, whats your plan to get me out of that jail I call a home?" "not shore" she admitted.

The bell rang and we headed to home room. We sat down and waited for atendenc... after she calls all are names she says that there Is a new student and that he should be here any minute. Hmmmm I wonder if its a kid from down the street of my house.

He finally walks in, and may I just say WOW, he is like a freaken god, that's how beautiful he is. Our teacher introduces him " this is Jackson Brewer..." he interrupts " you can call me jack." " O, OK, Jack well, can you tell the class something about yourself?" " OK, ummmmm... well I'm a black belt in karate, I love skateboarding, and my best friend moved here as well, his name is Jerry. And well that's about it."he finishes. "thanks for the info jack, ummm you can take a seat right over there." o god, shes pointing to the desk right next to me. He says thanks and takes his seat.

The teacher proceeds to talk, " since today we have half a day , you can have a free period and do what you wont, ill be in the office." with that she walks out the room.

Every one storms to Jack, I have a felling hes going to be popular very soon, considering that he is now the hottest kid in school, he already is popular. My step sister Donna confirms it by flirting with him and whispering, possibly seductive, words in his ear. He looks disgusted right when he sees her, and his face expression only worsens when she was talking.

He pushes her away and said something. Because me and Gracie were on the other side of the room we couldn't hear there conversation. Donna looks pissed now and storms away. Wow he just turned down the "hottest" girl in school. I wonder what he said.

The rest of the day gos by pretty quickly. I wonder whats going to happen tomorrow?

Authors note: I hope you liked the first chapter, The next will be in Jacks POVE about his first day. Follow, favorite, revue, and pm... all make me update faster!

-Shawna :)

p.s. I'm a horrible speller, it is soooo bad, so sorry about the mistakes.