Hello, this is my first Dragon Ball Z fan fic that I have ever created and I would welcome any critique that you can offer, I am uploading this story straight from my Ipad since I am actually too lazy to do it straight from my computer. I will try to upload any new chapters as soon as I can but for now I will upload the prologue and will choose the speed at which I will upload chapter 2 based on your responses and reviews. Please give me any advice you can offer for I am new at this and would like to publish a successful first story on here.

Revival Vengeance

The sayians have all been killed but send in 2 of their best sayians to take revenge on Frieza and the rest of their race by bringing them back from otherworld. Will they be able to escape underworld without worry of the consequences, and will they defeat Frieza and the rest of his race to avenge the extinction of the sayians?

Chapter 1

Prologue

"What do you mean we can't see him?" yelled the sayian King Vegeta.

"I'm sorry but Bardock will remain in heaven, while you and the rest of your race will remain in hell," replied King Yama.

"But he is the only one who has actually defeated an ancestor of Frieza, and to top it off he is also the legendary super sayian."

"I know that, and thats why he has earned his right to stay in heaven, I will not disturb him just so he could train 2 of your young sayians."

"These 2 sayians share a special bond with eachother, they are brothers who seperated are already powerful, but when they fight as a team for some reason their power levels combine and they share eachothers power. Its almost like there is one power in 2 bodies, they are one of the most powerful sayians we have, and we need Bardock to train them to be stronger, to make them into super sayians, and to tell them the weaknesses of an ice-jin such as Freiza."

"I don't care Vegeta, I will not bother Bardock just so he could train your sayians for your own personal gain, and thats final, now get out of my way, your holding up the line, and you only have a few more hours up here before I send you back to hell."

King Vegeta began to pace around thinking to himself, how it is that a low class sayian had been sent back in time from Freiza's blast, achieved the super sayian form, and defeated Freiza's ancestor Chilled. He had understood that Bardocks power level was close to that of his but he can't figure out how it is he died and Bardock didn't. It was a mystery to himself and the rest of the sayians currently residing in hell. He decided he would find out an answer to Bardocks weird situation.

"Yama, from one king to another, tell me, how is it that Bardock was sent back in time from Freiza's Death Ball?"

"To be honest I don't know the answer to that, all I know is that Freiza destroying the planet must have created a worm hole, sending Bardock back in time causing him to live with pre-historic ancestral Tuffles."

"Ah I see, maybe it would be better if I get the answer out of him."

"Oh no you don't Vegeta, I know your trying to get Bardock to come out, it was a good attempt but you can't fool me that easy."

"Dammit man, we would be doing the universe a favor if we got rid of that monster and all his race, we need him to train these 2 Sayians for the good of the universe."

"I'll take the job."

Both kings turn around to see the first super sayian to ever live, Bardock.

Hope you all enjoyed the prologue, I know its short, but its the prologue, just a taste of what you should expect in the future. Remember the 3 "R's" Read, review, and respond.

I will upload the rest from the laptop.

Till next time amigos.