OK so this is my first story! Don't hate! Please review!

I was devastated by my brothers death. When he died I thought, 'I have nothing left to lose.' So, I went to look for a job. I couldn't find anything at first, but then I came to the Trancy manor. I walked in to meet an amber-eyed butler. "His highness will see you now," he said. 'His highness, what the hell?' I thought. He walked me to the garden where a blonde boy was skipping around. "Hello Claude!" he said happily, "Oh, is this the maid I'm supposed to interview?" "Yes your highness," Claude said. "Alright then, come over here," he said, motioning to me. I walked closer to him. "What's your name?" he asked. "Eliza Hellsing," I replied. "Age?" "I'm seventeen sir." "Do you have any experience as a maid?" "No not really." "Hmm..." he tapped his chin with his finger, then he got a devious smile on his face, "Well, you're pretty so I guess I'll hire you." "Thank you sir!" I said. "Please, call me Alois," he said. "Okay Alois." Little did I know that tomorrow would be the worst day ever.