Okay I was thinking of writing a storm hawks fic but I need people's opnion of the plot.

One day Aerrow and Finn get into a huge fight over something that happen when they were little kids, this causes Finn to leave. While the others think that he will be back in a little while it turns out to be more than an hour. Finn is missing for almost a day, when there is no word from him, the Storm Hawks go searching. With no luck they arrive back at the ship with a message from Dark Ace saying that they have something really important of theirs. The others start to worry thinking that its Finn. They are right. Dark Ace plans on torturing him for information. The Storm Hawks plan a dangerous rescue mission that could save their friend or kill him. Will the Storm Hawks be able to save him?