Heyaaa
Okay So I Decided topost a little preview of a story i am doing. hopefully you guys wil like it and want me to continue so please please please REVIEW
Reviews mean alot to me. its nice to know someone enjoys what you've written.
okay so i am setting this story during the scholl shooting, but instead of peyton getting shot and trapped in the libary its brooke. lucas goes into to save her not peyton!
Brooke screamed out as a searing pain flew through her leg. Peyton was gone, people were running people were screaming but no-one noticed her lying on the floor, blood seeping onto her hands.
"help" she cried, her voice sjaky and croakey,"please, help."
People ran every direction from the school. the bus with the basket ball team drew up outside.
"What the hell?" whitey said as they stepped off.
"Lucas looks theres Peyton!" Nathan shouted.
Peyton was running frantically toward them!
"Lucas! Nathan!" she cried out and she flung herself into their arms, "someones got a gun inside!"
" A GUN!" Nathan exclaimed
"Luke, Brooke Was right behind me, there was a shot."
Lucas' world stood stock still.
"Luke!" Nathan shouted
suddenly lucas couldnt here the screams he couldnt hear the cries, he was just running, running as fast as he could towards the school!
he could hear whitey and peyton scream his name but he didnt stop. he couldn't, not when his pretty girl needed him. not when his pretty girl was hurt.
so what do you think?
do you wanna hear more ??
do you want me to continue ?
PLEASE REVIEW
Lucy
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