Author's Note Pre-Script
Hello, readers! This is a problem that I keep thinking in my head, Do you think that i'm copying Fangren? If I am tell me in the reviews."
Plus, I can't upload the first episode for some reason so let me tell you what happened: NOTHING!
"Last time on Total Drama Island…" Chris started over a long-distance shot of the island. "22 campers came here for $1,000,000." he finished quickly over shots of first the assembled gophers then bass. The camera panning across the disgusted campers then cut to the long-distance shot to the cliff. Then faded to black.
(theme song)
(many shots of the lights and cameras hidden around camp popping out, often at the expense of the wildlife. A cue card's marks a transition to a fly-by-fly shot starting by the docks and 'Wawanakwa' sign, past the camp facilities, and over the top of the host drinking coffee in a director's chair just as the lyrics start.)
Dear mom and dad, i'm doin' fine;
(The camera flies through the trees and up to the largest cliff, peeking over to see two rings of buoys laid out in the water.)
You guys are on my mind!
(The camera dives of the cliff into an underwater shot; Tommy is in his swimsuit, admiring one of his rocks just as a shark sneaks up behind him; he notices the shark and screams while swimming upwards as he sees something drifting along.)
Ya asked me what I wanted to be,
And now I think the answer is plain to see!
(A cut to the surface where Martin and Chloe are on a moss green canoe, looking at each other, both with blushes on their face. Tommy suddenly grabs on Chloe's side of the canoe, causing her to fall off, earning a glare from Martin, who throws Tommy's rock high into the sky)
I wanna be...famous
(The rock hangs in front of the sun for a moment before coming down into the woods. The camera pans down to Monica who's filing her nails. Surrounded by animals, starstruck by her beauty, until the rock hits her in the head. Making the wildlife leave with depressed looks. The camera zooms out to show Fiona weirdly crying over it and oliver watching in confusion.)
I wanna live close to the sun!
(The camera zooms out to another part of camp, where Irene and Manny are too busy slap-fighting in an inflatable raft to notice that they're about to fall off the waterfall, they notice the second before they fall off.)
Well packs your bags, 'cause i've already won!
The cameras pans down to the bottom of the waterfall, showing Nat walking slowly over a broken log suspended over a 2 large rocks while reading a textbook. Halfway across, Jamie sprints into view, crashing into him, sending them both flying off the screen to the left.)
Everythin' to prove, nothin' in my way;
(The camera rapidly pans to follow Jamie and Nat, who eventually slam into the outhouse confessional. The impact causes Brittany to come flying out, supposedly the bathroom because her butt was pixelated, and the camera pans to the mess hall, Chef's silhouette in visible in the window.)
I'll get there one day.
The camera moves in past the window to show a smirking Chef, then Jimmy walks into view, tasting the sickly green soup of what Chef was making. When done, he gave 2 thumbs up, to Chef's disgust. He looked behind him to Brian and Dylan who are both tied up with bewilderment on their face.)
'Cause i wanna be...famous!
The camera pans left to show Dan and Jake arm-wrestling and surprisingly Dan wins to a saddened Jake, who gives him a dollar with his head down in shame. The camera zooms out to show Matt and Lela happily talking.)
(Na-na nanananaa, nanana-nanaa, na-nananananaa)
A pan down shows Abby looking around the island, holding two sticks. Hen a furry hand taps her, she turns around to see around then the ape takes the sticks, Abby none the wiser.
I wanna be! (x2) I wanna be famous! (na-na nanananaa, nanana, nanaa, na-nananananaa)
(The camera pans left to the ape who's rubbing the sticks together, once it's on fire, he drops it and runs, the fire changes to the fire pit.)
I wanna be! (x2) I wanna be famous! (na-na, nanananaa, nanana nanaa, na-nananananaa)
(The camera zooms out to show the campers whistling to the last few notes.)
The shot faded to a more close view the cliff. Close enough to see all the campers in their swimsuits, looking warily over the cliff, bass near the edge, gophers behind.
"Your first challenge is to jump off this 1,000- foot cliff.!" Chris said happily.
Jamie shrugged. "Easy peezy, lemon squeezy." she said with confidence.
"Not so fast," Chris said. "There are 2 landing points." Chris explained, causing Jamie and Brittany to look down. The shot cut to a top-down view of the 2 landing points. One was way larger than the other one. "The inner circle is your target. While the outer circle," the shot cut to the bottom of the cliff where 3 dorsal fins were circling around. "Is stock-full of, man-eating, sharks!" he finished with a chuckle. One of the sharks tries and snaps at nothing.
The shot cut to a close-up of Chris, who smirking. "So, killer bass, you're up first."
"Who wants to go first?" Jayla asks.
The shut cut out to the whole team, crickets could be heard chirping in the background. "I'll do it." Jamie says.
The rest of the team gasped in unison except for Jimmy "What?!"
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Jamie was sitting there with a confused expression on her face. "Why was everyone so scared? It's just a few sharks and a 1,000-foot drop. Ohh, I get it now." she ended, practically getting cut off by the static.
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The shot resumed to Jamie, who's now on the edge of the cliff in a diving stance. "See ya later, 'gator!" she says, waving before she does an excellent dive. The shot cut to the bottom she landed gracefully in the outer circle. She landed right where the shark was. "Ahhhh!" she yelled, swimming to the green boat.
The shot cut back to the cliff where the camera focused on Jayla and Brittany, both looking down to the water.
"Might as well go next, save everyone the hassle." Jayla sighed.
Brittany just looked at her. "You don't have to do that. In a matter-of-fact," she comforted. The shot cut to the edge where brittany walked into view. "I'll do it now!" she exclaimed. Jumping off while plugging her nose.
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Brittany had a devilish grin on her face. "I'll do anything to win this game. Including, manipulating expendable people like Jayla." she ended, rubbing with hands together devilishly.
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The shot resumed to the bottom of the cliff, Brittany belly flopped in the safe zone. "Im oka-" she said, words turning into bubbles as she sunk into the water. The camera zooming out to show Jamie cringing.
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This time, Brittany was covered with bruises. "I'm not okay." she said shamefully.
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The shot resumed to the edge of the cliff, Caroline was standing with Irene. "I don't know about this…" Caroline wondered out loud.
Irene scowled, arms crossed. "If you don't jump you might cost us the challenge. And plus, i'll do it FOR YOU!" she commanded, pushing Caroline off, then jumping herself.
The camera followed Caroline's fall. But just slow enough for Caroline to move out of view and then Irene to move in view, screaming for her life. Then Jayla, Tommy, Brian, Manny and Dylan.
The shot flashed to Chris on the beach, holding his red and white megaphone. "Ok, that's 8 jumpers so far." he said into the megaphone.
Dylan ran up to him, flailing his arms for him to get noticed. "I'M! RIGHT! HERE!" he yelled.
Chris looks around, still too short to be noticed. "Huh, must be delusional." chris decides, walking away scratching his head while Dylan just sighs.
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Dylan looks depressed. "Story of my life."
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The shot cut to the top of the cliff. Jimmy standing solo until a panting Monica climbs up, clearly exhausted. "Where were you?!" Jimmy shouts.
"I got lost in the woods, I really needed to pee." Monica confessed.
"I, told, you SO!" Chris said into his megaphone, clearly oblivious to Monica's annoyance.
"So what do we have to do? Anything disgusting or scary?" Monica asked, looking down.
"Well, it isn't disgusting, we have to jump off this cliff." Jimmy told her, pointing down. "It's just the 2 of us left."
Monica started to turn around and walk away. "Not gonna happen."
"But why? We might lose the challenge!" Jimmy asks.
Monica turned around with a frown. "1. I don't have a swimsuit. And 2. Do you really want me to destroy all, this?" she asked a seducing smile as she showed herself off right when a catwalk tune started to play in the background. Then Jimmy started to sputter in astonishment.
"I thought so." Monica finished, walking down the cliff.
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Jimmy had a shocked look in his face. "Dang, she is hot."
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The shot resumed to Jimmy. "It's time." he said, jumping off in a cannonball. The shot switched to a long-distance shot of the cliff, where a huge splash was shown. All the bass members were in weird positions. Except for Monica who was happily filling her nails next to Chris.
Chris's hair was messed up as they had a close-up of him. "That's 10 for the bass. Gophers, you need all 11 of you to jump for you guys to get the advantage for the 2nd part of today's challenge."
The shot flashed to all 11 gophers standing on the edge. The camera focusing on Martin and Chloe.
"So, this is fun." Martin said to Chloe, who raised one of her eyebrows at that comment.
"Really?" Chloe asked in disbelief.
Martin blushed. "Sorry, I get confused when i'm with beautiful girls." he apologized with a romantic smile.
Chloe also blushed but didn't reply, she just looked away.
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Chloe was sitting there, still blushing but had a depressed look on her face. "I like Martin, a lot. But i've never had a crush. Nor a boyfriend, so i'm scared that he'll shoot me down. I don't want anyone to see my mushy side. They only know my observant, side.
She looked down even harder. "He definitely likes me. I just don't know if i'm ready for a relationship just yet. I won't tell him that though, i'll definitely break his heart." she sighed. "Love is so complicated." she finished with a sigh.
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Martin had a confused look. "Does she really like me? I thought that I wooing her. Maybe I'm overlooking this...love is so complicated."
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The shot resumed to Martin and Chloe, both about to jump. "Jump time." Martin said to Chloe, who started to stumble off the cliff with a yelp. "CHLOE!" he yelled, diving off.
Oliver, Dan and Jake walked into view after them. All 3 scowling. "How could not believe me?"Oliver hissed a Dan. "We soccer players never tell lies."
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Oliver had sheepish look on his face. "Ok, that was a lie."
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Dan scoffed, crossed his arms, and started to walk forward. "Do you really think that i'm that stupid to believe- AHHHH!" he yelled, after pushed off by Oliver.
The shot cut to Dan falling. Then him becoming out-of view. Next was Jake, Oliver, Matt and Fiona. Then back to the edge where the remaining 4 jumpers on the gophers team were standing, Nat, Abby, Victoria and Lela.
"Anyone want a good luck bracelet in hopes that they don't die?" Lela asked with a hint of nervousness in her voice. "They usually work." she chuckled.
Victoria took it out of her hand rather harshly, much to the shock of Lela. "I'll take one. I need all the luck I can get."
The camera cut to a close-up of Nat and Abby. "She does know that there is no such thing as luck?" he whispered. "Lela is scamming her."
Abby leaned in even closer, Nat none the wiser. "I know, Vicky is so stupid, just letting Lela scam her like that."
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Abby had a usual dry look on her face. "Me being with with Nat does no good to my sarcastic demeanor. But, those cheekbones." she sighed with a dreamy look.
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The shot resumed to the 4 remaining jumpers. "Might as well jump now." Victoria decided, jumping off. The camera followed her jump, even when she bumped into a rock, having her spin around like rag doll until she landed in the safe zone.
"Ooooh…" the other 3 jumpers said, looking over the cliff in a bottom-up view. "That's gonna leave a mark." Abby said. "Let's jump." Abby said, pulling Nat and Lela with her as they screamed.
The camera cut to chris with his clipboard "Wow, they all did it! So that meant the gophers get the advantage to building," he announced, scene changing to a hot tub with an orange-and-yellow background. "a hot tub!" he finished as a trendy game show tune played in the background.
The scene flashed to the gophers pulling the crates with the pull carts. Now fully dressed. Now singing 99 bottles of pop on the wall. The gopher logo near the top-right corner.
Then the camera quick-panned to the bass, flipping their crates or pushing them. The logo flipped now showing the bass logo.
The camera focused on Monica who's filing her nails. "Come on, hurry up." she commanded in a dry tone. "We're losing!"
Brittany was pushing her crate in the foreground. "How about you help, daddy's girl." she growled, still pushing her crate off-screen.
Monica rolled her eyes at her nickname. "Sure, 'miss hangnail'."
The scene flashed to Jimmy, Jamie and Caroline. Pushing their crates. "Gotta take a leak."
Jamie and Caroline stopped as well. "Same here." they both said running off.
The camera flashed to gophers trying to open their crates in front of the cabins. Then panned right to show some of the bass also trying to open the crates with their teeth. Then the rest bringing their crates.
Chris started to walk through. "Remember, you all still have to open the crates with your teeth. That was my idea." he praisied himself.
Irene just started to try to open the crate. "Wait, I think I got it." he says, actually opening it. "Ow, that hurt." she cried. Showing the red cut on her tongue, then the camera panned a little to right where Manny is cracking up, then Irene throws the crate cover at him.
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Manny had a black eye, almost to tears from all that laughing. "Me and Irene have history, every summer she was my neighbor and would pranks on me the whole summer, but one summer..." he started to fiddle with his fingers. "I may or may not have built a snare trap and broke her arm while doing it.
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The shot resumed to both teams working on the hot tub, both at the same stage, focusing on the 3 that needed to pee. "My butt is itchy." Caroline admitted. "Is yours?" she asked Jimmy.
"Nah," Jimmy said, shaking his head. "But I think Jamie's scratching hers behind our cabin." he thought out loud as the camera panned to the top-right a little, showing Jamie's relaxed face and scratching sounds.
"Ahhhh.." she sighed, still scratching herself. "Feels so good."
Brian winced. "You guys obviously squatted in poison ivy." he revealed. The camera cut to Caroline's shocked face then she started screaming. But Jamie kept scratching.
Chris walked to the middle of the team's hot tub, both looking like crap. "5 minutes people, boy, you guys suck at building."
Brittany sighed, then turned around, back facing the camera. "Jamie! Get your butt out here and start helping!" she commanded, arms up in the air.
Jamie chuckled with a sly grin.
The camera flashed ahead to Chris standing in-between the team's hot tubs, both looking crappy. "Time's up!" he said, walking towards the gophers tub. "Ehh, 6." he said, with a not-so-sorry smile. Then he walked over to the bass tub. He touched it slightly but it fell apart. "The winners…..are the gophers!" he announced, all gophers cheering. "Bass, i'll see your sorry butts at the campfire ceremony."
The camera flashed again to the bass eating. "Now what?" Jayla asks.
"We decide who to vote off?" Brittany decided. "It should be Jamie or Monica, because if i'm not mistaken, you both didn't help."
Monica looked around in desperation. "What about...her!" she pointed at Caroline. Who was eating her food then looked up.
"What, why me?" she asked softly. "At least I helped."
The camera cut to the boys, all in a huddle. "We have decided who're voting for." Jimmy announced, closing his eyes, and a convincing smile.
The camera flashed to the campfire ceremony. Brittany, Irene, Manny, Tommy and Dylan were in the back row, and in the front were, Brian, Jamie, Caroline, Jimmy, Monica and Jayla. "I have 10 marshmallows on this plate if you don't receive a marshmallow. You lose and you can never come back. Ever." he motioned to the dock of shame, which is where the camera quick-panned. "If I call your name, you're safe, Jayla...Jimmy...Dylan...Tommy...Brian...Brittany...Irene...Manny...and Caroline. You girls are both here because you didn't help build your crappy hot tub. The last girl safe is…" the camera was alternating between Monica, Jamie and Chris the third time it did they both dropped their sticks and leaned forward. The suspenseful music coming to an end. "Monica." Monica ran to her marshmallow.
Jamie was shocked. "What? You guys picked her over me?"
Jimmy looked sad. "Sorry, but she's hot."
The camera flashed to Jamie walking down the dock, then climbing into the boat.
"So, that was a start to a soon-to-be great season of Total Drama Island!" he finished, right when the capstone theme ended, then faded to black.
Author's Note Post-Script
Jamie got the boot. There was 2 reasons she got eliminated first. 1. I couldn't think of any subplots to give her and 2. She was a throw-in character. So, Martin and Chloe, great start right? Also with Irene and Manny. Ok, until then.
-totaldramafan2.
Eliminated Characters
Jamie - (22nd place)