I was depressed for days after Sun and Jin died.
And after reading a powerful oneshot about their hands drifting apart, I decided to write one about Sun's thoughts as they died.
R&R plz.
There was nothing.
Just us two.
And the infernal darkness.
The only way
I could tell where you were
Was your hand
Gripped in mine.
Your ring
Icy cold in my palm.
Wait
Our daughter
Ji Yeon
You've never met her.
Who will care for her?
Ji Yeon
Needs a mother and a father
Ji Yeon
The name you suggested
While I was still pregnant.
I am so selfish
Even though
I told you to leave me
You stayed
Like I had hoped.
I can't feel your hand anymore
Numb
But I know you're still holding mine.
The water is so cold
Below my chin
Stop trying to free me
From this wreckage
I will die here.
Please
Jin
Go
Go to her
Ji Yeon
Your daughter
My daughter
Our daughter.
The water
It's over my head
I can't breathe.
I can barely see
You kiss me.
But soon it's too dark.
And soon it's too cold
To feel.
Please, Jin
Leave me behind
You need to meet her.
Meet Ji Yeon.
But no
You don't go.
We're dying
Together.
Before I am gone
I try to say
I love you
But my mouth fills with water.
Kiss me again
One more time.
And then
Death
It's so close
But we're
Together
And that's all
I can ask for.
I'm dying
We're dying
Together.
Jin
I
Love
......
this, personally, is one of the best fanfictions i think i've written.
RIP: Jin-Soo Kwon
RIP: Sun-Hwa Kwon