Hi there, yeah I rewrote this so again I'm just going to leave it up to you guys to see if this fic is worth continuing or not.
Disclaimer: I do not and will not own anything to do with Beyblade
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I walked through the five inches of snow that had just fallen late last night. The white fluff crunched under my shoes as my slow pace started to pick up to a slow jog, eventually turning into a full out run. My breath came out ragged and the steam it created started to frost up my raven bangs. The wind was so cold it felt like pins and needles against my bare skin and my golden eyes stung as the tears started to freeze. But I couldn't stop; I couldn't turn back now, not now that they know. They hate me I saw the disgust in their eyes. I knew that they would react like this, I was told a hundred if not a thousand times. I guess I just thought, well that they would be different. I was wrong.
I finally came to a stop. My lungs screaming do to the cold air I was taking in. I rested my hands on my knees and looked up. I was at the park not too far form the dojo, if it weren't for the snow and the cold I would have made it a lot farther. A shiver ran up my spine and I wrapped my arms around myself to try to stay warm, in my want to be out of sight of those harsh stares I had not grabbed anything to keep warm. So here I am in the middle of winter with only my traditional Chinese wear.
Spotting a single swing I walked over and, using my foot to kick the snow off, I sat down.I let my head fall into my hands, combing my raven bangs with my cold fingers tugging on them slightly. How could I let it slip? It was supposed to be a secret. NO ONE and I mean no one was to find out, no one.
The tears of sorrow turned to tears of anger as I mentally bet myself up. It was a stupid mistake. I let my emotions get in the way, wasn't thinking clearly and now, now I have nothing left.
I let a violent sob rip through my throat, shaking my entire body, letting more tears fall. "So stupid!" I grounded out through clenched teeth.