This is my first FanFic story, so I would appreciate as much criticism as possible! (But don't be to mean XD)
Storyline: Basically, it's similar to the Final act. Kagome gets sucked into the Meido, Inuyasha comes to save her, but then she ends up in her era and is unable to return to the feudal era. The only difference is it has been six years since the two were together. Little Yumemi is Kagome's five year old daughter. What? Kagome has a daughter? Yes and the father is none other than Inuyasha. Yumemi has never met her father but has always dreamt of what he'd be like. She might get the chance to finally see her father when some unexpected events take place. Enjoy!
~Kagome's POV~
"Hey Kagome! The girls and I are going out for lunch today. Wanna come?" Eri nudged me affectionately.
"Sorry, I can't. Yumemi gets out early today. Maybe another time?" I asked while filing the last of my papers into the appropriate files.
"Oh come on! Can't you get your mom to pick her up? You always skip out on us!" Eri complained.
"Listen I'm sorry but I can't ask my mom to do that. She's my daughter and therefore my responsibility. Besides, I already told her I'd take her out to that new Italian restaurant that opened up a few days ago. I swear she's got Italian blood in her! She's obsessed with their pasta!" I joked.
"Maybe that boyfriend of yours was Italian. He was from overseas after all !" Eri laughed, but she cut herself off when she realized her mistake.
I had told my friends that Yumemi's father was indeed him, but I couldn't tell them the whole truth. I simply told them he was killed in a car crash a few months after my pregnancy. I hated when people brought up him.
"Listen Kagome, I'm sorry I shouldn't have said that. I'll give you a call later and maybe we can catch a movie with Ayumi and Yuka later. Okay?" She gave me a pouty face that made me crack a smile.
"Sounds fun! I'll call the theaters later tonight," I promised her. As we left the building we waved our goodbyes and I slumped into my tiny black Toyota. I didn't immediately start the car, I just sat there.
Inuyasha…
I quickly shook my head. "Stop thinking about him girl!" I scolded myself. I pulled away from the TV station where I worked. I was a writer for the History Channel. Ironic, right? I'm not sure why, but as soon as I had graduated high school, I knew I had to do something that involved the feudal era. Mostly what I wrote about were wars. It wasn't called the feudal era for nothing. I liked my job. It was interesting to learn about events that had taken place when I was there. With him.
I pulled up to my daughter's elementary school. I had to drive around to the back since the kindergarten area was separated from the rest of the school. I stepped out of the car and began to chat with some of the other kindergarten mom's since I was early.
Most of them were in their mid or late 20's. As for me, I had just turned 21 recently, which gave me a disadvantage with befriending my daughter's friend's parents. When I was among them, they would be nice to me and chat normally. But when I left, I knew they gossiped about how young I am to have a daughter. Throughout high school, I had to deal with people snickering at me and talking behind my back about how I was a "slut", "baby mama", "whore", any of those horrific names. It didn't bug me as much as it used to. I was accustomed to it now.
Ding-ding.
The school bell rang. The mom's and I waddled over to the gate to greet our adorable children. I watched child after child bolt past me and run to their parents.
I wonder what he would do if he was here…
I shook my head again to get rid of those annoying thoughts.
"Mama!" An excited Yumemi called out to me. I watched her as she scurried over. Her longish light brown hair was flowing behind her as she ran toward me. Her tiny green dress was covered with mud. She bounded up to me and embraced my bare leg.
"Hi sweet-heart! I missed you so much! What on Earth did you do to your dress?" I asked her while pulling out my handkerchief and doing my best to wipe off the filth.
Yumemi fidgeted with her collar and said, "I was trying to sell mud pies, but teacher scolded me."
I laughed and said, "You're lucky this dress isn't new or your Grandmother would have had a fit."
As we drove out to lunch, Yumemi told me about her day like she did everyday. She was an amazing athlete and she was proud how she always got picked first for sports. Yumemi once was dared to race one of the male fourth graders and she accepted without hesitation. She beat him by a long run which sent the kid crying home. I wasn't shocked at all by this. She was his daughter after all…
"We're home!" I called as I opened the door.
"Welcome home sis!" Sota walked up to me, "Got any leftovers from that restaurant?"
"Yes and their mine!" Yumemi giggled.
I headed for the kitchen as my little brother began to have a tickle fight with Yumemi. "Hey mom," I said while putting down my purse and throwing the Italian leftovers into the refrigerator.
"How was your day?" She asked while cleaning the dishes.
"Fine. I might go see a movie this weekend. Can you babysit?"
"Of course! I'm glad you're going out for a change!" She beamed at me.
She was right. I didn't go out to have fun with friends very often. I liked being home with my family. Where the well and the sacred tree were…
"Kagome, you got a call from a man named Takishima. A friend of yours?" My grandpa said from the table.
I frowned. "No, I don't know anyone called that. Did he leave a number?"
"Yes it's next to the phone. He sounded urgent so I suggest calling him back quickly."
I nodded my thanks to him and made my way over to the phone.
Takishima… Nope, didn't ring a bell.
I dialed the number and waited for him to answer.
"Hello?" A man's voice came from the speaker.
"Hi this is Kagome Higurashi. I was told you called for me?"
"Ah, yes! Miss Higurashi, is there a place we could meet tonight? Alone?"
"Are you a pervert or something?" I yelled softly.
"No! That's not my intention. It's just… God I always mess up on these things… It's very urgent!"
I rolled my eyes, "And what is so urgent about us meeting?"
"You've traveled to the feudal era before correct?"
I assumed he was talking about my work. "Well, I write things about it and just last week my new article was released on…"
"No that's not it! I meant… I'm such a moron… You have physically traveled to the feudal era. Am I right?"
To Be Continued…
Okay this chapter was super short! But I was really eager to post it here to get people to comment on this. This is the raw version so I probably make it longer and upload it again. Please give me your feedback! :3
