The Day I Died rewritten

by KTdidn'tIsweartogod

Kikyo's thoughts on the day she died REWRITTEN! i did not like my old one so i wrote this longer one that explains how kikyo probably felt the day she died. sort of tragic whats the word angsty i geuss not sure!

The day I died

Why did it end up like this? This is my entire fault I grew weak and fell in love! But this is also his fault for betraying me! I lowered myself to that of a weak mortal woman. But that is what I am after all. He will pay for this! All for the jewel what a low trick! I grab my shoulder and cover it to stop the bleeding. I hobble towards the village. All I can think is how he must be killed! I watch him run away with the Shikon No Tama in hand. THAT BASTARD! First not only does he strike me down but burn my village too. I grab my bow and ready my arrow. My hate is so palpable that it is like a completely different being! I feel it give me strength. I only have enough strength to fire a sealing arrow. I release my arrow and my vision is blurred. I fall to my knees. Damn it! I hope my arrow hit him. I crawl forward and pick up something that feels like the jewel. I am losing blood quickly now I hear my little sister call for me. "Take the jewel and burn it with my remains that way it cannot fall into evil's grasp" I tell her I have used up all of my strength and I collapse the last thing I hear is my sister calling my name. I'm sorry Kaede. These are the events that took place the first time I died. The day that my death was written in history. The day I died. My name is Kikyo and I now walk this earth feeding off the souls of the dead time has stopped for me but I continue to walk. Why? Because I must finish what I started fifty years ago. I must kill Inuyasha!

Can't you just feel the hate coming off the page? I revised this I rewrote it because I felt the old one sucked so I decided I write what she thought and everything. I think this turned out really good! Kikyo is my favorite character and I hated her second death saddest thing ever! But as you can see this is her first death. Anyway I actually am really happy right now! I am going to write up a gory scene for my fruit baskets story. Then work on my edvy fic then finish my Rosario vampire story! Finally I might start some Onigumo Kikyo story never knows! ^. ^ I love you guys review and maybe I'll write from inuyasha p.o.v or naraku's or maybe do something else just tell me if I need to continue! Byes!

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