This is my first Twilight story, so please tell me what you think!

I don't own Twilight! But I wish I did!


Changing

I felt as if my heart was going to burst through my chest and scream! My body was nearly... no completely in pain. My vision was so blurry I could no longer tell what was going on, but I still did see the three figures that looked like blurs surround me.

I wanted to scream but my throat was burning, like it was on fire. I didn't need to see to know that they bit me. The worst thing about it was, I will never see Edward again and the last thing he will have from me was the letter I slipped to Alice before I snuck out of the airport.

I looked up and saw and felt the three blurs feasting on me, the blurs better known as my enemies Laurent, Victoria and James. I should have known better than to trust Laurent like we did when he was telling us about James, but I guess that obviously he was in on it all the time.

I wished that I could fight back, but I knew this was the better way for this to be; at least they would leave the Cullen's alone now that they have what they wanted.

I just hope they all can forgive me, especially Edward; he will be my first and last true love.

As I was going unconscious, I saw more blurs in front of me, and then it was all dark.

All of a sudden I was woken from my death screaming, I feel like I am on fire! My vision is perfectly clear now and I realized that I am in the arms of the last person I expected to see.

Edward is holding me in his arms trying to calm me down, but its not working at all. I scream louder and throw my head back in pain. Why do I feel like I am on fire but there are no flames.

I look down at my two arms where I see three bite marks.

"Carlisle, is there anything at all we can do, isn't there anytime," Edward growled.

I look over to Carlisle and he bends his head down in shame, "We arrived too late, sorry Edward."

I look up at Edward and saw his terrified expression, I want to just reach up and comfort him and tell him it will be okay, but I couldn't move.

I screamed again in pain and looked up gasping for air. Something caught my eye in one of the mirrors, and saw a fire flaming. The pain eased from my hands but that was it.

I started to gasp for air more but as much as I breath in, it doesn't seem to help at all.

"No, this cant be happening! She… she cant… she just cant, not now! She has to live her life, not now," Edward growled.

From the stories Edward told me I knew, this was it, I was turning into a vampire.

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**~DQ~**