Okay, well this is the first thing I have ever posted, wrote about 5 stories just can't make myself post them *sigh* oh well…
Diclamer: duh, Naruto=NOT MINE! If it was do you think I would be posting this on FF.net? I didn't think so.
This I originally started as a song for the band I am in.. well the more I got done the more it reminded me of Gaara…. Well I decided I might as well post something…. This is it. If you all like it I will post more, if not I will be content to read… well R&R.
btw, this is written as if Gaara was talking, I guess…. w/e… well tell me if this sounds like Gaara
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Can't lose control
Can't lose my soul
How can I hide…
When the enemy is inside?
Sleep escapes me
Can't let it take me
How many died?
When I tried to hide?
The demons within
They know my every sin…
They're dead.
My
hands are red.I must have slipped
It never missed.
Now I don't mind,
We're one of a kind.
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Well? Tell me if it sucked… it was a song originally… but… it, ummm, morphed? Also, if anyone has ideas for a title…. It would be appreciated!
Gaara: I am SOOOO not that whinny!
Orrin: shut up, Gaara.
Gaara: you will pay for that!!
Orrin: *runs from Gaara, making the fatal mistake of forgetting the sand* hopefully I will be alive to read your reviews… if there are any. *coughcough*