Has anyone looked at the moments in the book that actually deal with the last moments of the Potters

Has anyone looked at the moments in the book that actually deal with the last moments of the Potters? I dunno why but I love to think about it, so I wrote this story, please take time and review it when you're done.

The song plays a ghostly tune in Harry's head while he sleeps…

You've been there for me, no matter what the cost, my best friend since we believed in Santa Clause. You've always stood besides me, and I wanna let you know, I'll be the one to hear you prayer. Don't ask me I'll be there. I'll be your friend, the one who you will never be without. When you have nothing at all, you won't have nothing to worry about.

Harry, we tried, we're sorry we aren't with you to help you along…

The night of the Potter's Death…

(James' View)

His stare is penetrating, and he whispers the spell, my life replayed for me in less than a minute.

The Hogwarts Sorting, Meeting my best friends, and Lily.

The Map, scolding from Professor McGonagall, Head boy of Hogwarts, my wedding, Harry.

Harry, my wonderful son, how I let Harry and Lily down.

Peter, why did he let me down, my family, my son?

Haven't I been a good and loyal friend to him?

--One more chance, I'd be a better parent and husband, one last moment.

Watch Over Harry.

The end is coming for me, I died bravely, and I love you all.

(Lily's View)

--The body of James Potter falls to the ground.

No! James…

One last spell, I promise you Harry, I'll be with you always.

James will watch you, every Quidditch Match.

We tried our best, we loved you best.

You'll always have something, you'll never forget.

I'm sorry we can't be with you.

Don't bother coming, it isn't your time.

His lips mouth the curse, I cannot hear

We love you Harry.

Harry wakes up in his bed, and whisper through the dark shadows, I love you Dad and Mum. I'll never forget.