Where did We End?
Chapter 1: Til' Sunrise
Author Comments:
This is my first fanfiction, and I have been proof reading for a looooong time since last year and please critique it. I also have my writing class to thank because, honestly, I suck at writing(usually essays) and it kinda helped me with descriptive writing. Since I read most of my fanfics on here I tried to mimic some things that I liked in certain writings, for example: the art of spacing, or that OOC is a no no.
My first fanfiction.
My first.
This should be ItaxSasu...or SasuxNaru or something else, We'll see.
Quiet.
Nothing moved. Nothing brought happiness.
It was as if life did not exist in such a place.
It was very cold.
Everything signified death in that room.
Not even the body lying on the bed moved an inch.
Despite the emptiness, Sasuke was still awake.
The eerie night sky that was peeking through the shutters, began to descend itself above to make way for sunrise.
Sasuke wasn't welcoming the morning at all.
He was barricaded under those heavy billowing sheets, laying thoughtlessly on his mattress.
In the top corner of the bed, his head sunk in the mesh of pillows that slipped out from under him. Most of them ended up lounging on the floor.
Eyes half dazed, he fixated onto the light emitting from the vents, from those annoying blinds. His face began to radiate as the beams caressed his serene milky colored skin; although, the sun didn't bring back his usual vigilant self.
Sasuke was half dead.
The boy could not sleep but felt like he was about to any second.
The poor baby was reminiscing over his dreary past from when dusk came to the solace morning.
He didn't think about why his family had to die, he was just hopelessly left hanging in maze by this man.
He wanted his dream to come true, just like in the movies, but the wish wasn't as grand.
He simply wanted to be a part of his kin, or more specifically,
wanted to be with his older brother...
End Notes:
yep this chapter is short but there is mooore. -kiki's delivery