This is my first fanfic it is based on the boat after WW (the good ending) Please RR

Prince of Persia: Chapter 1 "Kaileena what have you done"

The prince regained conscious he wondered where Kaileena had disappeared to he looked around for here but for some reason he felt a violent rage deep inside. He looked to the east to Babylon, it was in flames, he didn't how this was "NO NO I have changed my fate why is this happening" he shouted, "Where is Kaileena?" All he could hear is the echo "No one can change his or her fate, No man can"

He had arrived at Babylon he jumped over the boat slaughtering 3 monsters he grabbed one of their weapons he ran across the wall and jumped over 4 monsters he span around cutting off their heads. He saw a masked Warrior (Monster) it was wearing his fathers crown. He could feel the rage inside of him gathering. He leaped at the Monster he thought he had stroke it but the water sword had smashed against its armour. It laughed at the prince's feeble attempts to attack it; the Monster kicked the prince through several walls. The prince stumbled to his feet he ran at the monster kicked off a wall and grabbed it from behind "why are you here" he asked it. Flung him into a portal the prince tried to hang on he had thought what if Kaileena had taking him into the future as he fell into the portal he yelled to Kaileena "what have you done


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