WARNING: for fangirls lol

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"(your first name)shiwisaki" next and last person on Tom's list thought Shizuo Tom left it up to him because he got sick so he was on his there was a problem he didn't know where this person was, there was no address he didst know what to do so he texted Celty maybe she knew something."hey do you know where i can find _ Shiwsaki?" " i think she might live around naka ikebukuro park" "thanks bye" after that Shizuo started to head there by bus, he wasnt very far finally arrived and was going to ask around but then he heard some peole yelling and it got on his nerves so he walked over there to yell at them" you have to give us the money you owe us you little brat" it was a usual stupid gangster" b-b-but i don't have the money yet" said a teenage boy nervously " i know you stole from our boss!'' "but i-" shizuo cut in " you better stop talking and leave him alone before i snap" " so what are you going to do" he said and kept yelling at the kid, he snapped and punched the guy right in the face he went up so high he past birds and kid got up right away and ran when he started to walk away the gangster yelled he would tell his boss and wont get away with disgracing the Yakuza. Shizuo ignored him then he yelled "do you know who my boss is he's _ Shiwisaki" "what?" he said and turned around and grabbed the guy and said in a scary voice "take me to her" " he's a guy and i will gladly so he can kick your ass" Shizuo tried to not knock him out so he could take him to this_.They arrived at the place he said that his boss was staying until the night the sun began to set at that time the place was an abandoned building so he thought that was kind of clever because no one would bother lead him to the bosses room and the place was crawling with gangsters staring in disbelif because THE Shizuo Heiwajima just came waltzing in their hideout with a cigarette in his mouth they finally arrived at their bosses room and heard people what seemed like their boss yelling at two people and it seemed like they were supposed to kill someone the doors flew open and the guys were kicked out and then he saw Shizuo there and had a huge grin on his face

sorry to leave you guys like this but i have to end it somewhere please keep reading this and im not very good with puncuation