Hey guys, remember when I said that I was going to make another version of Carrie well I kept my word.
All the Carrie movies and the novel, this is mostly based of the 2013 and the novel but I will follow the book's description of the character, and if you haven't read the novel you can hear the a audiobook on youtube just type it in.
P.S. If you have any ideas for characters like their appearance, personality or anything like that just put it in the comments.
Carrie walked around the pool, people crowded around it. Girls and boys ran around playing and going to get changed. They all stared at her as she was a disease or a creature that looked so inhuman.
Her messy long hair hanged down, hiding her face. It was flat, colorless, and streaked with different shades of blonde and chestnut, her skin was clear with red, oily and was so pale it looked like chalk.
She was skinny, slender and, her stomach was so flat but a little bloated. Her legs weren't very tall but not short, bony finger. Red pimples and blackheads were stamped on her back, shoulders and forehead.
"Eww, she's so pale and skinny. " She heard a girl whisper to her head.
"I know, and her figure is so ugly." Another girl whispered again.
"But she does have a nice butt,."
To people, she looked like an ugly duckling. But under that mop of dirty blondeness her face was strikingly pretty, face shape was oval but looked heart shaped, her nose was pointy and was a red button nose, lips were lush and pink but slightly dry.
Her eyes were brown covered with dark eyes lashes, they were vapid and emotionless, redness under them and dark circles, her cheeks were white like her skin as if blood didn't flow in system.
Teeth white as pearls and were small but big at the same time, veins showing red, blue, purple and olive. Her curves unknowingly showed, legs were thin but curved in her thighs. The waist was small and unnoticeably voluptuous.
If she had taken better care of herself boys would be all over her and girl would be glaring in envy and awe. A blue swimsuit hung on her skinny frame, her flesh tingling against the fabric.
She walked around holding her white towel, a group of girls came out of the showers. The Ultras came in, Tommy appeared and grabbed Sue, they immediately started kissing. Carrie stared at them, jealousy burning in her.
Sue was a beauty, she had golden locks cascaded in waves, light skin that was smooth, ocean blue eyes that were shining. Lips were plump and pink, cheeks were blushed and her figure was curvy.
Carrie was always jealous of her looks, she did always knew that her legs were good as hers buts knew her face wasn't.
Tommy and Sue pulled away, the golden haired girl walked away from him. His hair was in brown curls, eyes were emerald green and he was just about perfect.
His body was fit, muscles bulging on his arms and his legs, abs were tan. Carrie felt something inside her and her lips twitched up.
Chris turned to look at her, she growled at the sight of her. She walked close her and bumped her shoulder, Carrie looked at her in the corner of her eyes, the brunette followed her gaze she was staring at Tommy.
Chris was stunningly attractive, with chocolate brown hair that fell in dark strands down her back, icy blue eyes and tan skin. Her lips were thin and pale pink, has a triangular figure and was tall and skinny.
She wore a red swimsuit. She got close to Carrie and stared at her up and down,"Wipe that smile off your face." She gave her a dirty look and Carrie frowned.
They giggled her, Carrie just stood there looking down as if she knew it was going to happen, insulted but knowing it was true.
Everyone all of them wearing school swimsuits. Not revealing but skin showed, red and blue waterproof fabric smoothed against their flesh.
Carrie's eyes dilated and her heartbeat sped, 'FLEX' Chris suddenly tripped but caught her balance. She looked around and her eyes fell on the dirty haired blonde, she glared at her and put on her cap.
He caught Carrie staring at him and he smiled at her, but she looked away just in time so he didn't know whether she was looking or not. "Hey Carrie!" someone called out, she turned her attention to the source.
It was a group of boys who like to make fun of her, "Nice ass you got there, now show your tits!" She flushed as everybody laughed once again, they had been staring at her butt for the entire time.
A whistle blew,"Come in ladies get in the pool. We're playing pool volleyball" The girls got in pool, Carrie put on her cap and went to the the edge of the and got in. With a splash, she stood there and watched emotionlessly.
She payed no attention to the game, knowing that she would be useless in it. Until a ball splashed right in front of her, Carrie jumped surprised.
Rita gave an annoyed gesture at her to come join the game,"Carrie you can't always be on the sides, get in the play." (This Dejarden is based of the novel and the 2002 film, if you haven't watched our read this, you might want to do that now.)
The girl nervously went to the serving place and hit the ball over the net, they other team countered with a bump, set and spike.
It went to Carrie's place, Chris who was right next to her ran to get it fearing she would miss it but Carrie was ready to get it, the two collided with each other and went under water.
Chris pushed her down and went up, Carrie did the same. Rita blew the whistle and sighed,"Game's over this team wins."
Groans were heard and they went out the pool, insults flew her way and she was either bumped or got smacked in the face with harsh words.
"Why did we have to have her on our team."
"Nice going, dumbass."
"Stupid little retard can't do anything right.!"
All she did was look down as her eyes burned with sadness, with a trembling mouth she began to speak, "I-I-I'm s-so-r-" she was cut it when she was knocked into a wall.
Chris glared at her and snarled like a giant cobra hissing at a small mouse, she said the classic word she always said.
"You eat shit, bitch." Chuckles were heard again, Carrie felt tears brimming her eyes and she lowered her head. She solemnly walked slowly out the water, and took off her cap.
Sue stared briefly at her with pity but that only happened for a second, before she could blink she turned away but unknowingly glanced at her.
They went in the girls locker rooms, faucets turned on, bars of soap, shampoo+ conditioners, moisturizers were put on benches and steam filed the air.
Carrie walked in looking around, holding her towel. She went to an isolated stall and set her towel down, she grabbed a bar of soap and turned on the water.
Beads of liquid ran down her body, she began rubbing it on herself. Carrie put the square soap and rubbed her hair.
"Carrie hurry up!" Rita yelled, yellow bangs shaking. "Ohuh?" The sound was quiet and soft, the gym teacher gave an irritated sound. Girls chortled at her, bras were clipped, pants were put on and towels were collected.
Sue loosened her towel from her hair, she grabbed a comb and began combing her wet golden locks very fast. Chris plugged in a hairdryer and blow dried her hair. Tina put a liquid in her hand and rubbed her red hair in it.
The blonde turned off the spout, she dried herself and sighed. Her wet hair stuck to her cheeks, her neck and her shoulders blades.
A towel was wrapped around the skin body figure, she walked out the stall. They looked at her and saw blood running down her legs.
"Period!" Chris shouted, girls started at the blood in disgust."Eww, Carrie go clean yourself, you're on your period!" Sue said as she watched the blood drop on the floor.
"Period." "Period." They formed a circle around her, giggling at her form. Carrie clutched her white towel, her chestnut eyes filled with hurt.
"PER-iod!" "PER-iod!" "PER-iod!" The chant got louder, "You have your period! Clean your self!" Sue groaned at her dullness.
She grabbed a tampon from the dispenser, she handed it to her but Carrie stared at her mildly confused,"She thinks it's for lipstick!" Erika yelled then giggled in a cryptic manner.
Yes Erika Gogan was said to see Carrie White blot her lips were a tampon in the bathroom.
Erika walked in the bathroom, she heard sniffling and turned to look at the source. It was Carrie brushing her hair, eyes red.
She wasn't quite fond of her but she didn't hate her though, "What's wrong?" She asked, the sobbing girl turned to look at her,"Billy Preston put peanut butter in my hair. I fell asleep in the library and he put it in my hair."
Erika huffed,"Well score one for him." She thought, "Can you check it to see if I got it all out." Erika nodded and looked at her hair, it was dirty blonde streaked with chestnut stands.
"Yeah it's all gone." Carrie sighed in relief, she took out a lipstick that was peach and applied it to get lips, the curly haired girl raised a brow.
Then the blonde grabbed a kotex, and blotted her lips with it. Erika stared dumbfounded, "She must know is a tampon right." She thought with confusion.
"What the hell are you up to?" She turned to her, her brows going down,"What isn't this right?" Erika shook her head,"Yeah it's right."
She walked out and phoned a couple of friends about what she saw, she said it was kinda adorable.
Carrie waited patiently for them to stop, standing like an ox. Sue felt a streak of anger and a strange feeling,"You're bleeding! You little dumb fat pig!" She yelled furiously for no reason.
Carrie looked down and saw a trail of red liquid drop on the tiles, she shrieked. It was loud and it rung in the air like a church bell. The whites of her eyes got red and her pupils dilated into tiny black dots.
A tampon hit her in the chest and landed on the floor, "Plug it up!" Chris yelled, another one hit her feet, then two hit her chest and stomach, suddenly they began pelting her with sanitary napkins, pads, kotex, and liners at her, chanting.
"PLUG IT UP!" "PLUG IT UP!" "PLUG IT UP!" They shouted, Carrie got hit in the face and she slipped on the floor. She landed in the floor with a thud and sat there, marveled by their boldness.
Sue was doing it to, laughing at her. Her mind was repeating,"There's really no harm in it." The girl felt tears running down her face, she clutched her towel that fell in the floor beside her, her legs smeared with red as if she ran through a lake of blood.
A cry flew out her mouth and and she began hysterically screaming, hot saltiness went into her mouth and snot came out her nose. She scooted back, trying to escape from all this pain but only ended getting trapped in the corner while dozens of kotex and toilet paper are thrown at her.
Blood smeared in a zigzag line when she scooted, blood was on her hands and her legs. "PLEASE HELP ME! STOP IT PLEASE, NO! " Memories start to flash in her head, nothing but abuse.
Sue chanted, smiling but then she looked at Carrie in the eyes. Her brown her eyes were vapid and no emotion left except fear, humiliation and sadness. Guilt flooded her and she slowly stopped what she was doing.
"Please stop. " She muttered, a small feeling inside her grew. They didn't stop, Chris even pulled out her phone and recorded it.
She watched as they threw tampons at her, giggling and snorting. Sue grabbed Heather's arm,"I think this is the first time she ever got her period." The other blonde stared at her shocked.
"Stop. " She said louder, but her cries were deaf to their ears as they kept enjoying her pain. The force got stronger
The flashbacks, her misery was all she saw in them. A force began to grow inside, anger entered her body, she shook in fury.
She looked at them in rage, with all her might she bellowed in a earth quaking voice, "JUST STOP! " The lights flickered. The force extended as she screamed.
The door busted open, revealing Miss Dejardin. The bulbs all broke immediately by scaring everyone.
Rita was checking the grades for her P.E students, when all of a sudden she heard noises. The sounds echoed of the walls and it caught her attention.
She got up from her chair and went to look for the source of it, the noises got louder and louder until she realized that it was coming from the locker rooms.
The teacher speeded to the door and opened with a 'BANG!'. Girls were throwing sanitary napkins and chanting,"PLUG IT UP!" at Carrie.
Her soggy hair stuck to her face, tears and snot ran into her mouth, her legs were covered in menstruation blood and a white towel smeared with red. The light bulbs broke instantly and she stared at the ceiling surprised before looking back at the situation.
"What are you doing! CUT IT OUT !" She boomed, Rita pushed through the crowd and stared at the crying mess, her heart ached at what she saw.
She grabbed a random towel and crouched down to Carrie,"Carrie, are you alright?" No was an obvious answer.
The girl looked up at her,"M-M-Ms. D-Dejardin-HELP ME! I'M DYING!" Carrie grabbed on her blinding white shorts, bloody handprints stuck on it. Rita felt a twinge of disgust because of the blood but it disappeared.
"What are you talking about? Calm down and take care if yourself." But she couldn't, she hysterically began to trash and shriek, the girls stared at her weirdly,
"HELP ME PLESE! HE-" Rita's hand came in contact with her cheek, it shocked everybody. The teacher began to realize that it was her first time.
She began to relax, she began to sob and hugged her, Rita pointed to the door,"EVERYBODY OUT NOW!" Her voice bouncing off the walls, they began to clear out.
Sue looked at her solemnly and bowed her head down. Guilt filled, she bit her lip and turned to leave the commotion.
Carrie hiccuped, her eyes bloodshot red just like the period liquid. The blonde kept crying though and her teacher kept whispering soothing words to her"Sweetie it's alright, look they are all gone okay." She rubbed her head, the girl hiccuped again and nodded.
"Now tell me, is this your first period?", Carrie looked at her with a unknown glaze in her eyes, "P-Period?" It sounded to genuine and innocent to be fake.
Rita's eyes softened,"You don't know huh. Here take this and here is how you put it on." She instructed the girl how to put the tampon, cleaned her with wet paper towels and got her back into her clothes.
Later on...
She went into the principals office, Mr. Grayle gestured her to come in. He was in a black suite, his legs crossed and a pile of papers at his desks.
"What's wrong Ms. Dejardin?" Rita sighed and sat down in one of the chairs,"I heard noises coming from the showers, I went to go checking it out and the girls were throwing sanitary napkins at Carrie and yelling 'plug it up'." He looked shocked at her.
"Why?" Rita scrunched her face,"I don't know but Carrie was having her period, her first period." Mr. Grayle raised his brow,"Isn't she a little to old." She nodded at that.
"When I tried to explain it to her, she didn't even know what I was talking about." He took a deep breath then let it out,"You think her mother would have told her already."
He took out a pen, and look at a clipboard, "Who were the ones doing it?" Rita crossed her arms,"Chris Hargensen was the ringleader as usual. But even Sue was doing it as well." He stared at her disbelievingly.
"I expected this from Chris but Sue." She pinched her nose,"All the girls were doing it, but I never expected it from Sue." She said while shaking her head.
"Well, I'll call Mrs. Johnson (I changed it from Ms. Fish) to go get her." He spoke in the speaker.
Outside the office...
Carrie sat on the bench, her oily hair hanging down and her face wet with salt water. She wore very ugly sweater was big and beige with a white t-shirt under, a cross was tied to her neck.
Her skirt was shin length long and black with a pair of white socks that went to her knees, and two grey shoes were in her feet.
Red chestnut orbs glued to the floor, no emotion in them. Completely blank, vapid, nothing left. Blotches dotted her face and emptiness rested.
"Hey you! Carrie, please look at me, pleeease!" She looked at the guy calling her, he mimicked her giving a suck me off gesture.
Not knowing what he was doing but knew it was a sexual thing, she quickly turned away from him. A middle aged woman came out from the office and told her to come in.
The girl still had her head hanging down, the guy sitting there chuckled but her met her eyes, they were full of dullness, nothing remained and blank brownness stared at him.
Emptiness and sorrow was the only thing left, and he shook in terror. Carrie eyes twitched and and she went inside, the guy stared down and a single thought passed through his head,"What is wrong with her."
When she walked in, Grayle felt sympathy for her, seeing her bloodshot eyes, red face and stuffy.
She sat down, her eyes still glued to the floor. "Are you alright now, Cassie." His voice was sympathetically,"It's Carrie." Rita corrected him.
She still stared at the ground,"Do you need anything?" She shook her head, Rita put a hand on the back of the chair,"You can skip gym class for a week, take study hall instead."
"We all are sorry about this Carrie." He said it correctly for once, but that didn't make it any better for her.
"Morton come up here with the sign out board. " He spoke in the speaker, Mr. Morton came in, with a sign out board. His face looked amused at the tear face girl. "Here you are Cassie. " He said, Carrie gritted her teeth knowing he did that on purpose.
"Do you want a ride home, Cassie?"He asked in amusement. The water cooler cracked but it went unnoticed,"It's Carrie and I think she'll be fine to walk home." She assured.
"Here is the pass to go home early, Cassie." He handed her the pass, her eyes dilated and the cooler cracked even more.
She shakily reached to grab the pass, her bony fingers grasped it. "Hope you'll be fine. " Ms. Desjardin said in pity.
"Cassie Wright. You can go."Carrie stood up, agitated with the vice principal misusing her name, her heart pumped faster and her colorless hair began to move.
"It's Carrie White. " He smiled bigger, in crossed his arms. "Cassie Wright." He mocked, enjoying her agitation. "It's Carrie White. " She repeated once again.
"Cassie Wright. " He said, making the force flare once again. Carrie whipped her head up, eyes blazing with anger, "THAT'S NOT MY NAME! IS CARRIE, CARRIE WHITE! " Mr. Grayle blinked, Morton stepped back in surprise and Ms. Desjardin jumped as if someone hit her behind.
'FLEX' The water cooler suddenly exploded, water spilt on the floor surprising them. Carrie bursted into tears, putting her face into her hands. Ms. Dejardin wrapped her arms around her led her outside then turned up to the man with a death glare.
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