Well my first try at this fic didn't come out so well so I figured I'd retry
Lets do this
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14 years ago the great Kyuubi no Yoko attacked Konohagakure in pursuit of a man who smelled of snakes. The village was going to fall if not for the village's leader the Yondaime Hokage who sacrificed himself and his child to save the village by the sealing the demon within his son he would save the village but sacrifice his life and his child to a life of torment. Even with the concequences in his mind he still preformed the jutsu, the jutsu worked exactly as he planned the village saved, him dying and his son soon to be the scapegoat for all the village's pain.
5 years later
Namikaze Naruto or as most knew him Uzumaki Naruto was walking through the village of Konohagakure minding his own buissness, he was on his way to see his closest friend Haruno Sakura like her parents she absouletly loved Naruto. Finally he got to her house and knocked on the door and a woman with pink hair opened the door, she looked down and smiled at what she saw there was Naruto in his white shorts and ratty old black T-shirt with his necklace the Sandaime Hokage had given him smiling waiting for Sakura.
"Well hi there Naruto-kun." She said.
"Hi Haruno-san is Sakura-chan here?"
"Yes just give her one sec."
Naruto nodded and waited until finally Sakura came down the stairs wearing her usual outfit along with her necklace of a cherry blossom that shined a bright pink when the sun hit it just right.(A.N: yes there is a reason for the necklaces they're not there just for show.) Sakura smiled and hugged Naruto.
"You ready to go to the park Sakura-chan?" Naruto asked returning her hug.
"Yeah I'm ready Naruto-kun." She said while still hugging him.
They walked to the park and went to the swing set, Naruto got on the only working swing while Sakura sat in his lap and once they were both comfortable in the swing Naruto began to pump his legs and soon they were sailing through the air.
Scene Change
A man in a cloak was walking to the Hokage's office when he spotted two children swinging in the park he smiled out of both happiness and shock when he saw who one of the children were.
'Naruto?!'
To his right he noticed a group of 5 adults looking at the pair with murderous intent going towards Naruto, and to his horror they all had either a knife or a broken bottle.
'They wouldn't dare. Would they?'
And unfortunately they did in the blink of an eye they rushed the two children on the swing.
'NO!'
Scene Change
Naruto and Sakura were still having fun soaring through the air when suddenly 5 men rushed them and pushed them both off the swing, the men surrounded Naruto and began wailing on him with knives and bottles. Sakura screamed while Naruto was beaten to a pulp, that is until a man with a cloak ran in the middle of them and stopped them from further injuring Naruto.
"What kind of sick bastards are you? Beating an innocent boy, HUH?!" The man screamed.
"Innocent? I don't think so that boy's a demon!" One of the assailiants screamed back.
The man in the cloak scowled behind his hood and attacked the would be murderers. He hit the first one with a simple roundhouse kick to the head that upon impact there was a sickening snap, the man fell to the ground dead. One of the men attacked the cloaked savior from behind attempting to break a bottle over his head but to no avail as he saw this coming. He simply grabbed the man's wrist, twisted and broke it. The man screamed in pain but was quickly silenced from a kick to his neck crushing his windpipe. The three remaining attackers rushed him from the side, the man in the cloak jumped over them and killed the first two by taking their wepons and driving them deep into their throats he killed the last by jabbing his two front fingers into the man's neck. After it was over he went over and checked on Naruto and to his relief he only had a few cuts and bruises.
"Is he gonna be okay?" Asked a worried Sakura.
"Don't worry he'll be fine." Answered the man.
"Really?"
"Yeah all he needs is a few band-aids."
Sakura smiled and thanked the man, Sakura picked helped Naruto out of his dazed state and led him back to her house so her mom could heal him. The man smiled and continued his walk to the Hokage's office. Upon his arrival he didn't wait for the secretary to get confrimation from the elderly Hokage, he simply walked in to his office where he found old Sarutobi Hiruzen sitting at his desk doing paperwork(the devil's little helpers) The old man looked up to see the cloaked man.
"Um may I help you?" Asked the Sandaime.
The cloaked man removed his hood revealing a head of black hair and ice blue eyes.
"Akira?!" The elderly Hokage said standing in surprise.
"Yeah it's me Sarutobi-dono." He replied.
"I don't believe it everyone thought you were dead!"
"Well as you can see I'm not."
"What happened to you, you've changed."
"For the better I've changed, I've become more powerful and now I'm back to fulfill a promise I made to Minato." Akira said.
"And what pray tell would that be?" Sarutobi asked.
"Raise and train young Naruto, to become a great shinobi." Akira replied.
"Well I personally think it would be great if Naruto got away from this village for his own benefit, but it's not up to me or you it's up to Naruto."
"Well then we should go ask him." Akira said.
"Do you know where he is?" Sarutobi asked.
"Yes I believe he's at the Haruno residence."
"Well let us be off then."
As they walked out the door Sarutobi told the secretary to tell anyone and everyone he was out doing important Hokage buissness.
Scene Change
Naruto sat on the Haruno's couch while Mrs. Haruno (A.N too lazy to think of a name for her.) was healing his small cuts and bruises. Once she was all done she gave him a kiss on the forehead a maternal habit she had picked up, Sakura was sitting next to Naruto holding his hand. Naruto rubbed his forehead embarrassed from the kiss even if he knew that the older Haruno saw him as a son. They all sat there in silence until there was a knock at the door, Mrs. Haruno answered the door and standing in the doorway was the Sandaime and a man with black hair and ice blue eyes.
"To what do we owe this visit Hokage-sama?" She asked.
"Actaully we're here to ask Naruto something." He replied.
"Then by all means please come in."
Old Sarutobi and the man walked in the house and up to Naruto.
"Hello Naruto." Said Sarutobi.
"Hi Ji-san." He replied.
"Naruto do you know who this man is?"
"No I don't."
"Well kid I'm the guy who saved you from those idiots earlier." Akira said
"That was you?!" Naruto said in shock.
He smiled and nodded his head.
"Naruto he's not only the man who saved you but he's also in a way your uncle." Sarutobi said.
"My uncle?"
"Yes you see he and your father were such good friends they admitted it as well as other people who acknowledged that they were brothers." Sarutobi explained.
After everyone had been properly introduced Sarutobi and Akira explained their reason for being there.
"Well Naruto what do you think would like to come with me and train for a while?" Akira asked.
"Of course I would!"
'Naruto-kun you're not just gonna leave me are you?' Sakura thought to herself.
"Well good why don't we go get your things, you and I can meet Akira at the main gate in about an hour." Sarutobi said.
Naruto nodded and jumped off the couch and sprinted to his crummy apartment that Sarutobi had gotten him. Once inside he ran straight to his room and began to pack everything he had which included several pairs of clothes old practice kunai he had gotten for his birthday from Sarutobi and finally a picture of him and Sakura on her 4th birthday.
"So is that everything Naruto?" Asked Sarutobi.
"Yeah that's everything Ji-san."
"Good, hey how 'bout one more bowl of ramen before you go huh?"
Naruto's eyes lit up and clung to the elderly man.
Scene Change
"Kaa-san? Do you think we could go and see Naruto at the gates before he leaves?" Sakura asked.
"Of course honey c'mon lets go." Replied the older Haruno while grabbing her daughter's hand.
They walked out the door towards the main gate of Konohagakure.
Scene Change(again)
Akira was standing at the gates impaitently tapping his foot and checking his invisible wrist watch.
'Where the hell are they?'
Then he saw two figures approaching he hoped it was them but instead it was the two Haruno's with a sigh he continued to wait for Naruto and Sarutobi. After about 30 minutes Naruto
and Sarutobi showed up with a backpack on Naruto's back.
"Sheesh finally I thought you were never gonna show up." Akira said.
"Well since this is his last day in the village for uh how long did you say he was gonna be gone again?" Sarutobi asked.
"9 years I said I'd train him for 9 years."
"Well there ya go I was treating him to some ramen, since I'm pretty sure you won't let him have any while he's with you."
"You got that right, ramen may be good but it's not good for you."
"Well enough of this, so Naruto you ready to go?" Akira asked.
Naruto nodded his head and began to follow him out the gates until he heard Sakura call.
"Naruto-kun wait!"
"Huh, what's up Sakura-chan?"
"I um wanted to give you something before you left."
"Yeah?! What is it." He asked clearly excited.
Sakura reached around her neck and took off her necklace then handed it to Naruto.
"Here Naruto-kun take my necklace, but it's my good luck charm so you have to promise you'll give it back okay?!"
"Of course Sakura-chan."
That's when Naruto took off his necklace, a red crystal on a length of nylon and put it around Sakura's neck.
"There you go Sakura-chan now I've got a reason more than just you to come back."
Sakura's eyes welled up with tears until she hugged Naruto and thanked him.
"Okay, lets get going Naruto." Akira said taking his hand and dragging him from Sakura's embrace.
Naruto waved back at Sakura and she returned the wave.
'Come back safely Naruto-kun.'
5 Years Later
'Katon: Housenka no jutsu!' Akira mentally shouted.
Multiple small balls of fire came rushing at Naruto, but he countered with a jutsu he picked up from a scroll the Nidaime had written.
'Suiton: Suijinheki!'
With that a pillar of water surrounded him protecting him from the fire.
"Heh very good Naruto." Akira said.
"Well I have learned from the best." Naruto replied.
"Thank you."
"I meant Ichizo."
With that being said Akira dropped his head and an old man on the sidelines was laughing.
"Naruto don't be so mean, I mean Akira's been like a father to you hasn't he?" The elderly man said.
"Yeah I guess but you're an Uchiha." Naruto said.
With that Akira's head dropped even farther.
"So um Ichizo-sama why are you here?" Akira asked.
"I'm actually here because as you know I have found a way to actually plant the gene for the Sharingan into someone out of the clan." Ichizo said.
"Yeah aaaaand?" Naruto said.
"Well I was thinking I'd give the gift of the Sharingan to you Naruto."
"No way really?!" Naruto said.
The old man nodded his head and smiled.
"But listen although I have found a way to give it to you without the worry of rejection from your body there is still a flaw in the procedure." Ichizo said.
"What's that Ichizo-sama?" Akira asked.
"Well when I give Naruto the Sharingan it will be as if he was an Uchiha who just unlocked it from his DNA." Ichizo explained.
"I don't care I'm just psyced!"
"Heh, well lets be off to the ceremonial building shall we?" Ichizo said as he turned around.
Naruto, Akira and Ichizo walked to the large building in the middle of the small village they were in, as they walked they all forced small talk until they noticed that they were infront of the large building. They opened the door and walked in and before he knew what happened Naruto was rushed by a black blur.
"Hi Naru-kun." The girl who had tackled him said with glee.
"Hi Saiyuko-chan." Naruto said as he hugged her.
Saiyuko retreated from the embrace and smiled at Naruto, he smiled back. Saiyuko was almost the exact replica of Sakura they only differences were instead of pink hair and green eyes Saiyuko had black hair and orange eyes. She wore a red long sleeved shirt and black pants along with basic ninja sandals.
"Well Naruto I've brought you here for more than just the Sharingan, you're also here because today is the day you become a true Crusader." Ichizo said.
Naruto looked towards Akira to make sure they weren't just messing with him and Akira was smiling as was Saiyuko.
"Now then Naruto please stand in the circle so we can get this started." The old Uchiha said.
Naruto did as he was told and stood in the circle that was surrounded by six Crusaders which included: Ichizo,Akira,Saiyuko and three other Crusaders. Each one of them took a deep breath in and exhaled, then all in sync they began hand signs and as they had started all of them ended on snake. Six different colored beams shot at Naruto and forming a white lightinfront of him and after some time it began to take shape it looked like a basic katana. Naruto reached out and grabbed it, the light became solid and color began to flow into it, it had a black hilt and a black guard shaped like an "N"(Heh "N" for Naruto hah! that's a knee slapper.) The blade was also black but the actual bladed part had a line of crimson on it.
"Whew we're done, no matter how many times I do that it never gets easier." Ichizo said stretching his old joints popping.
Naruto just stood there admiring the sword "his" sword, Saiyuko walked up behind him and wrapped her arms around his waist and put her head on his shoulders.
"Congratulations Naru-kun." She said.
Naruto didn't respond too caught up in his blade to think of anything else. Ichizo laughed and walked up to him.
"Okay Naruto lets get this over with." He said.
Naruto shook himself out of his trance and nodded. Ichizo activated his Sharingan which contained all three tomoe then with a strained look on his face concentrated on his hand which was engulfed in a black and red flame. When it was ready he gently tapped Naruto's forehead.(remind you of anything?) then he collapsed unconcious not dead. Naruto rushed to the nearest mirror and to his glee he saw that his eyes were blood red with one tomoe in each, that is until he collapsed as well.
The Next Day
Naruto woke up and found his new sword next to him, he picked it up and unsheathed it the blade was 4 feet and 8 inches in length overall just two inches shorter than he was.
"Ah Naruto good you're awake." Ichizo said from a corner in the room.
"Ichizo-sama thank you for everything."
"It was nothing, in truth you've become like a grandson to me Naruto." Ichizo said.
"Thanks, oh uh how do I activate the Sharingan?" He asked.
"Simple just concentrate some chakra into your eyes." Ichizo said.
"Oh and Naruto just a friendly tip, it's not exactly common but it is known for one eye to evolve faster than the other so don't be alarmed if you notice that one day one of your eyes
has two tomoe while the other still has one." Ichizo said.
Naruto nodded as he looked into the bowl of water next to him to examine his new eyes. Ichizo smiled and went back to sleep( hey he's old) From that day on Naruto was told to train with his Sharingan activated, unfortunately there was an unforseen side effect the transplant of the Sharingan. Naruto the normally happy boy suddenly obtained a great lust for power and became very cold and distant. Everyone was worried especially the girl who had quite the crush on him Saiyuko.
3 Years Later
Naruto was sitting under a large Sakura tree with Saiyuko in his lap, they sat there comfortable in the music of nature. Today was a special day it was December 12th Saiyuko's birthday
today she turned 13 the same age as Naruto.
"Happy birthday Saiyuko-hime." Naruto said as he pulled out a long box wrapped with red wrapping paper.
"Wow! Thank you Naru-kun." Saiyuko said as she took the box.
She unwrapped it and inside was a necklace, it had a fox emblem on the end and it was on a black chain. Saiyuko held it up in the light.
"Do you like it?"
"Oh Naru-kun I love it!"
"Here let me put it on for you."
She handed him the necklace and moved her hair so he could put it on her, he undid the clasp and drapped it on her chest then he pulled it up as to re-clasp the necklace.
"There done." He said.
Saiyuko turned to face him again and looked into his eyes and he looked back, she smiled then closed the distance between them. Her lips crashed onto his, she wrapped her arms around his neck and he wrapped his arms around the small of her back. He leaned forward and deepened the kiss, then they broke the kiss for some much needed air. Saiyuko laid her head on
his shoulder and he tightened his embrace on her.
"Once again, happy birthday Saiyuko-hime."
"Arigatou Naru-kun."
Scene Change
13-year-old Haruno Sakura was walking the streets of Konohagakure while remembering her old childhood friend Uzumaki Naruto.
'Come back soon Naruto-kun.' She thought to herself.
Before she knew her feet had led her to the Yamanaka flower shop, with nothing better to do she decided to go see her friend Ino. When she walked in the door she was Ino sitting at the counter looking very bored.
"Hey Ino."
"Huh? Oh hi Sakura." Ino waved.
Sakura waved back and walked up to her.
"So? What's up?" Ino asked.
"Nothing just thinking."
"About him?"
"Yes about him Ino."
"You really like him don't you?"
Sakura nodded her head, as the years passed she dicovered her feelings for Naruto were more than just friendship, she had romantic feelings for Naruto. Yes she Haruno Sakura had a crush on Uzumaki Naruto.
"Well don't worry I'm sure he'll be back anyday now." Ino smiled.
Sakura smiled and just hung out with Ino for the rest of the day.
1 Year Later
"Well Naruto it has been 9 years since you've come to train with me and the Crusaders and as I promised it's time you become a ninja." Akira said.
Naruto just stared at him with an arched eyebrow.
"Well Naruto I sent a letter to Sarutobi-dono and asked if he could send out a Konoha nin and he did."
A woman with purple hair and a full mesh body suit covered by a trench coat.
"Okay gaki lets get this over with, for your test all you have to do is simply make three perfect clones think you can do that?" She asked clearly bored out of her skull.
Naruto simply put his hands into a cross shape and calmly called out.
"Kage bunshin no jutsu."
In a puff of smoke three perfect shadow clones stood there all with a bored expression on their face.
"Congratualtions yadda yadda, here ya go." She threw a blue headband with the leaf symbol on a metal plate to him then vanished with a puff of smoke.
"Hmph. Can we please go back to training?" Naruto asked.
Akira just sighed and pulled out his sword it was infact the exact opposite of Naruto's. The blade was still two inches shorter than it's wielder but instead of being red on black it was blue on white. Naruto pulled out his sword which he had named Kuroryuu and activated his Sharingan which now had two tomoe in each eye. Akira charged him with a basic slash which Naruto blocked easily and countered with an upward slash of his own, Akira dodged and threw 4 shurikens at him. Naruto deflected them all with a simple flick of his wrist. Akira smirked he knew this was gonna be fun.
Scene Change
Sakura was sitting in her classroom next to Uchiha Sasuke waiting for Iruka to call them for the genin test.
"So Sasuke what do you think the test is gonna be?" She asked.
"Not sure hopefully it won't be too easy." He responded.
Finally Iruka came into the room with a clipboard and called out his first victim.
"Aburame Shino, we're ready for you."
With that a boy in a trench coat with what looked like a poncho covering his head and shades blocking his eyes stood up to take the test. When he came out he was wearing a leaf village headband across his forehead and said that it was Choji's turn. The list went down until Sakura's name was called out.
"Okay Sakura all we need you to do is make three basic clones." Iruka said.
"Hai." She responded.
She put her hands up in the rat symbol and concentrated on making three clones.
'Naruto-kun give me strength.'
"Bunshin no jutsu!"
With a poof there were three other Sakura's in the room. Iruka smiled and handed her a headband which she tied behind her bangs. She walked back out and waited for the remaining kids to take their tests. By the end of the day only three kids had failed the test needless to say their were all pretty bummed.
"Alright all those of you who passed the test please come back here tommorrow so we can split you into teams." Iruka said.
With that everyone cleared out of the room, as Sakura was walking she felt someone hug her from behind.
"Hi Ino." Sakura said.
"Hi Saku-chan!" Ino exclaimed.
As the years went by Ino and Sakura had become great friends and since Sakura didn't have a thing for Sasuke their friendship didn't hit any bumps.
"So Sakura what do you want do?" Ino asked as they continued to walk.
"I don't know, you want to go get some ramen." She asked.
"Eh sure why not."
So they turned their walk towards Ichiraku's ramen. When they got there they took their seats as the owner turned around.
"Ah! Sakura, Ino what can I get for you two?" He asked.
"Get me a chicken ramen please." Sakura said.
"Uh I'll take a shrimp ramen please." Ino said.
"Okay so one chicken and one shrimp coming right up."
They ate their food in silence and once they were done they paid then went their seperate ways. When Sakura got home she went up to her room and took out a picture of her and Naruto when they were only 4 years old. She smiled and put the picture back, then she curled up on her bed and went to sleep. The next day she went to Iruka's classroom and waited for her sensei, as time went by more and more people began to fill up the rows. Then Iruka walked in and began to call out teams. Sakura began to daydream about Naruto and how he might look now until Iruka called her name.
"Team 7 Haruno Sakura and Uchiha Sasuke." Iruka said.
"Um wait sensei if the teams are to split into three how come we're on a team of two?" Sakura asked.
"Your other team member will join you soon so don't worry." He explained.
Iruka called out the rest of the teams(A.N you know who goes where.) As Sakura and Sasuke sat in the classroom the only two left waiting for their sensei.
'Ugh where is he?!' Sakura yelled in her mind.
Finally after what seemed an eternity their cyclops of a sensei showed up he waved and his visible eye crinkled as he smiled under his mask.
"Okay meet me on the roof." With that said he went poof.
Sakura and Sasuke walked up to the roof and found Kakashi sitting on a railing reading a little orange book. He looked away from his book to see Sakura and Sasuke walking towards him now that they were out in daylight he could get a better look at what they were wearing. Sakura had on a red zip-up top that stopped at her stomach and had a white circle in the middle of the chest, she also wore tight black shorts with a pink shash around them.(Picture her shippuden outfit except the shirt's different.) Sasuke wore a black short sleeved shirt with a large collar and the Uchiha symbol on the back, he also wore black shorts with bandages covering his shins.
'Weird' Kakashi thought to himself.
As Sakura and Sasuke got closer they took a seat on the steps.( I'm just gonna skip this part because you know what they say.)
Sakura walked home thinking of what her sensei had told her.
'Don't eat breakfast or I'll puke?! What are gonna go through?' She thought to herself.
Before she knew it she was outside her house, she walked in and went up to her room again and fell asleep once again.
Scene Change
Naruto was sitting on a bridge that was still in the process of being built, he was hired as a bodyguard for the bridge builders here in the land of waves it was also the place where he was to meet his team. Even knowing that he was going to finally be on a team he was still bored out of his mind.(A.N yea I'm just gonna skip the whole bell test.)
Scene Change
Sakura and Sasuke were outside a woman's house pulling weeds for the umpteenth time today, after this they were to walk three dogs then go pick up trash at the old river. They had finally finished all their missions and were about to be assinged a new one when Sasuke just couldn't hold it anymore.
"NO! No more D-rank missions!!"
"Hmm? Well usually I give C-ranked missions to genin with more expierence or chunin but I guess I'll make an exception. But since you are one man short I'm also gonna send squad 10."
"Your mission is to escort Mr. uh Tazuna." The elderly Hokage said.
With that an old man walked in with a bottle of alcohol in his hand and the scent of it on his breath.
"These brats are gonna protect me?" He slurred.
Ignoring the comment they listened as he told them to be at the village's main gate in half an hour. Sakura walked to her house and packed a few things just the important things you know like an old photo. She got to the village gates with 2 minutes to spare, as she approached she saw Ino in her very tight purple outfit(once again think shippuden) waving at her she smiled and waved back.
"Okay everyone's here lets get moving, oh and Sakura, Sasuke I've been informed that we'll meet our missing teammate in the land of waves." Kakashi said.
With a sarcastic jazz hands motion Sasuke left out the gates to their destination(A.N srry if anyone hates me but I'm also skipping the whole mist nin ambush 'kay)
They all somehow fit on a tiny boat as they were ferried across a large canal and into a port city where they thanked the man and continued their journey on foot. They had been walking for about and hour until they came across a lake with a heavy mist covering it.
'I don't like the look of this.' Kakashi thought.
Then the sound of air being sliced by something large filled their ears.
"Everyone hit the deck!" Kakashi ordered.
Everyone landed straight on their stomach's as a giant sword planted itself in a tree with a man standing on the hilt.
"Heh, well if it isn't the bridge builder and his bodyguards. Oh and what's this is that Kakashi of the Sharingan?" The mysterious ninja said.
"Zabuza." Kakashi glared.
Scene Change
"Crap I'm late I was supposed to be there now dammit!" Naruto said aloud rushing to the lake where he was to meet his new team.
Scene Change
Zabuza jumped off his sword and pulled it out of the tree with ease almost as if it weighed nothing. He pointed it straight at Kakashi.
"Lets not beat around the bush, just give me the bridge builder and I'll let you all live." Zabuza said.
"No way!" Kakashi replied.
"Hmph have it your way then."
With that he rushed at Kakashi with incredible speed for lugging that sword, Kakashi blocked his attack with a kunai. Kakashi pushed him back onto the lake and followed him, in the blink of an eye Zabuza used a simple water jutsu. Though simple it was enough for Kakashi to lose his vision, when he could see again he saw Zabuza's giant sword coming straight at him.
'This is it then?!' Kakashi screamed in his head.
At the last second there was the sound of metal crashing against metal, Kakashi opened his eye to see a boy in a cloak blocking Zabuza's sword with his own blade that was black except for the line of crimson on the blade itself.
"Get back to your squad, I'll handle this." Said the cloaked boy.
Kakashi did as he was told and jumped back to help protect Tazuna.
"Kakashi-sensei who is that?" Sasuke asked.
"I'm not sure but who ever he is he saved my life."
"Grrrrr! Damn you're pretty strong kid." Zabuza said as he jumped back.
The boy in the cloak didn't respond only got into his stance with his sword held backwards. He rushed at Zabuza and striked with a horizantal slash, Zabuza stepped back just in time to stop from being gutted right there. The boy held his sword infront of him with his hand on the backside of the blade and in a voice just loud enough for everyone to hear.
"Roar Kuroryuu!"
His blade had black lightning radiating from it then he pointed at Zabuza.
'Oh fuck.'
The boy rushed him once more and slashed but Zabuza did a side step and kicked him, he sent the boy flying a couple of feet then he grabbed the boys hood and threw him as hard as he could. There was the sound of cloth ripping then a body colliding with a tree. The boy trembling managed to get himself up from the painful flight, with his hodd removed everyone could see him.
'Naruto-kun?!' Sakura thought.
Without his hood his facial features were visible he had golden blond hair, electric blue eyes and on both of his cheeks were three whisker shaped birthmarks.
"NO! Why did it have to be you?!" Zabuza yelled.
Naruto smirked and rushed him again slashing at a lightning quick speed, Zabuza could barely dodge and block his attacks. Zabuza stepped back and exclaimed.
"Dammit why did the Inabikari Oni have to be under that cloak?!"
"Lightning Demon?" Asuma asked aloud.
"Shut up and fight." Naruto said activating his Sharingan.
"W-what?! How is that possible you're not an Uchiha!"
Naruto ignored him and attacked which he decided would be the last time he attacked. Naruto wasn't letting up this time he was going all out forcing Zabuza to pull out all the stops, he jumped away from Naruto and began doing handsigns Naruto knew what he was planning and began to do the same handsigns. They went through a large number of handisigns until they both stopped on tori then both said.
"Suiton:Suiryuudan no Jutsu!"
Two large dragons of water rose from the water and destroyed eachother, then before Zabuza could begin his handsigns again Naruto was already done with another set and said.
"Suiton:Daibakufu no Jutsu!"
A large explosion of water engulfed Zabuza and slammed him into a tree then four kunai went into each one of his limbs, Naruto landed on a tree behind Zabuza. He looked up and saw Naruto looking at him with the Sharingan spinning wildly, just as Naruto was going to throw one last kunai into his neck two senbon pierced Zabuza's neck and he fell down on the ground dead.
"Sorry for intruding but I've been tracking him for quite some time." Said a boy with a mist nin anbu mask on.
Naruto went down and checked Zabuza's pulse...nothing he was dead.
"Thank you for your help." The boy said again and vanished with Zabuza.
The two teams and Tazuna ran up to Naruto, he turned around and collapsed.
'Damn think I used too much chakra.'
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There the new first chapter of the new story
see ya next time
-Raidori