Hey, BlackFoxGun here! This story used to be really crappy because my mind was on other things, but now I have gone through all of my chapters, revised them, and re-posted them so that my story is not so crappy anymore, ok?

I am not a yaoi hater, I love yaoi, so please don't get me wrong on that, I just felt like making this story a gender-bender, and it would be harder to make a story where Kurama is a guy and Hiei is a girl, so don't get all RAWR and stuff at me until you read my reasons.

"Quotations for normal talking."

Bold like this is for thinking.

"ALL CAPS IS FOR YELLING"

Italics is for dreams or memories

Some words may be spelled weird, but it is probably because I am trying to express someone using an accent or talking in a different way.

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At the edge of a large city, a redheaded figure rode up on a very powerful looking motorcycle that was all black with a nine tailed silver fox on the side. The vehicle skidded to a stop, and the slim figure jumped off and surveyed the city ahead that looked full of gloom and bad guys. 'The bad guys are why

I came to this town, all the other cities only had mere pickpockets, nothing really worthwhile to go after, they were too easy.' She thought,'soon, everyone will know the name of Kurama, and all the thief lords will be forced to treat me as an equal out of fear...' Kurama held that thought in her head and relished it as she jumped back on her motorcycle and drove straight into town.

Later, in the room of a hotel that she rented, she finished unpacking all her clothes,and drew out the last item in her bag. A steel suitcase that she unlocked with a rose shaped key from around her neck,and it clicked open to reveal three things. A long leather whip, coiled and deadly looking. A tazer gun, personally modified to be more powerful and of better multi-purpose use.

And last was a six round black shiny shotgun that winked up at her, reflecting the bright light coming in the case. She pulled out the whip and attached it to her belt, then she put the case away under the bed and walked out of the room, closing the door behind her. The most fun thing about beating up bad guys is that they never realize that I am a girl but they always think that I'm the most beautiful guy that they have ever its really funny with all the men and them being aroused but don't want to because they think they are to manly to be gay.

Kurama chuckled at the thought. As she passed the management desk the manager stood, "Hey!, You better be careful out there or you'll be gone and broke within hours." The manager paused and saw her whip, "Oh, well with that then you'll be fine as long as you know how to use it." "I think I know how to use it perfectly fine thank you." Kurama replied, then walked gracefully out the door.

Later that afternoon she was glad that she had come to this town, because right after stepping outside she met up with a gang of guys who thought that they were tough but . And they even promised to go do some honest living after they got a big taste of her whip, it amused her. "Hmpf, I can't wait until I get to the real tough guys in this city."

Kurama turned the corner and ran up a ladder that led up to a roof of a apartment building. Aah, finally I can get a bit of fresh air in between fighting all those jerks out on the streets.

For the past couple hours she had been fighting nonstop with gangs and random ruffians, it was like they wanted to get beat up. Hah, if I didn't know better then I would think that I'm the only person here in this town who wasn't a criminal! A scuffling noise nearby made her alert and she drew out her whip. It unfurled and was ready for action within two seconds,"Who's there?"

A guy with mouse brown hair and a thick build hoisted himself over the edge of the roof with a grunt, staring at Kurama with beady black eyes. "Ooh well lookie what we here, hey pretty boy! You new to these parts? Cuz if you are then I better introduce meself and the gang here, well you look it so I'll introduce you anyway.

I'm who they call 'the Hook' around here so you better show some respect and these are me cronies." said Hook, as he gestured to the other men who were slowly surrounding Kurama. "so there you have it! Now you'll know the names of your killers before you die, GET HIM BOYS!" All the darkly dressed men charged for her.

"Finally I can get some fun around here" She said as she jumped up above all the men, causing them to crash into each other full force."Oh that must have hurt" she said in a pitying voice. "Well that's what you get for messin' with me ya jerks" She cracked her whip over their heads when she landed on the fire escape above their heads, her shoes clacking against the hard metal. The men began to cower until their leader yelled at them to keep on going or they would get a taste of his gun.

Frightened, the men scurried to obey Hook's wishes. "Heh, you rats should have gone down the drain a long time ago." Flicking her whip expertly, Kurama coiled her whip's end around the throat of the self called 'Powerful Hook' and pulled him over to her. "If you don't tell your cronies to stop then I think that my whip might just tighten some more...your choice." she whispered cruelly.

"S-stop attacking immediately" the gang leader gasped out. "Now that's a good boy, so tell me...what do you think that I will do if I catch you doing this ever again?" She twisted the whip, making the leader's eyes bulge, and his mouth utter a hoarse plea to be let go. "That's right, I'll kill you and all of your followers within minutes of me hearing about it." Kurama's eyes glinted evilly as she released the near strangled being, his body falling limply to the ground. "Oh, how rude of me. I forgot to tell you my name, it's Kurama.

You guys would do well to remember it." Then she vanished into seemingly thin air, leaving all the guys slackjawed and astonished. Then they snapped back to the matter at hand and started to tend to their leader who had already passed out and wet his pants. "We better report this to the lord as soon as we wake up the head."

The mysterious man had disappeared with no trace left behind except for the red marks of the whip on Hook's neck. Kurama the 'mysterious man' hadn't disappeared but actually jumped up to the next level of the fire escape really fast using a trick learned long ago to watch and see what the dazed cronies would do. After hearing them start conversing she leaped off the fire escape stairs and flipped gracefully into a catlike landing on the top of a building that appeared to have been deserted long ago.

She laid down to she watched the last drops of setting sun dribble down behind the horizon, then looked up at the winking stars, the ones that seemed like they were just waking up. Watching them for a few minutes and sighing before closing her eyes for a few seconds and feeling the chill of the night air start to come in and bite at uncovered skin.

She opened her eyes, stood up, and walked to the edge of the roof, then leaping off and landing in the street, then continuing to walk down it until she reached the apartment building that she was currently staying at.

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