A/N: Hey there! Thanks to everyone who has come to see what this fic is about, it really means a lot to me.
Well as it is my very first ff and the first time I write some kind of story off school, I would like you to know that I will be more than pleased to accept any suggestions for improving it.
Also; as I don't speak English, you may find some mistakes, may be grammatically (that is not too much…I think...), and maybe a wrong word, and with the tenses, and phrasal verbs, and prepositions (I've never learned this very well), just ignore them (unless you find some superhorririficmonstrous mistake), I think you will understand what I'm trying to say, lol, I've tried to make this story as perfect as I can.
Okay, I think that's enough blabbing, here goes the first chapter of my first fanfic (omg, I'm sooo nervous), please R&R, don't fall sleep that I am trying to make it as interesting as possible (though the first chapters are a little bit slow and short) and most important of all: ENJOY!
Disclaimer: I don't own Jimmy Neutron or anything related...but oh I wish I did
Blast from the Past
"Strange Call"
Today I'm going to tell you the story of how it was almost the end of the world, and not exactly because of a villain, even though one had something to do with it, and of course our favorite boy genius. Well, the whole thing started one night when I was at my granny's house. Everything was just fine until I received a very strange call from Jimmy.
"I'll get it grandma, don't worry" I shouted while I was heading for the telephone.
"Hello?"
"Cindy? It's Jimmy. I need you to come to my lab immediately," said Jimmy, talking anxiously.
I paused for a second trying to process what I have just heard and WHO I've just heard "What for?" I asked thoughtfully.
"Something's happened and I need your help!" He said with, what I thought, was a trace of fear.
"Wait a sec! A--are you telling me that 'Mr. I'm-too-smart-to-receive-help-from-anyone-specially-Cindy-Vortex' needs MY help?" I replied surprised and incredulously, ignoring his fearful voice.
"Cut it out! There's no time for that. Just come here ASAP. I mean it!"
And with that, he hung up the phone. I was staring at the receiver with bewilderment. There were tons of things that I didn't understand: What had happened that was so urgent? Why did he need specifically MY help? Why didn't he just call Sheen or Carl? And how the heck he got the number of my grandma? This was very strange and whatever it was, it was important and I needed to go to his lab right away.
"Mom, I'm not feeling well," I lied; she would never let me out at night, alone and to Neutron's.
"What is it, honey?" My mother asked, obviously worried.
"I…uh…my head is aching so badly"
"Sweetie, do you want something? Do you want to go and lay on your grandmother's bed?"
"No!" I shouted, I don't know why, but I did it "I mean…I would prefer to go back to the house and sleep a little."
"Well…if that's what you like," she paused and I nodded, "let's go then"
And then we headed to our beloved house.
A/N: OK, I think that's it, the first chapter of my first fanfic (I told you it was short). Please reply and tell me how was this chapter…boring, god, bad, long, short, needs something else or it is perfect (Which I doubt). Oh, and thanx for reading it. I swear it really means A LOT to me.
Stay tuned for my next chapter: "How Did You Know I Left to My Granny's"
Besos,
0:) Andrea 0:)
