EDIT: IMPORTANT EDIT NOTICE!
I noticed that a LOT of people read chapter one and not any other chapter. Seriously about 50 views on Chapter 1 and about 15 on Chapter 2, I checked! I just wanna say, though this story may be really bad and all, it'll HOPEFULLY get better as I progress. In fact, I believe it does. The chapters get longer, THAT'S for certain! I'm not very good at writing, but please; Just give the story a chance. And if you could (And think this story is so bad) just give a review saying why you think it's bad or how I could improve. Constructive Critisism is VERY Welcome!
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-Random
Argh! I promised myself I wouldn't get addicted to this show .-. . Oh well! XD
Yeah yeah I know, I have loads of other stories to complete but writer's block is annoying and I got this idea so yeah
Hellooo everyoneeeee III likeeee stretchinggggg wordsssss *Gets stared at* Uhh. *Clears throat* Annnyywayyy... Uhh. So I've been meaning to get back to writing Fanfics and I accidentally found out about the show 'Winx Club' and soon became addicted. I've watched the first 4 seasons and am on to the fifth so this fanfic'll take place between the 4th and 5th though I doubt I'll referance back to them or mention them, and spells from later seasons cause I DUNNO WHICH COMES FROM WHICH. But please don't give me any spoilers. Also I probably won't have Roxy in this cause I DUNNO HOW TO DO ROXY
I have a bad habbit of rambling on. Oops. ANYHOW! Before I get even MORE sidetracked, IT'S DISCLAIMER TIMEEEE!
The Winx Club, and everything inside of the TV Show, belongs to Iginio Straffi (Sorry if I spelt his name wrong), while Everything else belongs to Me.
On with the Story!
OH AND ALSO! If I make anyone OOC, (Or do something that can't happen e.g. Weather...?) it's cause I'm not TOO good with characters I haven't written about before who I didn't make. So yeah Sorry about all that. Oh and when I say 'Griffin' or 'Lucy' in this story, I'm talking about a King called Griffin and a young girl named Lucy, NOT Headmistress Griffin or Lucy the Witch with green hair. Just pointing that out cause I actually named the characters before finding out about those ones
Kay now I'll shut up now
It was a Snowy Winter Morning, the 7th of December, to be exact. The Winx, Bloom, Stella, Flora, Aisha, Musa and Tecna had all been mysteriously called to Alfea and Headmistress Faragonda's office. None of them were sure what for, but they hoped it was nothing bad
"Now girls", began Faragonda, "I recently recieved a letter from the King of Wimshire-"
"'Wimshire'? Where's that?" Bloom asked, curiously
"Nevermind that for now. King Griffin (A/N: I created this character before I found out about Winx Club. So it's NOT Griffin from Cloud Tower. Infact, this Griffin is a boy, just in case you didn't see the bit in the actual Author's Note) has sent me this letter for help. There is a mysterious figure who has been plaguing his Kingdom for Six, nearly Seven years now, stealing food, drink, clothes and even money. The figure is very evasive and has knocked out and injured many guards with they're own two hands, while managing to not even get a scratch while doing so. It is to be considered highly dangerous. The King is worried about his planet's safety, and that the figure may start plaguing other planets" Faragonda explained "So, I'm sending you on a mission there to capture this mysterious figure. You'll leave right away"
"But can't we squeeze in a little shopping beforehand? And let's not forget, I need to pack all my clothes!" Stella objected
"No time for shopping, and you only need to pack the essentials. I'll give you ten minutes, but then you must go" the Headmistress ordered, and the girls nodded
"I wonder who this 'Mysterious Figure' is, and why they're doing what they are" Bloom wondered out loud, as they arrived at Wimshire Castle. It was quite a beautiful planet, though not nearly as beautiful as Lynphea or Domino.
"Well, whoever they are, they're in trouble! The Winx are on the way!" Musa answered, a little bit arrogantly, as they were let into the Castle. The six were led into the throne room by a guard. There in the throne room were three thrones, one for a King in the middle, one for a Queen on the left, and one for a Prince or Princess on the right. Strangely, only the middle one, the King's Throne, had someone in it. The Winx bowed a little, in respect
"King Griffin", Bloom began, "We've been sent here to help you catch this Mysterious Figure, who has been plaguing your planet" she explained. The King smiled
"Ah, so your the ones Faragonda sent. I'm happy to see you here, the situation was getting worse by the day" Griffin explained, standing up and walking towards him. He was a tall man, with ocean blue eyes, blonde hair, on which was a golden crown, his fringe hanging down towards the right (His left). He had a mustache, a small gotee and sideburns which shot out a little to the sides like mini lightning bolts. He wore a dark green jumper ('Sweater' I guess in America) with a dark green cape flowing behind him, brown trousers and brown boot-shoes. Despite being Royalty, he didn't seem to dress very... 'Posh'
"If I may, Your Majesty, where is the Queen?" Flora asked caustiously, and quietly. Griffin's smile faded, and turned into a sad frown
"Queen Rosalina is... No more... Nor has she been for many years..." the King said sadly
"O-Oh... I'm so sorry! I didn't know!" Flora apologized quickly. The King shook his head
"You didn't know, don't worry. But enough about that, please, let me show you to your rooms" he offered, to which the six accepted
Flora and Bloom were now in their room unpacking. Much like when they were students at Alfea, they were split into two people per room (A/N: I THINK Aisha and Stella share anyway), Flora with Bloom, Tecna with Musa andAisha with Stella.
The six hoped to get to sleep, as it was late when they arrived and it was now Midnight. However, things were not going their way
"WINX! COME QUICKLY! THE FIGURE IS AT IT AGAIN!" a guard shouted, just as they were about to go to sleep
"But my Beauty Sleep!" Stella complained
"Nevermind that Stella, let's go!" Musa shouted, and the six followed the guard to a bridge. There, stood on it, was a figure cloaked in a blacky-gray cloak with a thick rim of golden colour instead at the bottom of it (A/N I stink at explaining things, but it's still part the cloak and it's NOT hanging off. Just a colour of it). The figure had a little girl, looking around the age of 12 in it's arms. The girl had dark brown messy hair in two small pigtails hanging from the bottom of her hair, and a purple ragged and torn shirt with a small patch in it and pink torn skirt. The girl was also bare-foot
"She's kidnapping that poor girl!" a guard exclaimed. The figure's hooded cloak hid it's face, but it's mouth was visible, so the Winx could see it was getting worried, as it was being surrounded. Suddenly though, the figure grinned, and it jumped onto the wall of the bridge and down onto the ice, and began running off quickly
"Come on Winx! Let's get her!" Bloom ordered, and the Winx transformed into their Believix, and began to chase her, using their Speedix wings. Some of the guards jumped off the bridge and tried to follow also, but due to how hard they landed and the heaviness of their armour, the ice broke under them. Thankfully though, the guards above helped them out, but they all lost the Winx and the Figure
The hooded figure ran, reaching a dead end in the frozen mini-river. It groaned a little, but began to climb out
"Fire Arrow!" Bloom shouted, firing a sphere of fire at the figure, who JUST managed to dodge it. The figure got out and ran again, this time quicker, but the Winx weren't far behind. The figure ran to an abandoned building and jumped through a broken window
"By my calculations, there's a 74.2% chance this is the Figure's hideout" Tecna calculated
"And the other 26.8% chance?" Stella questiond
"That it's a trap and not actually the figure's hideout" the technology genius answered
"Well, let's find out" Aisha told them. The six then opened the door, and walked in quietly. It was dimly lit with candles, and at the end of the corridor was a figure facing away from them, and towards a painting of a beautiful young woman with short ginger hair a fringe hanging freely over her face and just above her eyes, beautiful leaf green eyes, a red hairband with a big purple ribbon-bow on top and a red v-neck short- sleeved dress with a dark violet bow at the back, the skirt was a purple colour and a yellow rim at the bottom
"Give us the girl!" Aisha shouted, but no answer came. The figure didn't even move. Bloom got an attack ready
"Give us the girl and surrender, and we won't harm you" the redhead ordered
"I can see you waste no time" the figure finally spoke. It's voice sounded like a boy's, but with a sort of girl tinge to it
"Who are you?" Bloom asked
"And what's with the cloak? Dark gray? YUK!" Stella groaned, making the figure chuckle a little. The figure then slowly turned around
"Your new here, aren't you?"
"Yes... How did you know?" Flora asked
"Simple; you've no clue who I am. Well, let me introduce myself" the figure spoke "I am known as the 'Hooded Sparrow'. Don't ask why, the townsfolk came up with it, not me" the Hooded Sparrow said "Though for quickness, you can call me HS. I don't mind which" it added. It's voice had this uneasy calmness to it, and sort of a... Kindness "And you are?" HS asked back
The Winx looked at each other, before Bloom answered "We're the Winx"
The HS looked a little disappointed "Huh, that's it? No first names? Well, each to their own. I suppose I didn't give you mine, so it's just fair"
"But back to the point, you're all here to fight me, aren't you? Well, I'm in the wide open, no way to defend myself. This must be the end!" the HS said dramatically, and sarcastically at the end "Go on then. Fight me". The figure's covered eyes narrowed as it waited. The Winx wasted no time
"Harmonic Attack!" shouted Musa
"Sphere of Fire!" shouted Bloom, as the two fired their attacks at the HS, who just stood there, waiting
CL-CL-CL-CLIFHANGERRRR! What happens next? AM I MAKING THIS SO EASY THAT THE FIGURE GET KNOCKED OUT, OR IS THIS JUST TOO EASY!? FIND OUT: IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!
If this wasn't very well written or I got any characters OOC, I apologize greatly. I tried! But yeah I hope I didn't rush things too much; I TRIEDDD!
Anyhow, remember to Review, to tell me what you think (And if you have any suggestions, feel free to tell me)! And I'll see you all next time!
BYEEEEE!