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Ch. 1
BPOV
I sat in Edward's Volvo shivering out of control. No, it wasn't because I was cold, I was shivering with nerves. Right now I wouldn't mind having one of Jasper's doses of calmness. My fiancé sat besides my, calm as always. We were about to tell my dad, Charlie.
The first thing I noticed when I walked through the door was the smell; it didn't smell very appeasing, which was an understatement. It smelled pungent, like something wasn't cooking right—something was burning.
"Oh no, just great! I told Charlie not to even try after the spaghetti incident!" I groaned. Beside me, Edward chuckled. I guess he had figured it out too. As if on cue, we both turned and walked toward the kitchen.
"Hey kids!" Charlie greeted us brightly, like a little child who knew he was doing something he wasn't suppose to.
"Hello, Chief Swan." Edward answered in a polite voice.
"Dad, what is it this time?" I demanded.
"Nothing. Can't a father cook for her daughter for once?" I stared at him suspiciously.
"Well… um… uh… Dad?" I asked. "Can we talk to you, just for a sec? Charlie looked from me to Edward. Now he was the one that was suddenly suspicious.
"Suuurreee…," he drew out the word making it several syllables long. "Just let me put this chicken in the oven." Charlie held out a plate of black, soggy, breaded mass. I wrinkled my nose, hoping we didn't actually have to eat that. I let Edward lead me to the family room. A minute later Charlie joined us.
"Talk away," he declared.
"Well, uhh…. um," I stuttered. Then, I cleared my throat and tried again, starting lamely, "Edward and I wanted… to, uh, tell you…," I sent a pleading look to Edward. 'Help me!!!!' I mouthed.
"What Bella's trying to tell you, Mr. Swan," he said, taking over my useless attempt, "Is that she and I are engaged."
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