My very First LOK fic yay! Hope you guys enjoy it.
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Let's get this show on the road!
The White Phoenix
It was a late night on Air Temple Island. Everyone was asleep in his or her respective quarters. A strange winged
creature flew up to the window seal tapping on the glass awaked me. As I started to shoo it away I took notice of a
note attached to its collar. I opened the window and extended my arm. The creature walked on to my wrist and
bowed as if to say hello. "Hm, quite the rare specimen, aren't you." I said as I took the note from the creature I took
a good look at it. It was beautiful, breathtaking even. From its beak to its talons, it had light green fur. Its wings
had dark green feathers that glistened in the moon light. Its tail looked similar to that of a lime green fan. I
continued to read the note.
To whom it may concern,
News of the avatar in Republic city has reached the ears of the population of Afris Island. After centuries, the Afrinians have finally reached their second generation of benders. I have sent three of my finest students to assist the avatar anyway they can. They will reach republic city very soon. If you received this message, please pass it on to the authorities of Republic City as soon as possible.
Thank you-
Atormald the ambassador of Afris Island
When I looked up from the note, the creature was gone. "I better inform the other councilmen… First thing in the
morning." I climbed back in bed next to my wife Pema.
I woke with a yawn and a stretch. "Good morning dear." I said to my wife kissing her on the forehead as I got out
of bed and got ready for the day.
"Good morning Tenten. What's the big rush?" I blushed at the pet name my wife gave me.
"I'm going to city hall today I received an important message last night."
"Really? What was it about?"
"Three students are being sent here from Afris Island to assist Korra."
"That's great, I'm sure Korra would really appreciate the help."
"I would love to stay and chat honey but I need to get going."
I walked out the front door and made my way to the ferry. I approached Tarlock as I entered city hall in his tow.
"Tenzin, I received a message last night." Said Tarlock.
"You did? So did I." I replied as I took my usual seat. Tarlock proceeded to stand at his seat.
"Well, I got a message about students being sent from Afris Island to assist avatar Korra."
"I received the same message." I said as I took my usual seat. "We should proceed with caution. This could be one
of Amon's tricks."
"Hmm, actually I don't think this is a trick. How could Amon get his hands on such a majestic bird? I think we should
welcome them warmly! All in favor!" Tarlock raised his right hand.
"Just wait a minute Tarklock, we do not know these people, none of us have heard of this, Afris Island. How do we
kn-"
"Majority rules." Tenzin was so wrapped up in his rant that he didn't notice the other councilmembers raise their
hands.
"Excuse me if I may interrupt but Afri Island is indeed real it's located in the far, far waters southwestern of the
firenation but it is quite far out." Explained the Council page.
The sun was bright and high as the three Afrinians rode on the back of a giant white phoenix. Jamar, Olive and
Ouniano have been flying for days getting to Republic city. They had to land in the Earth Kingdom multiple times to
rest and get food.
"Jaaaamar, how much further?" whined Ouniano. Can't this giant chicken fly any faster?
"Ergh, for the last time Ouni, PhiPhi isn't a chicken, she's a phoenix and yeah she could fly faster but I don't want to
stress her out."
"Ohhhhh were never gonna get there." Ouniano whined as he flopped back in the saddle.
"Ouni would you stop your whining! We should be there by tonight."
"Sigh… I wonder who's gonna greet us." Said Jamar.
Somewhere hidden underground Amon was examining a miniature replica of Republic city, planning his next strike.
He gazed over to the Pro-bending arena when he was interrupted.
"Amon!" said a chi blocker. "I found this on the collar of a foreign bird. It's a note about reinforcements for the
avatar."
"You have done well my brother." Amon took the note from the chi blocker and read it. "So, the avatar has returned
early, looks like we'll have to accelerate our plans. Get more chi blockers and have them discreetly patrol the city. I
want chi blockers on the north, south, east, and west ends of the city. We will catch these 'students' and show
them it was a mistake to oppose me."
It was sunset and Korra was on her way to be sent back home. She stood in silence next to Naga as Tenzin
approached her.
"I have done my best to guide Republic city toward the dream my father had for it, but you are right it has fallen
way out of balance. I thought I should put off your training to up hold his legacy but you are his legacy. You may
stay and train airbending here with me. Republic city needs its avatar once again."
"Yes! Thank you you're the best!" Korra hugged the airbender kids then pulled Tenzin into the group hug.
In the skies above the Afrinian kids have finally made it to Republic city. Jamar and Olive's faces lit up as they saw
Republic city below them. "Ouni, Wake up we're here, we're finally here! Phiphi let everyone know we're here with a
strong crow!" The white phoenix let out a loud majestic crow.
"Hello Republic city we will enjoy serving you!" Olive said as she flipped her long brown hair in the wind.
"What was that?" Said Ikki
"Sounds like a Great White Phoenix but that's impossible here they live very far southwest and they are on the
brink of extinction."
Korra watched as the bird flew past the statue. Korra could see a grappling hook launched at the birds talons.
Kyyyyoooo crowed Phiphi.
"Phiphi, what's wrong?" Jamar said as they were being snatched out of the air.
That's the end of chapter 1 hope you guys enjoyed it.
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