This is my 2nd posed Fanfiction and I would love constructive criticism, or just a kind word or two. This is the first time I have ever successfully (in my opinion) written a one-shot and I'm quite proud of it. Thanks for reading and please tell me what you think of it!
Thank you OG for being my beta for this 'cause my usual beta was really busy with school! Thanks OG!
Disclaimer: Not mine at all. J. K. Rowling owns everything!
WARNING: This is slash or gay paring as in man to man love. If you don't like, don't read!
Letters first from Draco then from Harry in their respective POV's.
Dear My Harry,
They could say anything they wanted to me and it would just take one insult from my mouth to send them running to their mum in tears, but you, your different.
You could tell me anything and I would take it as law. You could say anything, no matter how unbelievable, if it came from your lips I would believe it, without ever feeling the need to check your story. That's why you could break me so easily, and did.
I put my heart in your unknowing hands and you simply squeezed too hard. You didn't know that I had loved you, I had never even left hints, just loved you in silence, you broke me with all of your broken promises and jokes. "Yeah, Malfoy," you would sometimes say, "I'll never let anyone else touch you, never." You meant no one else would love me, because you didn't want me to know love, not because you loved me. But in my head I pretended like you did, that's how you broke me, over years and years of my silent love never being returned.
Even In Death I Will Love You,
Draco Malfoy
Dear My Fallen Angel,
The Day I found you dead, I died. When I found your note next to your body I felt the most intense pain that I have ever felt, pain of the heart. Every word of your letter cut like a salt covered knife plunging deep into my body.
I never knew you felt the way you did. I wish I had. I felt the same way. I lived to hear your laugh, but I didn't get to hear it enough and I know that if I go on without you in my life I won't last long. I need you, and this time in heaven we won't mess up our love, I'm coming for you tonight.
In Death I Will Show My Love To You,
Harry Potter
Thanks for reading!
one-shot, suicide, slash DM/HP. The rating is probably too high for it.