Ok, first of all, this is my first writing here. Tell me what you think! R&R
I'd like to say this is just a story; I'd like to say this is make-believe, but it's not, and it's real. But the worst part is it happened to me.
Last year, I was only 14, still playing in the woods behind my house, fighting make believe warriors, until I turned, striking a tall gloomy figure. It looked down at me, his eyes nothing but dark black holes that suddenly burned bright red with the fury of a thousand men. I ran it was all I could do; I was no match for him even with a little wooden sword. My heart was pounding, I could feel it all throughout me, thud-thudthudtuhduhthudhdhut. I stopped with a cramp in my side and a single thought in my head; is he gone? I turned, searching for the black figure, but it was gone. I stood up, hoping it was just my imagination. But as I turned, heading back to my house, it suddenly materialized right in front of me. It twisted its head, as if resisting an urge, then it spoke.
"You are worthy," its voice was like nails on a chalkboard. "You have the right body for my work and with some provoking, the mind too." With that it rushed towards me, it through my arms up and braced for impact, but there was none, in fact, I felt fine.
Hoping I wouldn't encounter it again, I ran the rest of the way home throwing myself against my bed. It was too much excitement for one day, I think I passed out or something. All I remember was waking up to the smell of bacon and eggs. I flew down the steps, I mean literally flew down the steps. I didn't touch a single step and I was at the table before I knew what was going on. I was feeling on top of the world, like I could do anything.
Oblivously something wasn't right, I had never been so full of energy. I ran all the way to school, 10 miles, till I noticed it was Saterday, which was another 10 miles, in 12.2 minutes. the weirdest part was that i didn't even break a sweat. Something was wrong, but i was too pumped to think about it.But Mom knew; she could tell something was wrong after the first day of this. Somehow, she got me to go to the doctors, as jittery as I was. However, they could find nothing wrong with me, I was 110. Everything was going all right, school started; I got a girlfriend, doing great on the wrestling team, until the accident…
Only first chapter don't worry about it