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Moon- The oldest and alpha of all five girls. Scales have a silvery shimmer

Rose-Second oldest. Wants to be alpha. Scales have a red shimmer

Yara- The "Middle" raptor. Has no want to be alpha. Her scales have a slightly duller but still silvery shimmer

Ria-Second to youngest. Secretly wants to be alpha. Scales have a whitish shimmer.

Fang- youngest. Best friend to Moon. Scales have a dark shimmer

Chapter 1: The Beginning

*Moon's POV*

The silvery velociraptor looked around slowly, taking in her surroundings. She was angry. The two-legged beasts known as humans had taken her and her sisters here one by one. She had been the last of the five of them. To make them remember her, she killed one that was dumb enough to come within her reach. If she could smile, she would have as she remembered the screams of him and his companions as she killed him. She took a long sniff in, figuring out exactly where each of her sisters was. Her youngest sister was the first to dare to approach her.

"Moon you're here!" she called out excitedly. She quickly ran up to her and left a yard in between the two of them. Smart girl.

"Why wouldn't I be?" Moon asked, slightly annoyed.

Fang looked away sheepishly. "Rose said you hated us and left." Moon snarled. That devil, all she wanted was to take over Moon's spot as alpha of the group.

"Well if she ever does that again I will rip her throat out." Moon promised, Her head swiveled slightly to the left as she sensed Moon approaching.

She sneered slightly. "Well look who decided to join the party! What are you doing here Moon? We all thought you were gone." She said throwing a quick look at Fang.

"How dare you question me and what I choose to do!" Moon screeched, throwing herself at her younger sister. Rose dodged and ran off. Moon was angry but was glad to say that the she-devil escaped with a welt across her left flank. She turned to Fang who had backed up into the bushes.

"I'm kind of tired. I'm going back to my nest." She said quickly before running off. Moon turned away and examined her surroundings. There were lots of trees and bushes, which would easily hide her and her sisters in the undergrowth. There was a tiny clearing by the entrance and when she smelt she could smell the flowers and her sister's scents. It was easy to tell which were old and stale and which were fresh. She walked silently into the undergrowth and soon found a nest which she guessed the humans placed in there for her to sleep on. She scoffed and instead found a bush that was tall enough to fall asleep under.

*The Next Morning*

*Fang's POV*

The young raptor awoke to a faint smell of cow. She knew what that meant. The humans would feed them soon. She guessed maybe later that day when the sun was at its peak. She ran into the undergrowth to the small clearing in the middle of the velociraptor enclosure where Yara and Moon were pacing. Yara looked over at Fang as she entered the clearing.

"Can you smell that?" She asked excitedly. "Food is on its way!" Moon looked at her briefly then turned her head upwards and called out loudly to Rose and Ria.

Within minutes the five of them were running around calling out to each other loudly as they smelt the fresh meat coming closer and closer. When the meat was brought they all attacked at once, each immensely enjoying the taste of the bull's blood. The humans watched on. Fang looked up at them and jumped as high as she could at them and freaked them out. She turned away happy to make them respect her kind more. She sped away into the undergrowth, and the bushes brushed against her evil looking scales.