Heyy y'all it's me Sphinx and this is my newest story. I hope u all like it and if you do (or even if you do not) REVIEW pleez im always hoping for suggestions on how to make my story better so tell me what you think in a review By the way INUcarrot1 and wild MAGIC user are also writing this story with me but they aren't here at the moment…so I am writing for them check out some of there stories to they r AWESOME!
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Temars POV
"Sky you take the top, Britzer, you go to the right, and Corin you go to the left, I'll take down below. Come on we can get these guys!" I yelled and they listened. 'Thank you,' I said in my head. We were in the air fighting the Panzeria, a group of warriors that think that they are all that.
"Temar you are not gonna take us down and you know it!" Cantorn told me. Cantorn was my rival. He thinks that he can beat me in a duel, 'He can keep dreaming!' I told myself as I threw a punch at him, it caught him in the stomach. Unfortunately that wasn't enough to take him down. Coming back at me he kicked me in the ribs….hard . I thought I heard one crack. He laughed at my pain, but if he thought that I was gonna let him win for a lousy kick he should think again! I have both hatred and hunger for revenge on my side. I came at him with a series of hard punches all hitting him directly in the face. Then I shot up and kicked him in the head, but that was very short lived because I heard Corin scream. I shot up to her and saw that she was trying to take on 4 people at once. I went to two of them and punched them both. They were weak so they started to fall and I saw that Corin was bleeding a lot from her leg. Sky was holding her own against a woman warrior; Britzer was pounding on Zelu her number one enemy, like he was a punching bag.
"Owww!!!" I screamed as Cantorn punched me in the back of the head. I turned and gave him a taste of his own medicine except for the point that I punch a whole lot harder then he does. Finally after about an hour of fighting him and his entire troop left.
"Well that was intense" Sky told everyone, stating the obvious, as usual, as we flew towards our home in the woods. As we flew I saw that Corin had a large cut on her leg but she would be fine. Sky had bruises all over her body, nothing she couldn't handle. Britzer looked real beat up in all different ways but she was holding her wrist tight so im just guessing that she hurt that the worst. Me, well I am pretty sure that I broke a rib and have a lot of bruises, not to mention that I have a huge burn on the back of my head. Cantorn has a power called fire knuckles. What happens is when he goes to punch someone his knuckles catch fire, very unfortunate for me seeing that he is always punching me whenever we are in fights.
Okay there are four of us, and we are all VERY different. First is Corin. Corin is a person that most of the humans would just shake their heads and say "wow" to. We will get into that later. One thing that you should know about Corin is that despite her age, she is a great fighter, one of the best in the group. No matter what the comment she always has an awesome come back that knocks them off their feet, sometimes literally. Her favorite music is rock and country, all the way. The thing with Corin is that the majority of the time you can ask her something like "What is for dinner?" and end up on the subject of Sponge Bob. She is also know as the queen of subject changing.
Next up is Brisinger, or Britzer as we call her. She is our expressionful member of the quartet. People call her things like emo, and goth and mostly punk, but none of them are fully true, if true at all. She is also one of the best fighters in the group because she is fierce, very fierce! When she punches you, you had better hope that a blast of fire doesn't follow it, Because Britzer when she is mad whatever she torches catches fire, and if she wants it to that is. One other thing about Britzer is that NEVER ask her to write a paper, unless you would like to correct all of her mistakes in spelling, she couldn't spell the words save me if her life depended on it! Also Britzer has a minor (cough cough major) obsession with hot guys, when she sees a hot guy, which is the subject of her discussion for the rest of the day.
Sky, is the ONLY one who can cook something other then cereal, I'm not even sure if some of us can cook that. Sky is the second oldest, along with her twin (NOT identical not even close!) at 14. She is probably the best fighter in the group. Good cooker great fighter, well what else could someone in the right mind ask for? Well what about she can crack a good joke…and is very sarcastic but not nearly as sarcastic as Britzer and me… Sky is really not very cooperative; she will not do what I ask, no matter what I bribe her with… One of Sky's best qualities is her amazingly good looks. I mean how many people do YOU know that have a perfect body, beautiful hair and eyes that sparkle even when she fights? Huh did not think you knew anyone!
Err; I guess it is time to describe myself. Ok well I'm not exactly the best of all and I don't really want to sound like that either. So here goes nothing', I have pretty dark blondish brown hair, nothing very special, it is shoulder length. I have green eyes, that some say sparkle in the light, (I don't believe them). Britzer is always sating that boys are 'checking me out' and talking about how good I look, but I really don't think that it is possible for people to talk about how good I look because I don't look good. Well I'm the leader of all of us, which is a challenge. Well im not really the 'leader' because im positive that everyone would be fine if I just decided to fly away one day. I am a really good fighter, with sword and fist. Corin is always telling me that I am 'to calm', which I really don't get. I am calm in some of the worst situations though, but it is for everyone's own good I mean SOMEONE has to be calm! Corin also is always telling me that I am stubborn, and the truth is I AM stubborn and I am proud of it!
That's all we will update soon, and now just review pleez! By the way thanx to wild MAGIC user there aren't quite as many mistakes as there would have been…and thanx to INUcarrot1 we one, had entertainment during the whole writing time and really good ideas! So pleez review byee for now!