A review helped me recognize a mistake in the prologue, thanks to "ds" for helping me.
Prologue
"You have summoned me."
"Summoned? So it worked…" Maya trailed off, her soft voice bouncing off the walls. The demon chuckled. "Why have you called me here?" Its face was half covered in shadows, orange eyes twinkling with hunger. Maya didn't see any of this though, she couldn't. After all, she was blind.
She looked up in the general direction of his voice, blinking her owlish gray eyes. "I propose a contract." "Oh? And what would you like little lady?" The demon questioned, fingers ghosting over her face seductively. "Sight? Power? Wealth? Maybe all of the above?"
"Quite the opposite really," She replied, unfazed by his touch. "I want you to be my friend." He stopped for a moment, surprised. Regaining his composure, the demon waited for more of an answer. Maya took a breath and continued. "I'd like you to befriend me of your own will though." The demon chuckled, this was an interesting one. She would most likely provide him lots of amusement.
"Is that it?" He questioned, tilting his head to the side. Maya nodded and said with finality "That's it." "To complete the contract, you will need to give me a name." The demon said in a business like manner. "A name? Hmm…How about Zachery Moreau?" It was quiet, until a voice broke the silence between them. "It is done." A pain shot up Maya's spine, and it felt like something was burning into her. The intense pain lasted for about a minute and then the room went dark.
